Ishra.... My first SS...Prt 3 Chap 2 in page 9 updated.. - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
😭dude... u made me cry brutally...😭
ishita's words to raman just pierced into my heart..
i colud literally imagine
raman crying hard..😭😭😭
each n every word of hers made me cry more n more..😭😭
especially the lines.
" ❤️Love is pure when there is trust and belief...❤️
❤️ Being a dead person I cant able to live with you Raman... Hope so you forget about me and lead a happy life... Keep Adi and Ruhi happy❤️
❤️ I came to your life for the welfare of My Ruhi... And now Im moving out of your life for the welfare of My Adi... ❤️😭 this line especially made me cry more..
❤️I thought not to say this but I cant... RAMAN I LOVE YOU SO MUCH...MISS YOU A LOT...TAKE CARE OF EVERYONE... Dont worry for me I will be happy if all are happy.❤️
n wen raman broke down completely..i realllyyy felt very bad for ishra😭
"Sorrry Ishitha... I will always love you... Y did you leave me...??? Dont you know that I will die if you leave me... Pls...Im sorry... I should have believed you... You know about Ravan Kumar's anger rite???"
my heart just went out for ishra..
poor ishra..😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭

thank god atleast now adi changed n came forward to find ishu..
but wats the new twist..
who had kidnapped ishu...😲😲😲
waiting for the next part..
do update soon..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
This is quite different but I am loving it.

A very interesting idea...I look forward to seeing where you take this story. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
hw much wil u make us cry...

finally ishu kidnapped...
cant see raman's state...

sorry to b rude bt i dont even bother positvty of shagun nd adi...

hw much he cares fr him...

pls updte soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Hey all... How r u doing???? Hope your enjoying it... I can see that the comments are full of tears...

Dont worry yaar... Surely something might happen... Wait for it...

So here comes the next CHAPTER...


Chapter 2

Part 1

Raman is shocked and says "Ishitha is Kidnapped!!!!!"

Everyone shouts "What?????"

All are shocked to know that Ishitha is kidnapped...

Amma cries and says "Kadavule... Y this is happening to my Ishu??? What mistake she done!!! She's the person who cares for everyone... But what she get in return?? Always PAIN... Dont hurt her more..."

Everyone consoles Amma...

Mihir notice Raman standing idle... Tears are rolling down from Raman eyes...

Mihir pacifies him and says "Bhai... Nothing will happen to Bhabhi... dont worry..."

Raman says "Its all because of me Mihir... Ishitha always cares for me and family... But y i didnt trust or believe her... I should have trusted her?? But I didnt.. thats y she took this decision.. See what happened now?? Someone Kidnapped her..."
He says "Im so afraid Mihir... If anything happens to Ishitha I will die.. I cant live without her..."

Shagun and Adi listens to this... Shagun says "Adi... Raman loves Ishitha a lot... But we separated them.. Im responsible for all these things... Ishitha always supported us but we betrayed her.." and cries..

Adi cries and says "Yes mom.. Ishitha aunty is best.. We done something wrong..."

Mihir calms Raman and says "Bhai.. Who kidnapped Bhabhi.. what they need from us.. who are they?? where are they??"

Raman thinks "where are you Ishitha??"

On the other hand... Its a dark place...

Ishitha is lying unconsicous with her hands and legs tied together... Her eyes are blind folded...

Jus then a man enters... He says "Hello Ishitha... Welcome..."

All members are gathered in the hall and talks about the kidnapping... There were many questions... Who are they?? Why they Kidnapped Ishitha?? What they want????

Raman was deep in his thoughts about Ishitha... Just then he gets a call...

Its a blank call... He ignores it... Again a blank call... He gets alert...

Just then again a call...

He takes and shouts "who the hell are you???"

He hears a voice from the other side... "Hello Mr.Raman Bhalla... How r u??? Oh waiting for Mrs.Ishitha.. Too bad.. Dont worry.. She is safe with me..."

Raman shouts "where is Ishitha?? What you want???"

Everyone gather around Raman hearing Ishitha name..

Raman hears some voice and identifies its Isitha's... And Shouts "Ishitha????"

The voice of Ishitha shouts for help.. "Harrey yaar!!!who the hell are you?? Y did you kidnap me..."

Raman shouts "Dont worry Ishitha I will save you..."

The man says "Hello Ishitha... Your husband will save you it seems..."

Ishitha says "Raman... " The kidnapper puts the phone in speaker and ask Raman to speak to his wife...

Raman says "Ishitha... Dont worry... I will surely save you..."

Ishitha says "Hello Mr.Kidnapper!!! Who is Raman ?? I dont know anyone like that..."

Raman is shocked and shouts "Hey Madrasi... Im sorry for everything... Please..."

Ishitha says "Sorry... I dont know you... Mr.Kidnapper call to my Appa or Amma not to him..."

Raman says "Are you a fool!!!!" And Ishitha says "What?? Im not a fool.. Your fool... Get lost..."

Raman says "Ishitha... Please I will die if you leave me.. I love you so much..."

Ishitha says "Raman I know it... But for the sake of Adi and Shagun its better I stay away..."

Adi who was listening to this shouts "Ishitha Aunty.. Im so Sorry... Please come back... We all need you..."

Ishitha cries after hearing Adi's words and says "Sure Beta.. I will come for you.. Not because of that Raavan Kumar..."

Raman says "Hmm okay.. No need to come for my sake.. Harrey Where are you??"

Ishitha says "How do I know... He blindfolded me..." and then she realise that she is kidnapped and shouts "Oh!!No!!! Someone kidnapped me.. Save me Raman..."

Raman too feels it and shouts "Dont get afraid.. Will save you for sure.. "

The kidnapped man says with irritation "Hey atlast you all remembered that Ishitha is kidnapped... thats great!!!!"

Raman shouts "If anything happens to her I will kill you..."

The man says "Dont worry.. Until you settle all my needs she will be with me... Dont worry I wont harm her till there is no problem in your side... Do you understand??"

Raman ask "What you need?? Will give you whatever you need???"

The man says "I know you will give everything...I need MY ISHITHA..."

All are shocked...


Precap : Kidnapper removes cloth from Ishitha's eye... She is shocked to see him...

Comment your views friends...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
nice one. i think it is romi or mihir " .I need MY ISHITHA.bhabhi" is this the line.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
stunning and funny update too...
Raman breaking down felt bad, esp the line - If anything happens to Ishitha I will die.. I cant live without her😭...
OMG!!! shagun and adi realized ishita's goodness...
Acutally i loved the part- when ishra starts their fights its the unique thinking,
this was just awesome -The kidnapped man says with irritation "Hey atlast you all remembered that Ishitha is kidnapped... thats great!!!!"🤣🤣

Precap sounds so interesting...
waiting for the next update...
continue soon...
Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
nic one...
plz update d nxt part soon & solve d mystery...😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
See wapas suspense mein chhod diya nah.
You'll be a good thriller story writer. 😆

Finally Shagun's guy sine sense in her head.
Big THANK YOU for that. 👏

I think it's Mani, "my Ishu" obsessed lover maybe.
Or Bala? He can also call her "mine"
Maybe Romi.
Lol okay! Wild guesses.

CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Beautiful story dr.
Those 3 letters r so emotional.
Ishita got kidnapped. 😲
Who is that kidnapper?
And who is that 'my ishita'?
Ishita and Raman never change. Aise situation me b jagdaa shuru.
I'm so happy shagun-adi realize their mistake. Now what? Update sn dr.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Wooow brilliant job 👏
Yaar not fair story suspense me chod di plz update soon

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