Ishra FF Destiny- A cruel game updated chp 17- I just love you- pg 36 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sush_avina

loved it thank u for the update much..

that subbu tho grrr
waiting for ur next update
thx for the pm


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Uff. How I wish Subbu wasn't there.
But. kya kare. Writer may depend hota hai na😉
Keep reading
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Loved it.
Finally Ishu remembered. This Subbu interferes in everything...
Really looking forward for the IshRaRu moments
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
superb update
loved their moment
hate subbu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Loved it.

Finally Ishu remembered. This Subbu interferes in everything...
Really looking forward for the IshRaRu moments


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Yup interferes in everything, guess does not have work or no one is ready to give😆
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: swathin

superb update
loved their moment
hate subbu


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Me too hate subbu😡 but RKB is there na😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Hey accept my buddy request na.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
awesome update
did i miss any part didnt remember so ill read all parts once again
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for your support. Here is chapter 11. Hope you'll like it.

Chapter 12: Peace

Mihika had told Vandu Akka about Ishita and Raman and they were going to Ishita for a sister's talk and that's when they saw Subbu coming out of Ishita's room fuming in anger. They wondered why though they enjoyed his face and giggled infuriating him all the more. They went to Ishita's room.

And that's when they saw Ishita in arms of Raman and they became happy for happiness finally entering into Ishita's life. They cleared their throats bringing them out of their beautiful world of love.

Mi- So, Kya horaha hai?

R-Nothing. Bas tumhare akka ka akal finally agayi jo kabhi tha nahi- by default.

I-Raman.Kuch bhi.

R-Right.Kuch bhi.Tumhare pass abhi akal jo nahi aaya hai.

V-So Ishu got your memory back?

I-Yup

M-jaaye Ishu akka mein aapse baat taak nahi karungi.

I-kyu?Ab meine kya kiya?

R-tum to kuch mat karo wahi better hai. Pagal ho phir sabko pagal bana dogi.

I-Ramannn

I-Ishitaaa

I-Aap kabhi nahi badloge. Ravan Kumar kahike

R-Aur badlu bhi kyu jab mujhe meri JKR sambhalegi. They came closer and he took her hands in his.

Mihika and Vandu left from there allowing them to relish their moments of finding back their love.

R-Don't ever leave me alone.

I-I'll never leave you cause no matter what happens my heart is with you. So wherever I go and before she could complete the sentence his hand was on her mouth.

R-And I'll not let you go anywhere

When it's black,
Take a little time to hold yourself,
Take a little time to feel around,
Before it's gone,

You won't let go,
But you still keep on falling down,
Remember how you saved me now,
From all of my wrongs yeah,

If there's love just feel it,
If there's life we'll see it,
This is no time to be alone, alone, yeah,
I, wont let you go,

Tears were falling down from each other's cheek.

Say those words,
Say those words like there's nothing else,
Close your eyes and you might believe,
That there is some way out yeah,

Open up,
Open up your heart to me now,
Let it all come pouring out,
There's nothing I can't take,

If there's love just feel it,
And if there's life we'll see it,
This ain't no time to be alone, alone, yeah
I, won't let you go,

They felt happy, happy that all hurdles were over. Their eyes told each other how much they loved each other.

If your sky is falling,
Just take my hand and hold it,
You don't have to be alone, alone, yeah,
I, won't let you go,

And if you feel the fading of the light,
And you're too weak to carry on the fight,
And all your friends that you count on have disappeared,
I'll be here, not gone, forever, holding on, Oh,

If there's love just feel it,
And if there's life we'll see it,
This ain't no time to be alone, alone, yeah,
I, wont let you go,

If your sky is falling,
Just take my hand and hold it,
You don't have to be alone, alone, yeah,
I won't let you go,

I won't let you go, I won't let, x 2,
I won't let you go x 2

They wiped each other's tears and made silent promises that they won't leave each other no matter what. No matter what they'll fight together but won't leave each other's hands.

Here is the song link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HieNpwB3Eac

They once again hugged each other removing each other's insecurities and after what felt like eternity they broke apart but they didn't break their eye lock.

Ishita cupped Raman's cheek and their eyes spoke the unsaid words.

Raman's call brought them out of their trance. After the call ended,

I-Raman Ruhi kaha hai?

R-vo abhi so rahi hai.

I-Accha. Mein sara aavu kya ab? Sab kya sochenge.

R-boldo ki jab Ruhi ko leke aaya tha tab tumhara mobile ruhi legayi kelte kelte.

I-hmm.yeh teek hai.

She rushed to see Ruhi- her daughter, how was she? How much she had faced. how much she should have faced? Will she forgive her?

She gave the same excuse and went to see Ruhi.

She slowly lied down beside Ruhi and ran her hands through her hair and she knew how much she had missed her. She still couldn't understand how she left Ruhi. Every morning was a bad morning for her cause Ruhi wasn't there, she couldn't get Ruhi ready. She missed waking her up, making her have food, helping her in homework- everything. But she felt, going away would help them because she thought Raman would move on and Ruhi would eventually get a new mother. She took her in her arms and held her not to let go her. She could do anything for Ruhi. She gave her a new life, made her complete. She was her first love. The moment she saw her she fell in love with this cute little girl. How could she leave her and go? She would never leave her for a moment. And slowly she fell asleep with her daughter.

