#2 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Shifted to new thread- Link on Pg 1) - Page 52

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Finally sab kuch theek hogaya
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kya baat kya baat
tumhari shayri aur kahani dil chu jati hai yaar.
I dont regret getting frustrated over the confusion in initial chapters.
because that only increased my curiousity to know the climax and I m happy with what I m reading.
Mindblowing job.

P.s I guess this is my first comment on this story full of appreciation without a confusion or critics. Kaan pakad ke sorry.

P.s.s I still don't know ur name. P
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was fabulous di. finally ishita understand her real love. glad that aishwarya finally ajajy ke pass hi gayi

lots of hugs and love you for this update. plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mere comment par I want a reply 😛

Okk not givin u a big one...
Yeh stry end nahi ho sakti... 😭 😭

I feel jealous of Ishita...
I mean kya koyi kabhi kissi se bhi itna pyaar kar sakta hai???

The updt was beautiful,superb as alwaz...
Updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
kya baat kya baat kyya baat
nice one
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Posted: 10 years ago
:((((( ajnabi ne rula hi dia.

Can I volunteer for Anamika's place?? :p
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Divancraze

UnRes

Finally that moment has come..!!!!
THE CONFRONTATION
I loved Ishita's confession 😳
She will not leave him easily...
I'm starting to feel bad for Ajnabi now...


Thanks...

I too am feeling bad for Ajnabi...but ab kisi ka dil to tootna hi hai na...

Agar Raman ka dil toota tho Char Kadam k readers ka dil b toot jayega...

Isiliye ab Ajnabi ka 💔
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Res
Most awaited part is finally up.
Unres
Loved the confrontation.


Sacchi? Thenku thenku in toshi style

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

ishita was so much Jhansi ki rani in this update.😆
Iss line me bahot dum tha - Par ek bar kaan khol kar sun lijiye Mr. Raman Kumar Bhalla, aap chahe khud ko kitna bhi bura sabith kar do, mai apko itni asani se chod kar janewali nahi hun. Samjhe na aap?"


Ab JKR ko kabhi na kabhi to form me ana hi tha na!

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad


Feeling sad for ajnabi now 😔.
Continue soon dear
Ab hamare liye toh aap hi bhagwan ho,yeh sab kya ho raha hai jaan ne ke liye aapke updates zaroori hai.Aapki chaar kadam ki aakri panno ko aap hi ko bharna hai voh bhi jaldi
Can't wait for more


Yaar itna bhi mat chadao mujhe please...

I am seriously going to miss such lovely cmnts wen this story ends😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Harshita.

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So finally the much awaited confrontation... Before reviewing the update...let me say...Superbb Jo done by ypu dear...
U have very well managed to keep it Realistic which is very difficult task n much needed...
Comingg to the update...
Confrontation or Confession or Both??😉
"When a leaf falls who should be blamed? The wind that blows it away? The tree that lets it fall? Or the leaf itself that gets tired of holding on?
So who should be blamed for the situation in which three of them are? Ajnabi who is madly n truly in love with his Anamika and desires to be with her? Raman who falls in love at first sight with an unknown girl , with time his love only increases for her nd that too such an extent that he's ready to forego his love for the love of his happiness? Or Ishita who inspite of hating strangers falls in love with a guy about whom she knows nothing except his fake name...and when she decides to move on with her future...her past appears before her??...
I don't think anyone of them is at fault!!!...Its all pure Destiny...somethings are destined to be happen...
Meeting of Ishita n Viren...chaar kadams...telling their fake names Ajnabi n Anamika to each other...Raman falling for Anamika at the same time... Later Ishita-Raman alliance...Meeting of Raman with Ajnabi...
Everything was planned nd kisi ek ka dil toh tootna hi tha na...here its of Ajnabi/Viren...
But I gues this heart break wont be that difficult for him if he truly loves Ishita because...When u truly loves someone... All u want is happiness of ur love even if that is with someone else... He may have to find solace in the fact that his love has got her love...

Voh chahat hai meri...voh mohabbat hai meri...
Voh ibadat hai meri...voh saanson mein hai meri...
Toh kya hua jo voh amanat hai kisi aur ki...
Taqdir mein na sahi par voh dil ki har dhadkan mein hai meri...


I just love few dialogues...

"Apko kya laga? Aap writer ho to sabki zindagiyon ki kahaniyan aap khud likhoge?"
At this line, I felt like hugging Ishita...😳

He had come out of his shock and was now smiling at me.

That smile on his face made me even more furious.

I realised it was my confession that I would not leave him at any cost what made him smile.

"Has kya rahe ho? Aapko chod kar nahi jaungi iska matlab ye nahi ke aap mahan ho ya phir aap mujhe pasand ho. I just hate you"

I don't think any confession can be better than this...
OMG...Raman is such a cutie...his shock turned to smile...
That sense of belongingness n her right over HER Raman in her voice is something for which u deserve a tyt hug from me@Manny...😉
"Tumne sahi kaha tha. Maine sach me bahut der kar di"
Aww...i do symphathasize with u Dude but how dare u interrupt IshRa moment ???😡

LUV U MANNY...
UPDATE SOON...


I am just floored by the quotes u use in ur review...

They perfectly fit into the story...

I wish I cud use all of them in the story...

But I am afraid if I do that this night of confrontation will never end...

Waise hi is ek rath ne 25 chaps occupy kar liye hain😆


Now cmng to ur favr8 dialogues of the update..

Honestly they r my favr8s too...

Same pinch☺️

Thnk u fr the longgg cmnt...

Aise hi longgg cmnts likhte rehna aur mujhe 3rd thread pe pahuncha dena...

Theek hai na Hersheys? Ya tumhe Farhan bulaoon like neha suggested?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar tum kya ho?????
I mean kaise likh deti ho????
ek ek dialogue of confrontation was making evry bit of sense
How come u write so amazingly? ????
Ishita ka tappad raman ka reactions ajnabi ka mind thought evrythng is so apt
Toh ajnabi ka dil toot gaya ab
Feeling bad for him
Par kisi na kisika dil toh tootna tha

I mean out of sky suddenly he comes n expects her to break marriage n come with him
Koi bhi ladki yeh nahi karega agar use raman jaisa pati milega
Mai toh hargis nahi
So ishita is correct for me
Happy tat ramans heart dint break
Apart frm it I hav a suggestion
Aap na is poori story ko ek novel jaisa likh dena
Vahi char kadam ab poori desh padegi
Ur evry character evry line n ur style of ending update with tat tagline so unique toh pakka hit toh hogi
I m nt at all exaggerating
Its my genuine heart feeling
Please give it a thought
Sry for late rply

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