ff-My Life Starting With An Unknown Person updated part72(a) aug28 - Page 74

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sparkingsoul

too good

both parts are awesome

continue soon



thank you,i will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rk654

super awesome update... you wrote very beautifully...rain scene was superb...and their kiss

TYSM for pm



thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10

beautiful updates 😳
loved their late night outing 😳
raman's kisses ☺️...loved their rain romance 😳
update soon 😊



thank you,i will continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

sriya update when?

please update soonish miss it already



i need little more time dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yhmfflover

mujhe toh kabhi PM bhejogi nahi



hoo sent me a buddy request ,so that i can sent u pms whenever i update my story😛
Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
their outing was superb enjoyed ur update a lot keep writing such an amazing pieces seriously from starting this story is interesting enjoying a lot...
update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Admin im new to this blog n couple of days before i started reading this story. I just read 2 r 3 chapters for time pass and later i couldn't stop myself reading more n more. Im like completely addicted to ur story. Fantastic creator u r. i shld appreciate ur narration skills n depiction of the characters more lively. I totally enjoyed it laughed, cried, thrilled. this story is a complete mixture of all kind of emotions. I jss loved it like anyways it is fab. Lots of love for u frm my side. Congratulations for u fr having such creative brain.
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry friends i tried to post this part yesterday itself but unfortunately i deleted the part,so i written it again and posted down
thanks for ur encouragement,i read ur comments but feared to reply back if i may cross the limit again and wont be able to post this part again,i will reply u all back,😊
part-64

