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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very nice os..

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore
So perfect!

So very kind of you, thank you! 😊

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-
OMG..Doc...This was just so amazing...⭐️
I am here typing this with a goofy grin on my face..It was so cute! RuMan and IshRa <33 ❤️
Raman and Ru convo in the beginning..LOL! The daughter over smarts the father..His reaction to it was awesome! Chant like her Ishima..😆
Loved the song you chose..so beautiful <33 The moments that followed were so adorable. Both the parents savoring a first moment of their daughter..😳. I wish we could have got something as serene and soulful as this on the show.. It was truly magical! <33 Ishra's convo was such an awesome one! Goes so well with the song..The end was just the perfect one..Raavan Kumar in his form teasing her..CUTE! ❤️ ☺️

Loved every bit of it ❤️ Thanks for the awesome one Doc :)

Thank you so much for your amazing comment, I am gonna go to bed with a goofy smile myself after reading your comment. 😃 Ruhi's interaction with her parents is the best part of the show for me and I would love it if they would explore their relationship more.

The song is so beautiful and soulful that it described Ishra's feelings without me having to put words to their emotions.

I love it when Raavan Kumar teases his JKR, I want the mischievous Raavan back 😳, also in all honesty I am surprised people are liking this PG rated romance because the forum is raining with HOT OSs. Some are so hot I had turn my laptop off for a second to take a breather 🤣

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: SanayaBarun
So sweet loved it!

Thank you 😊

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Ohgod!
Doc... 👏👏👏
Beautiful choice of song as always.. Its one of my favourites and the way you used it in the scene just made me go awww

I loved loved loved how u used the hum apni nayi yaadein banayenge here and started it off with Ruhi... I also how despite being in his own world and thoughts of his wife, Raman immediately sensed the need for Ruhi to be with her mother and rushed her to give her the comfort of her mother's lap.. And once done, he gets back to being the husband who wants his wife's time! The transition from giving her a nayi yaad as a mother to becoming puttar was damn cute and the whole song just made it all the more beautiful.. I could soo visualise the whole scene with the song playing in my head,,,👏👏👏

Doc, you rock! 😳🤗

Thanks Bhu 🤗, everyone seems to have enjoyed the song and I am glad because when I saw Ruhi's smile I started humming this song and suddenly this idea came to mind. I absolutely love Raman-Ruhi scenes and I wanted to write about Raman the father, a father who is completely in sync with his children, I am glad I got the opportunity to write about the father-daughter duo.

The yaadein line for me is the best representation of Ishra, both are trying to get over the past and make new memories with each other, and it's said by my puttar so I had to use it 😳

I really do hope we get to see more of Raman-Ruhi-Ishita scenes on screen. 😃

Thanks for the lovely comment Bhu!

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Coco

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Hellooo coco! I am so glad that you liked all the different relationships, lol I am called pastor doc for a reason because of annoying lectures 😆 but in all seriousness I love reading other people's work where they talk about the birds and the bees it's just that I can't write like that and probably would make it all medical with no passion 🤣 so I stick to what I understand and know that is sappy relationship stuff...you see I am weird mix of a grand ma + 14 year year old girl stuck in a 27 year old body 😆

I am so happy you enjoyed the song, I think the song carried this OS and conveyed Ishtra's feelings so beautifully that I didn't have to put any words to describe their emotions. And Amen about small gestures, I am all about those small gestures and moments, big gestures do not excite me as much.

PS: I have read your light OS like a million times, when do we get another one from you?

LOL Doc i prefer reading sweet stories like these that put a smile on my face. I am just like you in that matter. You are really sweet for liking my OS but I am not where close to your writing. Your just amazing and your work has details I honestly forget about.

I am trying to write on for near Christmas, my finals are coming up so I am busy with that.

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Adorable shot! Loved it! ❤️

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

Thanks Anu 😊, I know you like reading OS/FF so if you like this then i might have done something right. The missing tooth makes Ruhi so so adorable, I wanna just take her in a bone crushing hug! You know I had to make puttar very endearing, just like how I see him 😳, I feel like I do injustice to Ishita's character because of my obsession with puttar 😆

After my exam I promise I will start writing more because I will have a lot of time to kill, you are gonna be tired of reading and lament the fact that you encouraged me 😆

Yes... It's a mystery to most people how I spend most of my life reading and never tire of it- at work, at home, as a hobby... but hey it could be worse right?😛

And FFs are the way I get through the tortures that the CVs out us through and continue to cling on with hope.😕

I know how you feel about him, but I'm not complaining - trust me. I can somewhat understand the *ahem* appeal... I am still continuing my investigating mind you- i have to be sure of exactly why you are so hypnotized... sooo... sadly I am going to have to force myself to stare at his beautiful face for hours still to make sure i see what you see.😉

You definitely do Ishu justice, no worries there. He's sooo... and she's just got to work a little harder to win back all our hearts fully. We are only starting to see the Raman Shagun left behind [THIS confirms her crazy to me!😛] - and once we get the full effect I'm pretty sure we're all gonna need buckets to scoop up all the drool on the floor!😳

Aaanyway, trust me I will never tire of your FFs , especially considering the track that just started🤢

I am depending on the kindness and gutter minded-ness of my IF family to get me though this most difficult upcoming time.🤢

Please PM me when /if you post so I don't miss it.😃

Sorry for spamming!😳

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: cocololo123

LOL Doc i prefer reading sweet stories like these that put a smile on my face. I am just like you in that matter. You are really sweet for liking my OS but I am not where close to your writing. Your just amazing and your work has details I honestly forget about.

I am trying to write on for near Christmas, my finals are coming up so I am busy with that.

School comes first, will wait till christmas to get read your OS 😃

@bold: You have been warned, you are never allowed to say stuff like that ever again!