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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

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Yes... It's a mystery to most people how I spend most of my life reading and never tire of it- at work, at home, as a hobby... but hey it could be worse right?😛 lol be proud like I am about my obsession with puttar, there is no shame in it 😃

And FFs are the way I get through the tortures that the CVs out us through and continue to cling on with hope.😕

I know how you feel about him, but I'm not complaining - trust me. I can somewhat understand the *ahem* appeal... I am still continuing my investigating mind you- i have to be sure of exactly why you are so hypnotized... sooo... sadly I am going to have to force myself to stare at his beautiful face for hours still to make sure i see what you see.😉 No thanks! You can stop staring at my puttar there are enough people staring at him already , I need to patent him for myself 🤣

You definitely do Ishu justice, no worries there. He's sooo... and she's just got to work a little harder to win back all our hearts fully. We are only starting to see the Raman Shagun left behind [THIS confirms her crazy to me!😛] - and once we get the full effect I'm pretty sure we're all gonna need buckets to scoop up all the drool on the floor!😳 I can't wait for the full Romantic puttar to come out and serenade the missus, I am telling you i'll be in the ICU because i will go into shock and my body won't be able to take it 😳

Aaanyway, trust me I will never tire of your FFs , especially considering the track that just started🤢 Don't worry it will bring Raman and Ishita closer, silver lining in everything 😃

I am depending on the kindness and gutter minded-ness of my IF family to get me though this most difficult upcoming time.🤢

Please PM me when /if you post so I don't miss it.😃

Sorry for spamming!😳 Never apologize! There are no sorries and thank yous in mine or G's thread! I will def PM you if i write something 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Finally updated comment on pg 2 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for the late response Doc.. Just read it and WHOA.. Its Amazing Stuff
the way you have incorporated this beautiful song with the sharing of an event between a couple, as parents
No moment is small or big or ordinary. Its how we live them that makes it important and extra ordinary!
You wove a simple incident such as a broken tooth into such a beautiful exchange between the couple - everyone can relate to it and would go back in their own (real life) memory to reminisce the moment with their child or sibling.
Loved how you incorporated the promise that they would make new memories together - as a couple and as parents and his being her guiding light while she is his strength..Superb!!
the understanding, the talk using the eyes(my fave point about this couple☺️) everything was perfectly captured..
I always prefer reading exchanges filled with romance so double YAY to you for writing so beautifully...
And keep channeling the inner grandma for more such writing.🤗 while I twirl humming this song😆
Old songs have such a charm😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is G and Me - Thrilled on reading your OS.. Right G!



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathibalan

This is G and Me - Thrilled on reading your OS.. Right G!





Yep 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut


Thank you so much for your all the praise and encouragement! 😃 The baap beti relationship is one of my favorite things about this show and way KP and Ruhaanika portray their characters is just mind blowing, I am in love with Raman, Ruhi and Ishita, they way their characters are unfolding on screen everyday is so heart warming. 😳 We all need a guiding star in our lives and these two oldies are blessed to be each other's north star, I am a die hard romantic at heart so these sappy things make me all mushy and then i write such corny stuff 😆

Thank you so much for appreciating this, I am so happy that you enjoyed it, it made it worth the effort to write it. 😃 And I don't know about this being one of the great OSes, there are many brilliant writers on this forum who do an amazing job their stories read like movie screenplays but thank you nonetheless, you comment made my day and I will go to bed with a smile now.



