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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunabhi


Corny stuff 😆... This was just lovely , guess your heart should start thinking the other way around as well... I have loved all your works. I do agree this forum has lovely writers but this OS has that nice feeling in me.. Glad I could bring a smile on your face.. Your modest reply did bring a smile on my face ! Thanks 😊


I am an expert at corny 😆, thank you for reading all my other ramblings and thank you for your encouraging words! Let's make a deal to bring a smile on each other's face 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amii90

Yello!!!! Read this as my bed time read after long day at work & let me tell you I slept with a smile on my face! This creativity of yours DEFINES YHM for me & you know this by now too. You can never go wrong with this trio scenes and its even better to see this work come at a time when on screen, there is not much shown. Theme of "Yaadon ka kya hai nayi ban jayengi" is beautifully incorporated and I love the fact that this particular OS includes "Ruhi's yaadein" in this whole "humari yaadein" scenario! Its all three of them that make a perfect family thus the notion of "humari notion" is not just limited to the couple at hand!!! And of course, Raman-Ishita angle is beautifully portrayed as well with perfect dialogues syncing totally with their characters. Superb work, Doc!!!


Amiii! So glad to hear from you 😊, I will go to bed happy after reading your flattering comment 😳. I love this trio and like yourself I was craving their endearing interaction and I found Ruhanika so cute with a lost tooth so I i just wrote this little thing. I am so happy that you liked this simple story, there is nothing fancy here just a small moment between a child and their parent. That yaadein dialogue is one of my fav moments between Puttar and the missus so I figured since I am the director and the story writer 😆 here why not use it...Thanks for this lovely comment Ami, and thank you for taking out time and reading inspite of your hectic schedule.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely OS ... loved the part where Raman wants Ishita to be there for Ruhi's important moments and then Ishita telling him he's her North star 😳

You write really well 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: paru_rox

Lovely OS ... loved the part where Raman wants Ishita to be there for Ruhi's important moments and then Ishita telling him he's her North star 😳

You write really well 😊


Thank you so much! I love your writing and wit as well 😊, Raman is just so endearing, always thinking about wifey and wifey is so cute herself, these two make me go crazy 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Imma be fangirling before I even read this.
DOC... HUG!!!!!!!!

OH. WHEN I THOUGHT THIS TOPIC WAS CLOSED I HAD A WHOLE COLLECTION OF COLORFUL WORD FOR IF.


And then I realised I hadn't logged in. Bas.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Imma be fangirling before I even read this.

DOC... HUG!!!!!!!!

OH. WHEN I THOUGHT THIS TOPIC WAS CLOSED I HAD A WHOLE COLLECTION OF COLORFUL WORD FOR IF.


And then I realised I hadn't logged in. Bas.


Pagal! Hug back to you! Sorry for the delay in my response, I am trying to be a good girl and staying away from IF. 😕

I miss you Liver ❤️ #fangirlingback
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut


Pagal! Hug back to you! Sorry for the delay in my response, I am trying to be a good girl and staying away from IF. 😕

I miss you Liver ❤️ #fangirlingback



I'm following Rajji and being a good girl and staying away from IF.

Miss you too. ❤️

Yeh doori sehti nahin
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"I was hoping if they could incorporate this into the show but since I do not make the show and no one cares what I think and rightly so lol, I figured why not just write a little something that I would have liked to see on TV"

How I wish that writers give an eye and ear to what you write... How I wish that they employ you as one of the writers of the show... How I wish that I would have read your work earlier.. How I wish that even we get to see what you write as the episodes of the show... How I wish...
Btw really loved the radio Part in your other OS trepidations... Even I too fancy both of them listening to some show on the radio and enjoying...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Richajin

"I was hoping if they could incorporate this into the show but since I do not make the show and no one cares what I think and rightly so lol, I figured why not just write a little something that I would have liked to see on TV"

How I wish that writers give an eye and ear to what you write... How I wish that they employ you as one of the writers of the show... How I wish that I would have read your work earlier.. How I wish that even we get to see what you write as the episodes of the show... How I wish...
Btw really loved the radio Part in your other OS trepidations... Even I too fancy both of them listening to some show on the radio and enjoying...


Thank you so very much for your kind words and praise that I surely do not deserve. I am glad you enjoyed reading this and trepidations. Trepidations was one of the 1st fictional story I wrote outside of Academics so I am happy that you liked it because I think it's horrible lol.

How I wish I would have you talk to me to boost my morale when I am studying. lol On a serious noteI do not think I posses the talent to write for a show, Ekta would probably laugh so hard in my face. 😆

Thanks for your lovely comment, you really made my day so much better. 😃

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