Ishra FF Destiny- A cruel game updated chp 17- I just love you- pg 36 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice onee...and nice that raman in full on mode to bring back memories of ishita ...ruhi is chooo sweet...hope soon she remembers them...
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lovely update...waiting for holi romance
continue soon...
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Beautiful update...
Awesome...👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update...
all the best for ur exam
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry, for the delay. Had exams. Just one is left. After that I'll be giving frequent updates. Anyways, here is chapter 11.

Chapter 11: The truths

Ishita came home the night, changed and went to the balcony for fresh air. She was feeling new as if the burden of all these years and sorrow in her life had gone.

Flashback:

After coming back from the restaurant she saw that some guests had come to their home. She went and there was Subbu. He had come to check on Vandu Akka who was in Iyer house for some time. And to her surprise she didn't feel any pain, it made no difference to her. Infact, she went to him and spoke so calmly to him. She was feeling no connection to him expect that of a friend.

Flashback ends

She turned the other side and was meet with the deep eyes which haunted her from when she saw them. His stare was so intense. When he stared at her like that, she felt open, as if he could read her every thought. I couldn't take my eyes off his eyes. She searched for answers in those eyes which held so much of love and pain. She felt like taking all his pain. She wanted to make him feel happy. She wanted to erase the frown on his face. It was as if he was searching for something in her eyes, just like she was, maybe love. His stare was giving a feel of peace yet a feel of restlessness to know if what was in his eyes was the truth, because she could see love in them or was it just her imagination and she hoped for love for her from him.

He started walking closer to the end of his balcony and my feet carried me towards the end of my balcony to be as close as we could. We were so close. I could feel his deep breath on my face. His hand caressed my face and it felt heavens. I never knew that a single touch could do this to me. I had read it only in novels but today I could feel it, even more than the novels. He had such a effect on me that just one look towards him and I would lose all my senses. Hearing his name only would make me weak. My heart thumped out loud and I was afraid that he could hear it. He slowly yet beautifully tucked behind a strand of her falling on her face. How could someone do such a simple thing so beautifully? It was giving her weird sensations which even Subbu couldn't give. Her stomach was doing somersaults. And she didn't know when her hand went to his face and slowly felt it. How nice it felt! It felt perfect. For the first time in her life she wished for the time to stop. It was a moment she couldn't put into words but just feel it. She took in the most beautiful sight of the world. He was so handsome yet so cute. It was a perfect balance. She slowly moved her eyes down to his lips. Urghh! What couldn't she do for these so very kissable lips! She didn't what would happen next. She didn't know if he would even accept her. But this moment she gave in to her heart and placed her lips on his. It was a slow one filled with passion savouring the moment. Soon Raman took the lead and explored her mouth. Ishita again took the lead and started exploring his mouth. And she got all her answers. She remembered every moment of the past few years- everything. They parted away when they were out of breath.

I- I love you

R- I love you too

And they hugged each other tightly trying to never ever let go of each other and stay in their arms forever. Tears were flowing down Raman's cheek when Ishita started crying holding Raman's collar.

I- Don't leave me ever. I'll die without you this time. How could I not remember you? How did I forget you, us?

She was going telling. He slowly wiped her tears and calmed her down.

R-Shhh. I'll never leave you even if you want me to. I promise. You didn't forget me. Your heart knew me.

Ishita was about to tell why Ishita had left him when he said,

R-I know everything. Why you left me? I am a fool to believe you left you. Why do you love me so much? I'll never ever leave you and next time never ever pull this kind of stunt. Ok.

She just nodded her head. He hugged her and finally the truths were out. This time no one can separate them. They would fight everything together and never leave each others hands.

This is how Subbu found them when he entered Ishita's room. He was shocked that Ishita could move on. No this is not how he wanted her to be. She had to cry for him, love him forever and that should give her pain. He fisted his hands and moved out with a plan in his mind.

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Precap: Ishraru moments, Holi

Hey guyss how was the update? Please give me your feedback.

Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love it... so she finally remembers all...but that dang Subbu!😡 Oh well, i'm sure he's no match for RKB, can't wait to see Raman bring him down, looking forward to ISHRARU cuteness ad ISHRA sweetness!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its such a huge coincidence that just today I was watching the 4th epi ... in which Subbhu comes over for Shravu's thread ceremony.. It's brilliant how you used his expressions to weave an entire story!! Excellent job dear .. Very well done .. Brilliant 👏 Spot on 😛
Edited by umeirah02 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

Love it... so she finally remembers all...but that dang Subbu!😡 Oh well, i'm sure he's no match for RKB, can't wait to see Raman bring him down, looking forward to ISHRARU cuteness ad ISHRA sweetness!😛


Thanks
Happy that you liked it😊
True Subbu is nothing infront of RKB 😆
But god knows what may happen
depends on the writer na😉
I actually want to concentrate on Ruhi and Ishita- cause I couldn't give it before
And the custody track right now in YHM that makes me all more emotional😭
And our Ruhi rocks😊
Keep reading
Will update soon

Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: umeirah02

Its such a huge coincidence that just today I was watching the 4th epi ... in which Subbhu comes over for Shravu's thread ceremony.. It's brilliant how you used his expressions to weave an entire story!! Excellent job dear .. Very well done .. Brilliant 👏 Spot on 😛


Thanks
Nice coincidence😆
Hey even in that Ishita says that Raman is in her life right
Well credit goes to RKB and his expressions😉
Keep Reading
Will update soon
Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
loved it thank u for the update much..
that subbu tho grrr
waiting for ur next update
thx for the pm

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