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Zami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

I love how everybody is ready to comment.

Waiting for the update

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SAKIV

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

nice one buddy.

Finally you updated.

You cleared everthing about case now.

Now it is Ruhi's turn to treat Ishita.

Ishita went through lot.Hope Ramanunderstand abou it.

Waiting for next part.

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Nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: arunabhi
Nikki !!! Look who is here to comment first !

Res ...

🥳..!! Actually i had expected your res first..!! I am happy u did it..!! But not happy with os..! 😭

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Akshatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

wow...so beautiful update...

title is just perfect...

Bhallas got to know the truth,

ishita is innocent, everything is clear...

Raman's dilemma awesomely pictured

esp ishita is innocent he is not able to accept it...

Ishita suffered a lot now...

Ruhi- Raman convo was superb, i loved ruhi behaving maturely...

finally both are going to meet ishita...

wonderful writing nikki...

waiting for next part...

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PRACHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

awesome update Nikki
finally mu clear
n I loved ruman's convo

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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Accolades to all the writers involved here. Such impressive work. I tell you. I'm amazed at this retelling. Truly amazed.

Just a suggestion, please ignore if it hurts any feelings. Can we have a beta reader? Due to contrasting writers and different people writing it and the styles that vary, can we have someone to beta read it? It's no issue with the writing or the flow, just a bit of final polishing.

On a lighter note. This is amazing. Do you'll have a group or thread where you'll discuss the plot line? The DFL team for PYKEK did something and we had a group on FB where we discussed everything out. Or us everything post here on a first time basis?

Reading this makes me want to participate, but I won't do any justice. Shall look out for title updates.

Keep up the good word. ;)

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Nice update thank to Bala had come and clear MU. And now Raman talk to Ruhi and can understand that Ruhi also love Ishu and he let her go to visit her.Hope next meeting will be very emotional one and Raman can be soften for Ihsu. Waiting for next part.😊

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SAKIV

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Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: AraBearxx
Accolades to all the writers involved here. Such impressive work. U tell you. I'm amazed at this retelling. Truly amazed.

Just a suggestion, please ignore if it hurts any feelings. Can we have a beta reader. Due to contrasting writers and different people writing it and the styles that vary, can we have someone to beta read it? It's no issue with the writing or the flow, just a bit of final polishing.

On a lighter note. This is amazing. Do you'll have a group or thread where you'll discuss the plot line? The DFL team for PYKEK did something and we had a group on FB where we discussed everything out. Or us everything post here on a first time basis?

Reading this makes me want to participate, but I won't do any justice. Shall look out for title updates.

Jeep up the good word. ;)

everyone writes theri own thought.No previous planning.

This time list is over.We would be sure making another thread after this one finishes,

If many are ready we can open one simultaneously too.We would be happy if you have suggestion plz share with us.

Actually main idea is that they have to continue others work with their own twist so discussion would be deviating.So we can make other thread we can make that rules.

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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

everyone writes theri own thought.No previous planning.
This time list is over.We would be sure making another thread after this one finishes,

If many are ready we can open one simultaneously too.We would be happy if you have suggestion plz share with us.
Actually main idea is that they have to continue others work with their own twist so discussion would be deviating.So we can make other thread we can make that rules.

Reply begins from here.. Why? Because quoting with mobile version of IF is worse than the site itself.

A beta reader? That's what I suggested. Reading this in one go. The story does flow but you have to swiftly adapt to different styles abruptly. If we could have a beta reader who could just weave together everything. But then on another note since everyone is reading it part by part rather than in one go the difference would go unnoticed.

What I like about this is how the story flows. It picks off right where the previous individual leaves it. That's impressive. On how it's perfectly passed on. Read impressive.

Suggestions? On what?

Nah. Too busy with real life. Wouldn't join this even on another thread. I have so many pending works that I feel bad for as it is.

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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adlin1784

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Posted: 10 years ago

#290

Hello
Finally, Bala came and Ruhi said her feelings.
But unfortunately, I didn't understand everything because I don't know Hindi.

(Sorry !!! I know I always complaint about it. Everyone had done a GREAT job with their writing. Thank you very very much.)