Ishra FF Destiny- A cruel game updated chp 17- I just love you- pg 36 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for your support here is chapter 8.

Chapter 8

Raman had gone to pickup Ruhi.

Soon they came to the Bhalla house. Only both of them were there.

R-Ruhi beta mere paas aapke liye ek surprise hai

Ru-Sacchi papa. Kya?

R-aapko pata hai Ishima vapas aagayi papa.

Ru-Aap sach bol rahe hona papa ab unka tabiyat teek hogaya.

R-ha beta par unko na thoda health problem hai isilye vo aapko ya mujhe ko recognise nahi karegi.

Ru-Kyu Papa?Ishima mujhse pyaar karti hai na.

R-ha beta, vo aapko bahut pyar karti he, but ab unka tabiyat kharab hai, par vo aapse baat karegi. Aap unhe nahi bateyeng ki aap koun hai.Dere Dere unko yaad ajayega. To phirse aap unhe ishima bulasakte he. Vo na idar hi rehti, us samne vale gharme aur unki behen na mihir chahu se shaadi kar rahe he to hum relatives bu banjayenge aur jab unhe sab yaad ajyaga vo humare paas aajeyegi. Ok.

Ru-ha papa. Ishima ko zaroor yaad ayega.

R-ok ab jaake ready ho jaye to hum Ishima ko visit karne jaayenge aur yaad rakhna tumhe unhe Ishita aunty bulana hoga.

Ru-Ok papa.

R- Now that's like my good girl. He kisses her.

He gets Ruhi ready and they go to the hospital.

In the hospital:

Mihika(m) and Mihir(M):

m-dekho mihir I am sure they met

M- Yeah that's for pucca, but what to do Ishita di's memory loss?

m- So what? Raman bhai no from now I'll call jiju loves her right so put them together, I mean look at him how he broke down.

M-ok done. We'll do something.

Raman, Ruhi came in. As soon as they came in Ruhi jumped to Ishita's arms. Everyone were shocked because Ruhi didn't know her but they thought she was just mingling with her but Mimi knew it.

Ru(r)-Hi ishim oops Ishita aunty. mera naam ruhi hai.

I-hi beta. Aap kaha the ab tak?

r-mein school trip gayi thi.

I-accha. So how was it?

r-awesome. Hum ne kitna maaza kiya paata hai aapko.

I-kya kya kiya aapne.

And ruhi went on telling her stories. She was really enjoying time with her Ishima.

Ishita felt a strange motherly feeling. She didn't know when tears started rolling down because she could never become a mother.

Mrs. Bhalla could see a mother in Ishita. She truly liked Ishita from the start but just pretended to not like her and after years had she seen her son smiling. She could see a perfect wife, mother and daughter-in-law in her. She decided to speak to Amma later.

Amma was also in the same thought. She had seen Ishu laugh after a long time and the way she bonded with Ruhi. She decided to speak to Toshi later.

Soon nurse came in and said-itne log accha nahi hai sirf ek ya do reh sakte he.

Before anyone could say anything Ruhi said- mein and so even Raman stayed. Only the three were there.

I-aapki wife Mr.Bhalla?

R-I am not married. He saw confusion on her face and said how Shagun cheated him.

I-I am sorry.

R-Its ok. You guys speak I'll come.

Ruhi and Ishita bonded really well. Ishita felt happy.

Raman went to the doctor.

R-how can we bring her memory back?

D- dekhiye you can't pressurise her to remember but you can just replay things what you want her to remember and she can remember and slowly her memory may come back.

He asked about the discharge. Doctor said tomorrow morning.

***

Chapter 9(below)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 9: An Unknown Feeling

After Ishita comes back.

Next day:

Ishita was feeling restless, so she decided to go to clinic. Raman was also going for work. Mihika saw the chance and pushed Ishita pretending it to be a mistake so that she falls in Raman's arms.

She saw his eyes and was mesmerised at the intensity they held. His hand on her bare waist was sending shivers down her spine. She had her hand on his chest for support and all she could think was what was behind that blue shirt in which he was looking absolutely awesome. She slowly looked at his lips which were so very inviting. How could someone be so handsome she thought? She didn't know her hand travelled to his face. He had light stubble around his face which finished his perfect look. And again her eyes travelled back to his eyes and they had an eyelock.

Raman had tried his best to control himself after knowing she loved him and now how could he stay in his senses when he was so close to her? She had the most beautiful eyes ever. He smirked as he saw the effect he was having on her but no less was his condition. She was wearing a blue saree with green border. Having his hand on her bare waist did no good to him and then her hand on his chest. Uff! This woman was going to be the death of me. And then he looked at her luscious lips which made him go crazy. And again his eyes travelled back to her eyes and they had an eyelock.

They came out of their eyelock when Mihika cleared her throat.

Ishita quickly moved from there trying to avoid embrassment. What was she even thinking? Seriously, he would make her go insane. She had always dreamt of a man who could make her go crazy but this man could make her shiver with just his smile. God! How handsome he looked when he smiled with his lips which could make anyone go insane! She wondered how it would be to feel his lips against hers. What! What was she even thinking? What the hell is he doing to me?

As Ishita left from there, Raman also was moving when he heard Mihika speaking.

M-Jiju. Raman tried to interrupt but before that she said.

M-Enough of dramas Jiju tell me the truth.

She had tears in her eyes. Her Akka had faced so much and all alone and here she was doing nothing.

Mi-don't worry Jiju you'll be together.

Raman left from there with hope.

***

Precap- Ishra meet in the clinic and Ishra almost kiss

How was the update? Hope you liked it. Please give me your feedback.

Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
brilliant update...
loved the stry nd its progresion...

finally raman spilled out...

amma nd toshi was good as thy r thinkng comn thing...

waiting fr next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it.
Precap seems to be interesting.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww...poor Raman. But atleast he admitted it out loud... now I can't wait to see her fall in love with him all over again...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow nice one ...and ruhi ishita bonding is superb everywhere...ishita raman attraction superb...waiting for ur next updatesss
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brilliantt updatee!!! loved itt!! :D
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Originally posted by: shravani_2311

brilliant update...

loved the stry nd its progresion...

finally raman spilled out...

amma nd toshi was good as thy r thinkng comn thing...

waiting fr next...


Thanks
yupp raman had to spill out finally
because only then can mimi help out
Will give a long part next time
keep reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks
Will cntinue soon
keep reading
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Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Loved it.

Precap seems to be interesting.
Continue soon.


Thanks
WIll need to work on the next part more as I want to give a long and perfect part
So it may become long as I have my final exams on the line too
Keep reading

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