Ishra.... My first SS...Prt 3 Chap 2 in page 9 updated..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone... Im new here... I love Raman and Ishitha pair... So here is my new SS for them...

Maybe the show needs to go like this i wish...


Chapter 1

Part 1

Ishitha is waiting for someone in the park... Just then Mihika enters the park...

Mihika smiles seeing Ishitha waiting for her and goes hear near...

Ishitha asks "Why did you ask me to come here???"

Mihika says "Akka... I need to tell you an important thing and starts to narrate her plan to Ishitha"

Ishitha is shocked to know about it all and becomes teary eyed seeing Mihika...

On the other hand Raman promises Adi that he will make Ishitha to say sorry to Shagun... Shagun smirks...

Raman , Shagun and Adi going in car to their home...

While going Raman notices Ishitha's car near the park and he looks for her...

He is shocked seeing Ishitha hugging Mihika and smiling...

Shagun and Adi also notice this... And Shagun starts her drama saying "Look Raman... The sisters spoiled my life together and they are feellig happy for it "

Raman gets angry seeing Ishitha and goes home...

Everyone are waiting for Ishitha in Bhalla's house... Ishitha enters the house...

She notices everyone in the hall and is happy to see Adi back to the home... She says "Adi Beta... Your back.. Im so happy for u..."

Raman ask her where did she go at this time... Ishitha remembers her promise to Mihika that she wont say anything to anyone... So she lies saying "To clinic for an emergency"..

Raman gets angry when she lied to him... He says "So when did they shift your clinic to the park????"

Ishitha is dumbstruck and she finds that Raman saw her with Mihika...

Ishitha says "Raman..." Raman shouts at him "Enough Ishitha...Enough..." Ishitha is shocked at his anger...

Ishitha shouts "Ishitha... Why did you do this thing??? I cant imagine that you did this thing..." Ishitha is shattered hearing Raman words...

Ishitha says "Raman.. You didnt belivee me..." Tears are falling down for her eyes...

Raman says "Y should I believe you.. You lied to me... You acted like you cared for Adi... You have hurted me a lot... y did u do this???"

She stands idle unable to hear these words from Raman...

Shagun starts her act saying "How can you do this Ishitha... Why did you do this to us... my beta... I cant belive it..."

Toshiji says "Ishitha... How can you do this ??? we all believed you.. How can you betray us..."

Simi and all others says these to Ishitha... Ishitha is shocked when her family members doesnt understand her... She is heartbroken...

She sees Mihir who was standind there and he says "Bhabhi always i believed you and Mihika... But how can you do this???"

Ishitha says "Mihir Pls understand me..."

Raman says "Shut Up... No more words... Jus leave this house..."

All are shocked at Raman's decision... Ishitha is takenaback... She cant able to believe hers ears... Raman said her to mone out...

Adi and Shagun feels happy... Ishitha walks slowly inside her room and packs her bag... She comes out with her bag...

She goes to Ruhi's room and sees Ruhi sleeping peacefully... She kisses Ruhi and cries...

She comes to the hall with the bag... She sees everyone who is not seeing her face also... She leaves the house and at the exit she turns to see Raaman but he turns his face and goes to his room...

She walks away...


Precap :- Ishitha decides to keave everyone forever and goes out with her bags...


Hope so you enjoyed this... Says your view about this...
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Akshatha19 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
shocking start...
Raman and whole family misunderstood her...
feeling very bad for ishita😭...
how can raman say to leave the house, such an 😡😡
shagun just idiot😡
plz make raman suffer in guilty...

after Precap i got worried...
hope everything sorts out soon...
continue soon ...
waiting for the next part...

welcome to the forum dear🤗


Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohhh...
Aisa kya hogya...?
Raman nd al r angry...
Nyc story..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yaar... suprb...
continue soon...
pm me plss..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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suprb start...
intrstng twist... mihika nd ishu plan...

i never expctd mihir wil be against ishu...i hop raman is planing some thing...


this adi and shagun never change...


i hop ishu sabko maaza chaka de...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb start, plz continue sooon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for your comments response... So here is the next part...

Part 2

Ishitha walks out of Bhalla's house... Everyone leaves to their rooms...

Adi and Shagun smiles and celebrate their victory in sending Ishitha out of the family...

Ishitha reaches her home and knocks it...

Amma opens the door and is shocked to see her daughter in that state...

Amma ask "Hiyyoo.. Kadavule... What happened Ishu??? Why are you crying ???"

Ishitha doesnt speak instead tears rolled in her eyes...

Appa too comes and is shocked to see his Ishu like this...

Ishitha enters the house and walks towards her room...

Ishitha says "Appa.. Amma.. Dont worry about me.. I will be fine..." She enters the room and closes it...

Amma says "Whats this?? My Ishu is shattered... I know that the members of Bhalla family are responsible for this condition" and cries...

Appa says "Control yourself... We need to console our Ishu... Lets talk about this tomorrow.. let her be alone..."

Ishitha sits in her bed idle and thinks about Raman's harsh words and cries...

On the another hand Raman too thinks about it and cries...


(The conversation of Raman and Ishitha in their mind.. )

Raman :- Ishitha... Y did you do this ?? Y did you hurt me...

Ishitha :- Raman.. Do you believe that Ur Ishitha can betray you...

Raman :- I know that you cant betray me but why did u lie to me???

Ishitha :- I thought that You will always support me... You always trust me but what happened to that trust and love???

Raman :- I always trust you Ishitha... But today I dont know what happened to me??

Ishitha :- Cant you just hear my words.. You know about me Raman.. Where is ur trust and love towards me??

Raman :- Ishitha I know about you... U will never lie to me... But what made you to do it???

Ishitha :- If I lied to you means cant you thinks that something will b there...

Raman :- Maybe I understood you wrong...

Ishitha :- Now everything is over Raman... I dont wish to stay here after hearing those words from you...

Raman :- I know Ishitha may be in some trouble.. Thats y she lied to me... Shall i go and talk with her... No.. Tomorrow I will go and talk with her...

Ishitha :- Everything is over from now... Im dead after Raman said that words.. I cant stay here.. I will leave now... But Raman I MISS YOU..

Raman :- I MISS YOU Ishitha..,, Everything will be fine tomorrow...

Ishitha :- Raman I hope so everything will be fine tomorrow...

Both of them remember about their lovely moments and cries...

Raman thinks of Ishitha and sleeps...

Ishitha takes her bags and moves out of her house... Her eyes are so wet... She says "Everyone will be happy that their trouble has gone out of their life" and smiles.

She leaves the flat remembering her moments with families...


Precap : Amma holds the collar of Raman and ask "Where is my Ishu???" Shocking everyone...


Hope so You all like it... To be continued soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow... emotional update...
Ishita's condition omg!!!...
shagun and adi just throw them out...
IshRa self talk awesome👏, their pain was perfectly shown...

well written👏...
Precap sounds interesting...
i'm just waiting for update...
update soon...

Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
super update...
cont soon😊😊😊
waiting😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story.
double standard bhalla don't deserve Ishita.

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