romi:he was sitting in the hall waiting for his bhai and bhabi
just then ishu and raman enters into the hall
romi:looks at ishu who was wearing raman's coat and at raman who was in his baby pink shirt both drenched completely
kya bhai kaha guum kar aarahi hi thum aur bhabi he asks with a grin on his face
raman:chup kar thumhara room jaakar sojavo
romi:i was tensed about my bhabi,hi na bhabi ?
ishu:ha romi,u r very cute devar,by saying both winks at each other
raman:dho duffers milkar drums kelna baandh karo,turning to ishitha "kya madam yaha isa hi kadne ka iradh hi kya chalo upar
romi:chalo bhabi nahi tho bhai ko bahuth gussa aayengi,by saying he rushes to his romi,to save himself from ramans punch
raman:turning to ishu,"aab thumko kya chalo upar"
ishu:follows raman with a smile playing on her lips
in ishra room:
raman:madrasan jaldhi jaakar dress change karo or else u will fall sick
ishu:leaves to washroom picking up her chudidhar,
raman:was standing near window looking out ,the rain has came down but still drizzling his thoughts were completely filled with ishitha
just them she comes out changing her dress
raman looks at her hearing door clicking sound,she was wearing a white and blue combination chudidhar with towel wrapped her wet hair
ishu:raman u too go and change the dress,u will fall sick
raman:hello madrasan,whom do u think of me,i said u before ,iam punjabi munda,very strong not like u madrasi
ishu:she was about to repay his words,raman not giving a chance walks to washroom
...
after few minutes:
ishu:what is that making him to take so much time to change the dress,she thinks while drying her hair it was already 3:00am when he will sleep he has to go to office tomorrow
with that she shouts,"raman aapko kithna time chahiye dress change karne keliye,jaldhi aavo u have to sleep or else u will sleep in the office tomorrow
raman:comes out wearing a grey t-shirt and pant with towel wrapped around his hair was wet not because of drenching in rain because of taking head bath
ishu:opens her mouth in shock,"raman r u mad why did u took head bath that too in this time when the surroundings are cool
raman:chup karo madrasan,i felt all muddy because of drenching rain at out so i took a bath what is the matter in it
ishu moving near to him she holds his hand while he look at her questioningly to get an answer for her gesture,she smiles at him lovingly which was reflected in her eyes
he simply walks following her,she makes him to sit at the corner of the bed,with the towel in her hands which she using she starts drying his hair speaking to him,"what if u fall sick raman,we drenched a lot in rain and
now u took head bath in this cool weather
raman:simply intaking her love
while she drying his hair as most sincere work for her his naughty mind starts playing,with that he wraps his hands around her waist pulling her closer to him almost resting his head on her stomach
ishu:she feels shy with his advances her cheeks turned to deep red with the blush,but getting remind of her pending work,she slaps on his arm which was around her
raman:kya madrasan kyou disturb kar rahi hu
ishu:raman let me do my work with that she turns her gaze towards his hair which she was drying suddenly a white hair was caught at her sight,instantly removing the towel she pulled that white hair,which makes him to scream aloud
she was startled by his shout and comes out of his embrace
raman:madrasan r u still angry at me,r u trying to take revenge on me,by pulling my hair
ishu:raman calm down everyone will wake up,i just plucked single hair,but u r shouting as if i plucked away whole ur hair
raman:even it is single it hurted me madrasan he says keeping a puppy face
ishu:hugs raman who was still sitting at the edge of the bed as an obedient child
raman happily wraps his hand around her waist,the next moment he was surprised by untimely doubts
ishu:raman how old r u?
raman:yeh kaisi javab hi madrasan
ishu:u r hiding something raman
raman:looks at her with unbelievable expression 'kya madrasan dimak karab hogaya kya baarish ki vachaan se
ishu:raman u have white hair raman,with a pout she speaks "what if someone sees u with white hair beside me,they think i was married to an old man
raman:he pulls her which makes her to fall on his lap "kya madrasan what u r speaking is iam looking old,kal tho kaha tha na thum mi sharuhkhan se smart hu aab phir se mujje bakra karne ka trial math karo i wont fall in ur trap
ishu:smiles at raman and speaks "u became very talented raman"
raman:hello madam mi hu talent bachpan se samajgayi thumko
ishu:looking at him,"hmm my hubby is very talented and handsome but he has white hair in his 28only
raman:ruffling his hair ,kya madrasan it is only one but u r making hill over it,by saying he makes her to get up from her
ishu:chalo raman naraz math ,u r handsome smart and intelligent teeke
raman:even if u wont accept the truth wont change he says faking his anger
ishu:raman u r more stubborn than a kid,leave it and let me dry ur hair before u sleep or else u will fall sick
raman:madrasan kithna baar samjna padega thumko mi punjabi hu thumhari jaise madrasi nahi samajgayi thumko aur nahi
ishu:with a pout "eventhough raman let me do it for my sake please"
