Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82)

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Reply begins from here.. Why? Because quoting with mobile version of IF is worse than the site itself.

A beta reader? That's what I suggested. Reading this in one go. The story does flow but you have to swiftly adapt to different styles abruptly. If we could have a beta reader who could just weave together everything. But then on another note since everyone is reading it part by part rather than in one go the difference would go unnoticed.
What I like about this is how the story flows. It picks off right where the previous individual leaves it. That's impressive. On how it's perfectly passed on. Read impressive.

Suggestions? On what?

Nah. Too busy with real life. Wouldn't join this even on another thread. I have so many pending works that I feel bad for as it is.

Suggestion on improvising the thread.What else.

As it is the starting all is not formulated well.So just asked as you said you previously worked on similar concept.

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: adlin1784
Hello
Finally, Bala came and Ruhi said her feelings.
But unfortunately, I didn't understand everything because I don't know Hindi.

(Sorry !!! I know I always complaint about it. Everyone had done a GREAT job with their writing. Thank you very very much.)

Will add subtitles tomorrow..!! and will pm u regarding it.! 😊

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Destroyed For Love

Worked on this. It was massive on a larger scale. We had episodes. Every Sunday, I think. Got busy in life mid way so wasn't fully a part of it. I confess. We had newspaper articles, videos, vlogs, merged videos, publishing, interviews and so much more. It was a thrilling expertise and time consuming too. We basically discussed the plot line, plotted and then selected people to write it. It was a huge process. The discussing. Writing. And the editing. And it was a mass effort. Like so many of us agreeing on one flow and merging our ideas. We should do it for YHM. In September or October. I wanna start it here. It's gonna be my baby. The forums retelling of YHM. AH I'M EXCITED ALREADY!! So much for having an exam in 24 hours. Need to hit the books.

Coming to this.

It's fine till now. It flows. And that's all matters. The editing team can sit and edit it after everything is done.

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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adlin1784

@adlin1784

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Will add subtitles tomorrow..!! and will pm u regarding it.! 😊

Thank you Nikki. It's very kind.😊
👍🏼

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#295

Updated my comments on page 37.

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#296

What happens next? Are we repeating the list or having other people continue? I see that no one else has signed up for the next chapters. I would like to write another part if it's allowed. 😊

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: nividances
What happens next? Are we repeating the list or having other people continue? I see that no one else has signed up for the next chapters. I would like to write another part if it's allowed. 😊

we will be repeating cycle after the list complete again starts from 1.means me.

after maya writes

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

we will be repeating cycle after the list complete again starts from 1.means me.
after maya writes

Okay, got it. 👍🏼

Thanks. 😊

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Lakshmi

@Abirika

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#299

The first part is simply awesome

Ishita's strong relationship with cute little Ruhi and Raman's hard time missing his daughter, the only love and his life are beautifully written.

Bala should be punished severely by the authorities and get suspended for not taking the case serious willingly for his own family member's benefit.

Read the second part a little.

Ishu's bond grew with Ruhi in this one year so much that she became a part of her and feeling bad for Raman.

Bhallas shouldn't have left Raman like that. They should have been with him in his saddest days.

Will read all the parts from now.

TM, it is really a great writing style. It helps good team work, dealing with challenges, sharpening mind, builds up creativity and what not.

Edited by -LovelyLakshmi- - 10 years ago

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#300

Very nicely explained abt ruhis love for ishima n its gud that raman understood his daughter's plight for mother .their convo was very emotional n bala explained evrythng crystal clearly .loved the whole part n title was so apt now awaiting nxt part

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