Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

funny thing is we are writting the story and we ourself don't know what is going to happen.
The way story is running.I think it will come back to me to unite them or start marriage talks.

but very nice part buddy.
Next is ankitha .no problem we can trust her as we trust ourself.
She will do what is needed to be done.

That is what I love about this story, you never know what is going to happen next it's really fun.

And everyone has done well so far

Good job guys

waiting for the upcoming updates

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Akshatha19
wow... superb update...
Just loved it...
Raman flashback Ruhi... awwah cute...
IshRa elevator scene just enjoyed it...

this is getting too interesting..awesome..
thanks nivi...

Thanks Akshatha! Glad you liked it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: adlin1784
Great update. It's getting more and more interesting.
Thanks for English translation. Eagerly waiting for next part.

Thank you!. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awwwe this was a great update
their nokjhok
just hope ruman will meet soon

Thanks Prachi. I think it's fun to have Ruman hit and miss moments...builds up the story some more.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Yhm-KaruDivu
Brilliant update . So cute . Kee going all dear .

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: AllezJustine
Great part Nivi loved thr rain scene and their takrar at the elevator.
And it was good that Mr.Iyer met Raman so he knows that they are family friends.

I love how the story is progressing with every part as every writer adds his/her own spice to it.

Thanks Zami! Glad you enjoyed it. And a big thanks to you for starting this thread and challenge...great idea!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana
Nivi...wonderful yrr
really liked it
raman meeting mr iyyer and both knowing they are neighbours but not sure...good idea
loved that raman ruhi part
swinging in air...aww <3
You did an awesum job dear
keep it up

Thank you Ankita! Raman and Ruhi bond is something that I wanted to explore hence I put the flashback scene. Waiting to read your part! Update soon!