Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 22

Good update dear, but very sad you made me cry. Loved Raman and Ruhi's reunion. But Ishita's pain was heart aching and very emotional.

Ankita you brought tears to my eyes buddy. Ishita's state is expressed wonderfully and Raman's happiness was pretty evident with the words.

Ruhi... Think about her for once... She is the one who is in most of the dilemma. She is the one who has to make a choice when she can't and that too at such an tender age...

Let's see how our story continues.

Great job...

Wonderful update Ankita very emotional one the way you write can feel Ishu state of mine going through trauma.Suddenly turn of meeting for Raman and Ruhi made situation worst for Ishu her fear of loosing Ruhi come dead infront of her.Wondering in the past when they got Ruhi they must find the case of lost child and they adopt her cause Bala is the police so he must done all this formality for Ishu right. Hope Ruhi will clear Raman and Bhalla family that Ishu not Kidnaps her and bring her to hospital to save her Ishima.I trust Aru she will bring it on to higher level of this story.All of the writers here are wonderful writer . I really appreciate your talents and affords you put in this story. Thank you once again dear.👏👏👏

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

Nice one buddy.

Ishita's state was explained very nicely.

Even I imagined same.

sorry to remind.But you forget the point.Ruhi won't take food without Ishita.

Now waiting for next part.

Don't know what will happen next.

But Ishita's turmoil was clearly taken.

She is in life and death situation now and no one except Ruhi can save her and Ruhi can't be reached

Originally posted by: sulochana90

awesome update...

ishita is in serious pain

how can raman straight away do that? he should have atleast tried to now

now whats gonna happen

wont ruhi miss her i the same way when she realizes that her ishima iant with her?

eagerly waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: shavi2311

ankita rula diya yar tu ne...

heart touching updte...

felt every pain of ishu...

happy fr raman nd ruhi bt fr ishu yar cant ahv right wrds hw i felt seeing sihu...

great updte...

waitng fr nxt...

Originally posted by: AllezJustine

Good update dear, but very sad you made me cry. Loved Raman and Ruhi's reunion. But Ishita's pain was heart aching and very emotional.

Where the hell is that stupid Bala this was all his falt he needs to fix this.

Good job yaar

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

Ankita you brought tears to my eyes buddy. Ishita's state is expressed wonderfully and Raman's happiness was pretty evident with the words.

Ruhi... Think about her for once... She is the one who is in most of the dilemma. She is the one who has to make a choice when she can't and that too at such an tender age...

Let's see how our story continues.

Great job...

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

aww...thnkew so much for liking n commenting dear though it was not worth it

thnks a lott

me too waiting for next

Originally posted by: shavi2311

the updte was more wrth yar...

bt really a emotnal one...nw really acnt wait fr nxt...