raman:ok chalo shuru karo thumhara kaam lekin ek baath dyan me rakho even if a single hair of mine falls on the ground i wont leave u
ishu:teeke baba,its already 3:00 when u will sleep? by saying she resumes her work of drying her hair
raman:madrasan why these chudidhars always wear something attractive na?
ishu:raman if u feel the attraction through ur eyes it is an illusion and it wont be last for longtime
if u feel the same attraction through heart then it will be forever
raman:madrasan kahi thum mumbai me writings nahi kiya tha na
ishu:kuch bhi raman now go and sleep
raman:getting down from the bed starts searching for something at his shelves
ishu:raman aab kya hi,sojavo na
raman:milgaya madrasan
ishu:kya
raman:home theatre ka remote
ishu:aab iska kya jaruri hi
raman:u said that u want to watch movie,so u r seeing a movie in 70mm but in our home in our room not in theatre
ishu:raman lekin aap kab rest karengi
raman:pulling her towards the bed he makes her to sit on the bed "aab bathavo kounsa movie dekhna hi thumko"
ishu:raman meri baath suno na
raman:r u interested or not yeh bathavo mujje
ishu:yes but
raman:no but tell me which movie u want to see
ishu:kadhal kottai
raman:looks at her not getting what she said"kya bol rahi hu madrasan english or hindi me bathavo
ishu:its film name raman tamil movie,meri favourite hero azith after rajnikanth
raman:its unfair ishitha i was thinking to watch a movie with u but u r asking me tamil movie
ishu:yeh bhi movie hi na raman
raman:but i cant understand tamil meri maa
ishu:i will translate u raman,its very different love story
raman:he connects his lappy to hometheatre and plays the movie sitting at the centre of bed near his wife both resting on headrest
ishu:snuggling closer to him she places her hand around him looking at the screen keenly
while raman looking at her excitment
raman:seeing the start of play he asks "madam lagtha hi yeh bahuth purani hi"
ishu:i think so when i was 3yrs this movie was released,now stop ur talking and let me see the movie
raman:madrasan thumhara test bahuth old hi
ishu:raman first see the movie and tell me whether u didnt liked it really
raman:ishitha
ishu:kya raman let me see the movie it was already started she speaks agitatedly at him for disturbing her
raman:there was something near ur cheek
ishu:she turns towards him speaking "kaha raman"
raman:he comes closer to her diverting her mind saying here and there,suddenly he places his lips on her which surprises her to the core
while he smirks at her cupping her face to enjoy his kiss
while she shyly closes her eyes unable to meet his eyes holding his t-shirt tightly allowing him to do whatever he wants
after a few minutes he leaves her allowing to take breath
she shyly hides her face in his chest
raman:to divert her mind he speaks "kya madrasan i told u not to apply any lipstick but u r still in action to spoil my apetite
ishu:coming out of his embrace he slaps his hand angrily saying "jhoot math bolo raman i stopped applying from the day when u
seeing raman's smirk she keeps silent
raman:kya what i did on that day
ishu:hugging him shyly she speaks "aab thum kya kiya vahi kiya uss dhin bhi
raman:u look soo cute madrasan when u r shying infront of me
ishu:kuch bhi
raman:ok ok now resume ur movie orelse u will start ur rant saying i didnt let u to watch the movie
ishu:still hugging looks at the screen to continue the movie
raman:while raman is lost in thoughts(st):i was unable to understand what was in ur mind,u r not stopping me from getting close to u,and also u r not speaking out whether u r
ready to take our relationship to next level,whatever it may be i will wait for ur answer madraasan,he simply stares at her in his thoughts
after 1hr he looks at her who was sleeping on his chest cuddling into him with her arms around his shoulder
he turning off the movie holds her to make her sleep comfortably
at that moment the punjabi munda starts sneezing repeatedly
ishu:she jerks with his sneezes and looks at him who was continuously sneezing
while raman was horribly controlling his sneeezings because of which his nose almost turned to red
ishu:starts laughing seeing his cold plight
raman:angrily stares at her continuing his sneezes,kya madrasan u r very much happy seeing my plight,get some balm know?
ishu:thum punjabi munda hi na isa kaisa thum bimar padjayengi you r strong raman,so dont worry u will be perfect
raman:u r countering me i understood sometimes even pujabi munda will also get sick,
ishu:"oyy madrasan mi pujabhi munda hu we are very strong not like ur madrasis samajgayi" she imitates him pointing a finger at him
raman:thum pagal dikhathi hu thumko mi kya hu,rkb se kelna aacha baath nahhi hi by saying he jumps down from the bed to catch her who already skipped away from him
ishu:runs around the bed to escape from his chase shouting at him,"raman miney kya kiya thum jo kuch kaha miney yeh replay kiya please raman i cant run around more
raman:then dont run i didnt asked u to run
ishu:no i wont stop
raman:finally holds her "madrasan bahuth shouk hi naa mujje instigate karne me dekho mi kya kartha hu thumko,by saying he starts tickling her