Raman went to Ruhi's room. Toshiji saw this and asked everyone to retire to their rooms as Raman would be. Mihika knew her Akka was there and managed that Akka had gone to clinic.

The sight what Raman saw warmed his heart- his two angels in whom his life resided were sleeping. How he had missed this sight? He slowly went to the other side of bed and kept his hand on Ishita's which was on Ruhi's and slowly Ishita interlinked his hand with hers in her sleep.

For the first time in those six years the three of them had a peaceful sleep.

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Precap: Off to Chennai

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Thanks for your support. Here is chapter 13. Hope you'll like it.

Sorry, no. of posts crossed so couldn't make it another post

Chapter 13: Finding back our lost happiness

Ishita woke up to the best morning she ever had in those six years. The father-daughter duo was sleeping so cutely. She didn't know sleeping also could ever be this cute. She slowly caressed Ruhi's face and in a small whisper said,

I-Ishima loves you

She wanted to kiss her, but thought it would disturb her. She slowly saw her Ravan Kumar. She saw how their hands were interlinked and Ruhi's was under them. She smiled at it and slowly ran her hands in Raman's hair and slowly the frown on Raman's face turned into a sexy dimpled smile for which anyone could fall.

She slowly got up to go when she felt a tug on her hand. She turned to see Raman with a smirk on his face and before she could understand anything she was pulled and she fell on him, their faces were too close if not for Ruhi was between them. He slowly opened his eyes to see the face which could brighten up his day and slowly pushed back the hair falling on her face. He could see the effect he had on her and smirked, but his condition was no less. He cupped her face and kissed her forehead and she closed her eyes in acceptance and felt the most beautiful feeling in the world which she couldn't describe.

She slowly opened her eyes and got up.

I-Aap so nahi rahete

R-Old habits die hard.

I-mai jaati hu varna sab utjayenge. Shukar hein aapka ghar he. Itna subah subah koyi bahar nahi aata hai saying so she immediately went out and slowly went in her house with no one noticing.

It was Raman's habit to act as if sleeping while he was awake. Ishita soon took a bath and wore a blue and green suit.

I-Amman mein abhi ati hu

A-Kaha ja rahi hein

I-Bas kuch Ruhi se baath karke aati hu.

Amma was happy with their bonding and Ishita becoming happy again and immediately said yes.

Ishita went there.

I-Aunty mein kya sara Ruhi ko mil sakti hu?

T-saror puttar. Vo andar hai.

I-Teek hai aunty

She went to see her Ravan and Ru still sleeping with Ru on top of Raman.

I-Ruhi beta utiye na.

Ruhi immediately got up listening to her Ishima's voice.

R- Hi Ishima oops Ishita aunty she said by mistake

I-kyu Ishima nahi bulaogi mujhe

R-Kya mein aapko ese bulasakti hu? Papa ne phir mana kyu kiya? Aapko sabkuch yaad aagaya?

Ishita smiled at her little daughter's doubts and came and sat beside Ruhi making Ruhi sit on her lap.

I-mein meri Ru ko kaise bhul sakti hu.

Ruhi hugged Ishita and Ishita hugged her back tightly, both were crying.

R-Ishima kyu chodke chaligya aap mujhe? Aapko pata hai mein kitna royi par aap kyu nahi aaye? Aap ne to promise kiya tha ki aap mujhe kabhi nehi chodegi phir kyu chodi. Aap phirse mujhe chodenge kya?

Ishita's heart pained seeing her little daughter's suffering. How much she should have suffered because of her mistake? How could god give so much pain to such a cute child? She pulled away from the hug.

I-sorry, ru. Mein aapko kabhi nahi chod sakti hu bas mujhe todha health problem hogyi thi. Aur mein dekho mein vapas aagyi apne Ru keliye. Mein phirse aap ko kabhi nehi chodungi.

R-mein aapse baat nahi karungi.

I-sorry Ru. She held her ears and asked her sorry.

R-To aapko ek promise karna hoga.

I-teek hai.

R-Aapko kabhi bi mujhe chodke nahi jana hai.

I-Promise

R-Ruhi Promise

I-Ruhi Promise.

Raman's tears welled up seeing them. He soon went near them. Both Raman and Ishita kissed Ruhi on cheek and together said- We love you Ruhi.

R-Aur ha mujhe har Sunday bhar ghumne jaana hai. Aur khana khane bhar le jana hai. Movies dikhne hai. Aur is Sunday hum poora din bhar ghumenge- pehle movie- mera favourite- Varun vala, phir shopping, phir restaurant-Chinese.

I-teek hai promise. And she again took her in a hug and said- Ishima loves you a lot. Chalo. Chalo. Ruhi. Late horaha.C'mon get ready. She got Ruhi ready and asked Bhallas if she could drop her. They didn't have any objection. They went in Raman's car with Ishita in the front seat and Ruhi on her lap. Raman dropped her to clinic. It was Ruhi's last day in school. Again Ishraru came back home in the same way.

