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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello, so as I watched the 1 year special episode my eyes were stuck on Ruhi and her cute antics but my heart melted when I saw her wide smile with a missing tooth. I was hoping if they could incorporate this into the show but since I do not make the show and no one cares what I think and rightly so lol, I figured why not just write a little something that I would have liked to see on TV. This is a very small scene between Ruhi and her parents, hope you all enjoy it.

PS: I do not write OS/FF and stories in general because I fear that I may steer the characters far away from their actual characterization. But since I adored Ruhi and her missing tooth smile, I put aside my doubts and wrote this little thing down.

Not Proof read as usual.

The tooth fairy

After Mihika's attempt at suicide everyone in the Iyer and Bhalla household was on high alert, every little thing was handled with care and Mihika was never left alone even for a minute lest she would plunge in the dark corners of selfpity and attempt something stupid. The elders in the family accompanied Mihika during the day and at night the duty to take care of Mihika fell on Ishita. For a last 10 days Ishita was sleeping with Mihika, leaving Raman in charge of putting Ruhi to bed, making sure her homework was done and her bag was packed for school.

Raman and Ishita didn't mind helping out family and in fact they were the 1st ones to sacrifice their private lives for others but these days these small private sacrifice of their time started bothering them. Was it because they were slowly moving forward in their relationship, or was it because they never got a chance to confess their feelings for each other, whatever the reason, Ishita and Raman started minding this distance between them brought on by these unwanted circumstances. A month ago, Raman wouldn't even have noticed Ishita not being in his bedroom but for the past few weeks the dynamics of their relationship changed, both of them looked forward to retiring to their room after dinner to catch up with each other's day, talk about Ruhi's antics, or the constant fighting between their mothers. Much to Raman's delight, Ishita had started sleeping on the bed abandoning the couch, their relationship was slowly transforming into a normal husband wife relationship but right when progress was being made between them, the Ashok-Shagun wedding fiasco happened creating chaos in all their lives. Now Mihika needed support and that meant the return of solitude to Raman and his lonely bed.

Tonight was no different, after dinner Ishita headed over to the Iyer residence to accompany Mihika while Raman tried to put Ruhi to bed by reading her a story. For Raman a simple task of reading a bedtime story to his daughter seemed daunting without Ishita, he was used to Ishita reading a bedtime story while Raman cuddled with Ruhi, 10 minutes into story time and the father daughter duo would start snoring in unison. With Ishita gone, he tried to narrate a story to Ruhi and failed miserably so he told Ruhi.

Raman: Listen don't tell Ishima but we are going to turn on the TV and let's hope we get sleepy soon, deal?

Ruhi: Deal, can you put cartoon network on pleaasseee

Raman: No way! Papa is not buddhu.

Ruhi: Okay then Ruhi is not buddhu so no cricket either!

Raman: Chant kahi ki, bilkul apni Ishima pe gaye hai, okay let's turn on the radio and try go to bed.

Raman turned on the radio and the song Aage bhi Jaane tu played

Aage Bhi Jaane Na Tu, Peechhe Bhi Jaane Na Tu
Jo Bhi Hai, Bas Yahi Ek Pal Hai
Aage Bhi Jaane Na Tu

With Ruhi secured in his arms, he tried to listen to Ruhi's stories from the day but his mind kept on wandering to the song playing in the background. He started thinking about the past moments that he lost fighting with Ishita and uncertainty of the future scared him, he started pondering about time and it's fickle nature, he realized that no amount of power, prestige and money could control time! Time marches to no ones beat, it certainly doesn't march to a CEO's beat and neither does it march to a dentist's beat.

All of a sudden he stopped hearing Ruhi's blabbering and he started hearing some faint sobs, he looked down and saw Ruhi lying in his embrace looking up to him while holding a tooth in her hand with eyes full of tears. Raman jumped up and took Ruhi in his arms, wiped her tears and tried to calm her down.

Anjaane Saayo Ka Raaho Mein Dera Hai
Andekhi Baaho Ne Ham Sabko Ghera Hai
Ye Pal Ujaala Hai Baaqi Andhera Hai
Ye Pal Gawaana Na Ye Pal Hi Tera Hai
Jeene Waale Soch Le Yahi Waqt Hai Kar Le Puri Aarzoo
Aage Bhi ...