while ishitha laughs her heart out with tickling sensation,holding her breath she speaks to him in broken words "raman...please...sorry...raman...aap bahuth..strong...hi,...
please...raman...iam...unable...to...breath
she tries hardly to get out from him which makes both to loss balance and slips on the bed
raman on the bed while ishitha on his top
raman:haaa madrasan meri kamar thoot gayi,kithna moti bangayi thum
ishu:with a pouting lips "kya raman u did everything and u r blaming me"
raman:pehle uto madrasan its paining
ishu gets up while he struggling on the bed with his backache "with tearful eyes she speaks raman jyada pain ho rahi hu kya?"
raman:looking at her tears,"madrasan choti baath par bhi roh kyu rahi hu madrasan"
ishu:rushes to cupboard,and searches for the balm,returning back she slowly makes him to get up from the bed
"dekho raman miney kaha tha na aap budda ho rahi hu"
raman:hey bagavan here iam suffering from backache but she is worrying about my age
dekho madrasan from 20's i have this back pain and to that today i drived on the bike so it was increased with this fall now
ishu:helps raman to remove his t-shirt,mouthing sorry
"aap aab bed me soo javo raman, face the bed raman i will apply balm on u"
raman does the same as if an obedient student
ishitha starts applying the balm on his back with her smooth hands tenderly while raman smiles feeling her lovely hands on his body
after applying the balm she asks him to wear his shirt back while raman gets a naugty idea on his mind
raman:madrasan dont disturb me,i was exhausted totally now,see i want to sleep its already 5:00am,so better dont disturb me and accept that u cant resist this handsome raman bhalla
ishu:kuch bhi raman,iam saying to wear because u r already feeling cold now without shirt u will feel more cold
raman:no iam not feeling cold by saying he turns to her side to face her with a smirk
ishu:switching of the lights she sleeps at the edge of the bed far from raman while raman at the centre
raman:kya madrasan wont u sleep as usual hugging me
ishu:no ur body will be cold ,i wont sleep saying that she closes her eyes covering with the quilt to stop her blushing and to hide it from her handsome husband
raman:i will see madrasan how u will sleep at that end without hugging me today by speaking to himself he closes his eyes pretending as if he was soon asleep
after some minutes she slowly peeks from her quilt to look at raman whether he slept or not,seeing him in peaceful sleep she moves closer to him,as usually wrapping her hands around his waist placing her head on his chest,covering both of them with her quilt not to get cold for him as he was sleeping without shirt,she smiles at his heart which reached to him,he smiles at her childish antics
he wraps his hands around her tightly not to let her out from his embrace while she smiles at his love for her,soon both drifts into a deep slumber after a exhausting night
...
at 9:00am
both the pair are in deep sleep with a content heart
sudden ring of his mobile jerks him from his sleep with his beautiful wife,looking at her who was snuggling to him almost laying her half part on him a smile escapes from his lips,before hearing another ring he attends the call not to disturb his beauty sleep with almost lost voice which he didnt understood untill he spoke out saying hello
mihir:bhai what happened to ur voice,
raman;"bewakoof subah subah aur kuch kaam nahi hi kya mera neend karab karne ka bina sone dho mihir"he speaks out with a lots of struggling which was unable to understand by mihir
mihir:in a crying tone,bhai mujje kuch bhi nahi samaj rahi hu thumhara baath kya hogaya thumko
raman:haa mihir chod dho dont talk to me by saying he cuts the call even mihir didnt understood anything
ishu:she wakes up from her sleep with raman's movements and looks at him
raman:hugging her back he speaks "sleep back madrasan iam feeling good in ur embrace i want to sleep more" he closes his eyes for another round of slumber
ishu:she didnt got what raman spoken with fear she wakes him again speaking "raman u r speaking something i didnt got what u r saying what happened to ur voice"
raman:unable to voice out more he closes his again to sleep more
ishu:getting out from his embrace she speaks to him in tense "kuch baath karo raman kya huva aapka aavaz ko"
raman:please sojavo madrasan
ishu:she gets down from the bed speaking "raman aapko kuch huva wait i will call daadi i was unable to catch ur words patha nahi kya hogaya thumko ek raath me"
she runs out from the room seeing her husband losing his voice to call daadi
while raman slaps his head saying "pagal madrasan"

give ur feedbacks even if it is good or bad so that i can improve it,i specially written this part as janani dear asked me for ishra conversation ,sorry dear if i disappointed u,and i will fulfill ur other wish also soon😳 thanks for ur lovely long comments😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
sriya superb!
the way they took care of each other1
and raman ka confidence hehe
super cute
i loved the end were she goes of to call dadi haha
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Posted: 10 years ago
pyari update
eagerly waiting for next part
plz update soon

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