Toshiji to Amma- oye tub hi vahi soch rahi hai jo mein soch rahi hu. Raman aur Ishita ki Jodi bohut acchi hai na.

Am- pehli baar tune kuch sahi kahi he.

To-mein to humesha hi right hu. Ek bhar mihir aur mihika ki shaadi hojaye- in dono se baat karlete hai.

Evening:

Everyone had assembled in Bhalla's house.

Mr. Bhalla- tune bas arrange karli hai kya.

Raman- ha papa kal subha 10 bhaje niklegi. Phir vahase Chennai tak 1 week ka trip hoga aur todhe acche places ghumenge aur Saturday reach honge hum Chennai.

Everyone were going to Chennai for mimi marriage- Punjabi and tamil rituals and Tamil wedding. Raman had promised Ruhi that next Sunday they would go out. She was adamant but immediately agreed when he said they were going to Chennai and would visit places while going to Chennai.

All the elders retired- Vandu, Bala, mimi, Raman were there.

Note:[ Raman was the only child of Bhallas. Romi, Simmi and Rinki were cousins]

All sat in a circle

R- so kya game khele.

Va-Cards

Mi-boring akka.Truth or dare khelte hai na.

B-Fine. Start.

They turn the bottle, it lands on Raman.

Raman-Truth or dare

Mihir- truth

Raman-Ok. Fine. Who was your first crush? Describe her. How long was it?

Mihir-mera murder karvana chahte ho kya bhai.

Raman-mujhe ye nahi pata but don't you lie because I know who it is.

Mihir- take it as dare.

Ba-no Mihir once told is told.

M-Fine. Uska naam tha sonali. Mein jab college mein tha. Choti aake,Patli thi, lambhi baal thi. 6 mahine follow kiya tha par kabhi baat tak nahi ki. Phir vo dusri college chali gayi.

Mihika-Vaha bhi follow karna chahiye tha. Mere peeche kyu aaye

M-Mihku dat was all before ra. Jabse tum aayi ho.

Mi- Raman jiju khel start kare.

R-Sure.

The bottle was turned. It landed on Raman.

R-Dare

Mihika- Propose Mihir. Full SRK style

Raman-Kya?

Mihika- common Jiju. Varna aap haar gaye.

R-Raman Bhalla kabhi nahi hartha

Mihir-Mihika bala jiju karlenge

Mihika-Chup chap jaona. Sochlo ki tumhari Sonali prpose kara rahi he.

Mihir left with no option went.

Raman sat on his legs, closed his eyes- jab se tum aaye ho meri zindagii badal gayi. Mein vo khushiya dekhne laga jo kabhi nahi dekha tha. Hasne laga hu. Mera dil to hamesha tha par jabse tum aayi nahi aaya vo dadkhna seek gya, jeena aagaya. Pehli baar samay ko rukao laga. Hamesha movie mein jab bhi do ladka ladki ko pyaar hogayi to music daal the te. Kabhi ye nahi jana tha ki jab tum aaogi nahi aaoge tho ki music bhajegi par bhaji mere dil mein. Mein tumhare bina ji nahi sakta hu. I love u.

And opened his eyes. Everyone were shocked.

Mihika-Jiju sach mein aap itne ease se. Kya aap

And everyone started laughing.

Va-Raman tum bhi na and started laughing.

R-are yaar kya sab itna has rahe ho.

Mihika- aap itna accha propose karthe to, hum kya bolo.

R-bas karo yaar. Mein koyi esa vesa nahi hu bas Ishita ko imagine karaha tha. Ishita smiles at him.

Mihika-jiju this is cheating

Raman-kya cheating. Tumne esa koyi rule nahi raka thana. Ab bottle ghumao.

It lands on Mihika.(The same French kiss one where she completes by taking a mirrior)

Next it lands on Ishita.

I-Truth

Bala- The most embrassing moment of yours with Raman.

I-Jijuuu

Bala-Common tell.

She thinks for a while and suddenly says NAHIII.

B-kya nahi you need to tell it now.

I-Fine. Mera anesthesia vala incident.

Everyone understood except mihir. Mihika explained him.

Soon, everyone returned to their rooms. Ishita was the last one to go out, Raman was also in the hall. He pulled her and pinned her to the door.

I-Raman jaane do na.

R-Nahi. Itne din baad romance karneko time mila hai. Ab nahi.

I-Raman sab wait kara rahe

R-Teekhe ek kiss do.

She gives a kiss on his cheek, he asks on another cheek- she gives him one more.

She was about to leave when he pulled back and gave her a peck on her lips. She went back later.

The night passed away and the two souls were finally happy at finally finding back their lost happiness

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Precap: Off to Chennai

Hey guyss how was the update? Please give me your feedback.It encourages me a lot.

Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Wow...its awesome...
Loved raman interlinking his hands with ishru...
Prfct picture...
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Good one ...
Why are they going to Chennai ????
Well we'll know about it in next part.
So,update soon

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