While pacifying Ruhi and admiring the innocence of a child crying at the loss of a tooth which will eventually grow back, he realized that this moment, the present, is where life belongs. He looked around his room, and then stared at his daughter holding her tooth sobbing ever so faintly, he looked to the other side of the bed and then looked down at Ruhi yet again. He realized that this moment of a child losing his/her tooth maybe insignificant to others but for parents especially a parent who became a parent by choice and not by blood, this moment is a big moment. He picked up Ruhi in his arms and headed to the Iyer house, he wanted to live this moment with his wife, he wanted to soothe their daughter on her loss o f a tooth together, he wanted to see the happiness in her eyes at the sight of their daughter growing up.

Raman banging on Mihika's door.

Raman: Ishita open the door, hello? Ishita!

Ishita opens the door and gets worried seeing Ruhi and her little eyes that were red, by all that crying, being held by Raman. She immediately took Ruhi from his arms and without asking any questions, started coddling and cradling Ruhi in her lap. While comforting Ruhi she looked at him and silently with her eyes enquired about the situation. Raman with his eyes and a few gestures explained the endearing situation of Ruhi losing her 1st baby tooth and how she burst into tears, they both smiled at each other, while Ishita kept on rocking Ruhi back and forth in her arms, and Raman stood next to them smiling at this beautiful sight. Within no time, Ruhi fell asleep in her mother's comforting embrace; Raman grabbed Ruhi from Ishita's lap and gestured Ishita to follow him to their bedroom.

Raman put Ruhi on their bed and grabbed the tooth from her tiny protective hands, the radio was still playing the song, the window to their room was letting in the cold Delhi breeze and the moon light was just bright enough to shoo away the black darkness,

Is Pal Ke Saaye Mein Apna Thhikaana Hai
Is Pal Ke Aage Hi Har Shae Fasaana Hai
Kal Kisne Dekha Hai Kal Kisne Jaana Hai
Is Pal Se Paayega Jo Tujhko Paana Hai
Jeene Waale Soch Le Yahi Waqt Hai Kar Le Puri Aarzoo
Aage Bhi ...

Raman: Are you listening to the song

Ishita: Yeah but since when did you like such soothing songs, I thought your panjabi taste would be more tuned with Bhangra and pop music

Raman: Yaar bakwaas band karo, ye batao kuck sikhi iss gane se

Ishita: Kya sekhna hai, aap sikhado

Raman holds her hand and pulls her towards the couch, they both sit staring out at the sky gazing at the stars.

Raman: Ishita jo guzar gaya so kal tha, jo ayega who bhi kal hoga par is guzre hue kal and aane wale kal ke beech ham aaj ko kho rahe hain. Apni families ke kal thik karte karte hum apne...tumhara aur mera aaj kho rahe hai.

Ishita: Hmmm

Raman: Hmmm? Tumhara dimag kharab hain kya, bas hmmm! Waise toh choti si baat pe, 2 page ka lecture aur aaj hum 10 dino baad bat kar rahe hai aur tum sirf kehti ho, hmmm.

Ishita: Usss tare ko dekh rahe ho aap? Woh north star, main harroz usse dekh ke soti thi, usse baatein karti thi, apna dil ka haal sunati thi par pechle 1 month se main aapko dekh ke soti hoon, apse baatein karti hon, and apna del ka haal sunati hoon. Aaj 1 month ke baad mere dost North star se mulakat hui hai. Aur abhi apne hi samjhaya ki hame apne aaj main rehna chahiye, so I am focusing on my present and saying hi to my long lost friend, the North Star

Raman: Yaar din be din chant hoti ja rahi ho aur tumhara y...

Ishita cuts Raman in the middle of the sentence

Ishita: Waise apni tariff suni ya nahi..maine kaha ki aap mere ab North star ho, my guiding light.

Raman: Tabhi main sochu kuch toh gadbad hai, tumhari tabyat theek nahi hai..meri tariff woh bhi itni raat ko.

Ishita: Kuch bhi, acha suno you could have easily pacified Ruhi so why did you bring her over to me?