Corny stuff 😆... This was just lovely , guess your heart should start thinking the other way around as well... I have loved all your works. I do agree this forum has lovely writers but this OS has that nice feeling in me.. Glad I could bring a smile on your face.. Your modest reply did bring a smile on my face ! Thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yello!!!! Read this as my bed time read after long day at work & let me tell you I slept with a smile on my face! This creativity of yours DEFINES YHM for me & you know this by now too. You can never go wrong with this trio scenes and its even better to see this work come at a time when on screen, there is not much shown. Theme of "Yaadon ka kya hai nayi ban jayengi" is beautifully incorporated and I love the fact that this particular OS includes "Ruhi's yaadein" in this whole "humari yaadein" scenario! Its all three of them that make a perfect family thus the notion of "humari notion" is not just limited to the couple at hand!!! And of course, Raman-Ishita angle is beautifully portrayed as well with perfect dialogues syncing totally with their characters. Superb work, Doc!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

Aww that is such a beautiful OS! And if you no way can butcher the three characters there because anyone who reads your posts regularly knows how deeply you know your RAman, Ruhi and Ishita. This OS reminded me of old YHM where small but poignant moments defined the Ishra relationship journey. It was so heartwarming to see Raman realize this was a big 'parent' moment and him not wanting her to miss it... Yes these moments will form their 'hamari' memories.

Loved Ishita's whole 'north star' comment... Isn't it amazing when one realizes that they are not 'alone' anymore.. Someone truly is with them all the way in their journey of life..as a constant companion .. Like you said.. As their guiding light Thanks G! It's your love for me that makes you think I could never butcher these 3 characters, but I'll take your biased compliment and run with it.😳 Puttar is such an endearing father, whenever I see him with Ruhi and Shavan my heart melts so I had to make him the guy who includes the 'parent' moment in 'hamari yaadein'.

And the whole part about present .. Vs past and future... My magical hue part... Wish the creatives thought this deeply... Inspite of all the turmoil a couple faces in relation to their family... There are still moments or time that they can steal from their 24 hours which is just for them... It doesn't need to be sexual... Just some moments where a couple shares themselves with each other.. Like ishita raman once did after amma's accident with a walk and a chat about inconsequential things on the bench... I crave those moments and miss those in the current run of the serial... And your OS gave me that .. Thank you ! G I really hope we get those bench scenes or the balcony scenes, you know just a couple taking a walk after dinner talking about their day, Ruhi, and the problems they face. Those small scenes will make us go bonkers lol

And what a perfect strategy by our CEO of the year... To get his meetha sharbat and maybe launch his 'throw celibacy couch out' project 😉 Project is on and puttar is making progress, meetha sharbat will be served soon, aakhir umeed pe duniya kayam hai 😳


Beautiful story .. Sweety... Am late in commenting as you know I was bit out of it.. Abd I didn't just want to write 'beautiful Os' as this is so much more . Okay I am blushing like a teenage girl now and I blame you! You know you have to say nothing at all and I would understand what you mean, remember 'you had me at hello' 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Thank you so much! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathibalan

Sorry for the late response Doc.. Just read it and WHOA.. Its Amazing Stuff

the way you have incorporated this beautiful song with the sharing of an event between a couple, as parents Swaths no need to apologize girl, I am just glad you read it and took out time to respond 😊, you know my love for music and this song happens to be one of my favs from the movie Waqt, such an amazing melody! 😃
No moment is small or big or ordinary. Its how we live them that makes it important and extra ordinary!
You wove a simple incident such as a broken tooth into such a beautiful exchange between the couple - everyone can relate to it and would go back in their own (real life) memory to reminisce the moment with their child or sibling. I love small gestures and in real lives we remember small gestures more than the big ones but our lives are made up of these tiny moments and I found Ruhanika so cute with that missing tooth and I was missing a cute Ishra-Ruhi moment so I was like write one 😆
Loved how you incorporated the promise that they would make new memories together - as a couple and as parents and his being her guiding light while she is his strength..Superb!!
the understanding, the talk using the eyes(my fave point about this couple☺️) everything was perfectly captured..
I always prefer reading exchanges filled with romance so double YAY to you for writing so beautifully...
And keep channeling the inner grandma for more such writing.🤗 while I twirl humming this song😆 Old grandma will be channeled time and again, inspite of real puttar's protest 😆, i am so happy you found it to be a fun read, it made it worth to post it. 😊
Old songs have such a charm😳

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