Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 23

Originally posted by: usaonly

Wonderful update Ankita very emotional one the way you write can feel Ishu state of mine going through trauma.Suddenly turn of meeting for Raman and Ruhi made situation worst for Ishu her fear of loosing Ruhi come dead infront of her.Wondering in the past when they got Ruhi they must find the case of lost child and they adopt her cause Bala is the police so he must done all this formality for Ishu right. Hope Ruhi will clear Raman and Bhalla family that Ishu not Kidnaps her and bring her to hospital to save her Ishima.I trust Aru she will bring it on to higher level of this story.All of the writers here are wonderful writer . I really appreciate your talents and affords you put in this story. Thank you once again dear.👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

OMG !!!

what an update...

finally Raman and ruhi met each other...

but the pain ishita has gone through pictured unexceptionally superb...

each and every line just wow... ankita..

brilliantly written 👏👏

just loved it...

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

so srry if it was not wat u expected or wanted dear

I just wrote what I felt like..hit and miss couldn't be carried to every part..hope u dont mind

thnks for liking

as for bala..he has ran away due to fear..lol

Yes Bala can easily clear everything.Without himself getting in trouble.

Expected situation frm raman
nicely portrayed ish's trauma

waiting 4 ruman scene

ankita this was awesome yar
the start was as usual BT u made totally emotional
u made m cry girl
ruman meet ishu's condition
everything

Great part very emotional.
But WHY Ishita has to bear this ? It's heartbroken. And we know Raman won't be easily pacified even with Ruhi's words.
Now as everyone else I can't wait for the next part.

(But PLEASE again is it possible to have english translation for dialogues especially with long phrases. It's a humble request. I'm afraid to miss important things said in the dialogues when written in Hindi. Thanks again.)

That was really great Ankita! I'm glad that you made Raman and Ruhi meet, but Ishita's state is terrible without Ruhi, as expected. Great job carrying the story along. I am really looking forward to a Raman-Ruhi conversation in the next part.

Ankita the update was superb. Who said it wasn't worth???? Writing someone's emotions and that too is a tough job and you did that smoothly. We have a long way to go dear and believe me you did an awesome job.