Raman: Yaad hai maine kaha tha, Yaadon ka kya hai, nayi ban gayengi...tumhari aur meri...hamari' ...bas yeh hamari yaadein hain, hamari beti badi ho rahi hai, aaj uske pehle baby tooth gira, and I wanted you to be a part of this memory, Ruhi is as much your daughter as she is mine and her mother deserves to be a part of this very important moment of her life. Also I don't know about you but the song taught me to live in the moment and not worry about the past or the future so I marched into the Madrasi house to savor this moment of ours.

Ishita had tears in her eyes and before she could say anything.

Raman: Waise daaton ka department toh tumhara hai toh tumhara hona toh banta hain, and how can papa be the tooth fairy? Papa can scare away the monsters under the bed but papa can't be the tooth fairy now can he? We need Ishima to be the tooth fairy, so here take this tooth, hide it and put some money under Ruhi's pillow. Go do your tooth fairy duties while I make a quick phone call.

Ishita: Okay tooth fairy duties done, I am going to head back to my older sis duties.

Raman: What about your wife duties.

Ishita: Matlab?

Raman: Kaun si biwi apne handsome pati ko raat ko chod ke jati hai? Ab matlab samjhi ya aur paas ake samjhaun

Ishita: Ravan kumar aapko yeh kya hua hai, aur main Mihika ko kaise akela chodo

Raman: Don't worry it's taken care off, Mihir is already with her. Just because tum aur main Buddha buddhi hain, iske matlab ye toh nahi ki everyone should be like us, who jawan hai let them have some fun.

Ishita: Acha toh mere buddhe ne puri planning karke rakhi thi

Raman: Waise tumhe punishment milegi

Ishita: Kyun maine kya kiya?

Raman: How can you think I would leave Mihika alone in such a state, I mean thik hai tumhara diwana ho chala hoon par itna bhi nahi ki apni aadhi gharwali ko ignore karoon, so you deserve a punishment.

Ishita: Kuch bhi.

Raman: Yaad hain maine kaha tha, agli baar punishment main Ishimaa se loonga' bas to punishment de do and aur mujhse punishment le lo.

With that he takes her in an embrace and pecks her on both her cheeks.

Is Pal Ke Jalwo Ne Mehfil Sawaari Hai
Is Pal Ki Garmi Ne Dhadkan Ubhaari Hai
Is Pal Ke Hone Se Duniya Hamaari Hai
Ye Pal Jo Dekho To Sadiyo Pe Bhaari Hai
Jeene Waale Soch Le Yahi Waqt Hai Kar Le Purii Aarzoo
Aage Bhi ...

With the blessing of the tooth fairy, this jodi of Buddha buddhi swayed to the song playing on the radio while their daughter slept peacefully in the embrace of their love.

Note: The inner buddhi in me only allowed me to write till the peck on the cheek, how the night progresses I leave it up to your imagination. 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Doc kya yaad dilla diya such a lovely song and what a beautiful way to colloborate it with this piece. I have grown in a home where my parents are very musically inclined - and old songs have been a part of my life ever since I can rem - this one happens to be a fav of my mum cant it rem how many times have heard her hum it and it is also a number I love.


The sheer poignancy of this number is in the way it is so soothing and still - how it asks you to live in this moment, to cease life and not let it pass by worrying about the future or fretting over what happened in the past. Raman Ishita have lived for far too long in their past, they had assumed for the longest time they personally have no future ever until they met each other.

Even after they married they had assumed that it would be so...but time and getting to know each other changed things for them and how - today they are so in love with each other but life...life is getting in the way time and again by creating obstacles for them - though they came closer always by the odds placed agains tthem, they are now apart thanks to those odds too...

It was such a lovely idea to see IshRa share a moment as parents that is a first for Ruhi in this one. They cant go back in time and change things but they can go with the flow and make memories now of the other FIRSTS their daughter would have in her life.

Also I saw what you did there Doc 😆 you really want them to have Pillow talk hmm? 😉😆 hopefully 2015 shall reward Puttar and his puttar' celibacy will come to an end 🤣
Edited by EkPaheli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Doc... 👏👏👏
Beautiful choice of song as always.. Its one of my favourites and the way you used it in the scene just made me go awww

I loved loved loved how u used the hum apni nayi yaadein banayenge here and started it off with Ruhi... I also how despite being in his own world and thoughts of his wife, Raman immediately sensed the need for Ruhi to be with her mother and rushed her to give her the comfort of her mother's lap.. And once done, he gets back to being the husband who wants his wife's time! The transition from giving her a nayi yaad as a mother to becoming puttar was damn cute and the whole song just made it all the more beautiful.. I could soo visualise the whole scene with the song playing in my head,,,👏👏👏

Doc, you rock! 😳🤗
Edited by Ohgod! - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww..thats so very cute...buddha buddhi romance is vert sweet
would love to see such cute scenes on the show too
thks for the pm buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i have a goofy smile plastered on my face while reading this os... n i have that smile till now while typing the reply... you didnt change their characterization at all... it was so so serene n beautiful...

i was myself wondering y the cvs didnt include the tooth situation... however...u have compensated very beautifully..so m happy... thansk for the lovely os... i m suddenly feeling very good...

ur inner buddhi's peck was also very natural... no matter how we want.. ISHRA will go slow n steady...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww this is sp sweet, I love that Raman marched to the Iyer's house just so Ishita wouldn't miss the moment of Ruhi's first tooth loss! Really well written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww that is such a beautiful OS! And if you no way can butcher the three characters there because anyone who reads your posts regularly knows how deeply you know your RAman, Ruhi and Ishita. This OS reminded me of old YHM where small but poignant moments defined the Ishra relationship journey. It was so heartwarming to see Raman realize this was a big 'parent' moment and him not wanting her to miss it... Yes these moments will form their 'hamari' memories.
Loved Ishita's whole 'north star' comment... Isn't it amazing when one realizes that they are not 'alone' anymore.. Someone truly is with them all the way in their journey of life..as a constant companion .. Like you said.. As their guiding light

And the whole part about present .. Vs past and future... My magical hue part... Wish the creatives thought this deeply... Inspite of all the turmoil a couple faces in relation to their family... There are still moments or time that they can steal from their 24 hours which is just for them... It doesn't need to be sexual... Just some moments where a couple shares themselves with each other.. Like ishita raman once did after amma's accident with a walk and a chat about inconsequential things on the bench... I crave those moments and miss those in the current run of the serial... And your OS gave me that .. Thank you !

And what a perfect strategy by our CEO of the year... To get his meetha sharbat and maybe launch his 'throw celibacy couch out' project 😉


Beautiful story .. Sweety... Am late in commenting as you know I was bit out of it.. Abd I didn't just want to write 'beautiful Os' as this is so much more .
Edited by GanBarunFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very cutly written...
esply the song nd the way raman involvd ishu...
the punishmnt was really romntic...
thnkx fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ishita: Usss tare ko dekh rahe ho aap? Woh north star, main harroz usse dekh ke soti thi, usse baatein karti thi, apna dil ka haal sunati thi par pechle 1 month se main aapko dekh ke soti hoon, apse baatein karti hon, and apna del ka haal sunati hoon. Aaj 1 month ke baad mere dost North star se mulakat hui hai. Aur abhi apne hi samjhaya ki hame apne aaj main rehna chahiye, so I am focusing on my present and saying hi to my long lost friend, the North Star

Raman: Yaad hai maine kaha tha, Yaadon ka kya hai, nayi ban gayengi...tumhari aur meri...hamari' ...bas yeh hamari yaadein hain, hamari beti badi ho rahi hai, aaj uske pehle baby tooth gira, and
I wanted you to be a part of this memory, Ruhi is as much your daughter as she is mine and her mother deserves to be a part of this very important moment of her life.

@BOLD - LOVED THESE LINES...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...
VERY CUTE AND HEART TOUCHING OS (I started musing abt my daughter after reading ur os)


Note: The inner buddhi in me only allowed me to write till the peck on the cheek, how the night progresses I leave it up to your imagination.


😆😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome. So simple theory of tooth fairy you transformed it into a mindblowing os. Lovely.
I liked you siggy too.

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