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Posted: 10 years ago
hi friends i hope u will enjoy these two parts😊

part-63(a)


raman:just enters into his cabin (st):come on raman beta today mihir also not with u entire work should be done by myself romi doesnt know all the dealings,i did wrong by stopping him doind MBA
in the next instant his thougts runs to ishitha the words she said while crying"raman i cant stay in this house alone all the day,iam feeling alone"
he thinks about his early days of their marriage who he smashed her MBA application form how she cried looking at those papers
raman(st):really u r such a jerk raman how could u make her cry but she forgiven everything which i did to her,she is loving me how she loved her appa,only because of me,she is not at all letting her father name from her mouth,which she used to chant her father name everday continuously but only because of me to live with me she sacrifised
everything but i became very selfish i was not in a position to support her,sorry ishitha but i cant lost u at any cost,almost u made me to loss u forever,by god's grace u were fine,i cant afford anything which keeps u away from me
romi:bhai:US consortium members reached the conference hall,shall we go
raman:coming out from his thoughts,ya bring that files romi by saying he walks into the conference
..in bhalla mansion...
ishu:in the call "sanju please i need ur help please"
sanjana:mam its my pleasure how can i help u
ishu: i need some flower bouquets please
sanjana:mam aap baar baar please math bolo yeh saab aapka gardens hi we are just ur workers
ishu:ok dont say that sanjana,i need a white tulips and white roses bouquets
sanjana:ok where should i deliver them
ishu:i will send u my home address u just send it to here by 12:00pm
sanjana:ok i will
...
ishu:runs to upstairs with a smile on her fac
daadi:why ishitha is using land phone where was her mobile
...
at 12:00
she gets bouquets from the delivery man
later she calls the driver
driver:mam what should i do
ishu:hands over those bouquets with a card "deliver these to raman"
driver:leaves agreeing to her
...
at 1:00pm in ramans office
US clients:raman project idea was good we talked to german clients they will call back us soon,shall we go to lunch
raman:(st):ishitha will send lunch if i wont eat that then she will get hurted
pilo:common raman it has been months we meet lets have lunch together
raman:no mr.pilo actually iam not feeling hungry u carry on please
akash:common raman u r going to crack a big project u have to give company for us
fb:
ishu in US "raman stay away from that akash he is not a good person,come back soon i will be waiting"
...
raman:coming out of his thoughts,akash u have many people around u to accompany
turning to romi,romi u go and accompany for their lunch
raman:walks to his cabin
(st):jhansi rani where is my lunch i was hungry morning u wasted my full energy and now these people are completely drained my energy
at the same his secretary walks in with a carriage and two flower bouquets,she was hardly balancing all these
raman:immediately walks towards her to help her,placing the bouquets on the table,he asks her"what lisa anything special u brought two bouquets but why to my cabin"
lisa:sir its for u,ur driver has brought these bouquets,carriage and this card by saying she leaves handing over the card,saying "might be urs girl friend she written on the card,biting her tongue sorry for reading it
raman immediately rushes to the door and bolts it after lisa leaving the cabin
sitting on his chair,kya madrasan thumhara kithab me aur ek bakra ka naam likhaya,poor lisa if she comes to know that u fooled her,how she will feel
caressing the tulips and roses,"beautiful madrasan thumhara jaise,kithna cute lag rahi hu yeh flowers,my hunger was side taken by ur sweet gesture
he notices the greeting card,he reads the note"to my boy friend from his girl friend"
he chuckles reading the note,"mi thumhara boy friend kab bangaya madrasan too naughty,by saying he opens the card"


raman stop smiling now,i mentioned as girl friend because someone might read it,now listen to me
thank u sooo much raman i love u very much,u r taking me for a drive iam very much exited,come soon raman i miss u,all the dishes are ur favorite,eat well because at morning i made u exhausted
lots of kisses for u
yours,
pagal madrasan she draws a pouting smiley

raman smiles at her note,i too miss u madrasan i love u more than u love me
at 3:30pm
still discussions are going with US people
raman:pilo i want to leave now,i have some commitments at 4:00
pilo:but raman,we talked to german clients they r asking for a video conference first to know about ur project
how can u leave in the middle u have to present it
raman:but i have an urgent work
akash:to add some fuel "what urgent meeting will be raman,other than this it is more prestiguous project for u more than for our consortium
did u have any other dealings apart from our consortium
raman:gritting his teeth controlling his anger "akash its none of ur business to interfere in middle
akash:instigating raman to the core"common raman u r very silly,i was one of the member in this consortium,we made our way along from US to INDIA because u requested the consortium that u cant come to US,now german clients are ready to talk with us,but u have some other commitments,its very prestigious not only u we too will be in loss if u leave in middle,
a business man should know how to give 100% to his professional life
raman:not caring his words looks at the other members
pilo:sorry raman ur presence here is very necessary
raman:lefting with no chance "ok mr.pilo please inform them to connect to the conference as soon as possible
pilo:ok by saying they leaves his cabin
romi:what happened bhai why r u not happy,where u have to go,its another big project then our company will start in germany also
raman:nothing romi u call mihir and enquire him where he was,did he dropped rinky or not
romi:leaves nodding his head
raman(st):sorry madrasan i couldnt do anything now
at 4:30 in bhalla's mansion:
...
ishu:pacing in her room,"raman where are u its already 4:30 u promised me that u will arrive by 4:00 come sooon raman"
...
in office
raman:pilo when they will connect to conference one hour passed away
pilo:raman be cool their associates didnt joined till now it takes more 30mins i expect so
raman:storms away angrily saying" i will come within 15mins,i want refreshment"
...
in mansion:
ishu:walks down and calls to raman through landline
raman:lifts the call seeing landline number of his mansion "hello"
ishu:raman kaha hi thum aadha ganta hogaya thum ne kaha tha na sharp 4:00 me aayengi ghar,aab aap kyoun nahi aaya
mi ready hogaya
raman:he feels a sting in his heart understanding he is going to disappoint ishu
"ishita i cant come now sorryyy.."
ishu:in a sad tone almost tears welling in her eyes and pain reflecting in her voice she speaks "raman aappp kya bol rahi hu"
raman(st):i cant even hear her sad voice if she cries now i even cant concentrate on this presentation this bloody akash was waiting for a chance to instigate the members i wont give a chance to him after completing the meeting i will rush to home to take ishitha for outing
ishu:raman boliye aap kya keh rahi hu?
raman:nothing ishitha it will be some late another hour,please understand me
ishu:ok aap pakka aajayengi naa ek gante ke baadh
raman:in a low voice hhaa
ishu:ok bye come fast i will be waiting for u she kisses him through the phone saying "i love u raman"
raman:wiping his tears i too love u madrasan he hangs the phone fisting his hand with anger over akash
at 9:00 in the night:
ishitha was still in the saree waiting for raman "raman aap meri calls kyou nahi lift kar rahi hu" she wipes a lone tear escaping from her eyes
daadi:toshi where is ishita she still didnt came down dinner ka time huva naa
mrs.bhalla:how could i know what she was doing in her room from evening
daadi:when did u have time to check her what she was doing what she want,by saying she calls ishitha"ishitha kaha hi beta thum jaldhi neeche aavo"
ishu:walks down listening to daadi's words
daadi:wont u have ur dinner what r u doing in ur room from the evening u didnt came down to cook dinner
ishu:coming towards daadi she sits infront of her on her knees "daadi raman said he will take me for outing"
daadi:but romi called me saying that they will get late some meeting was there with clients
ishu:tears starts rushing from her eyes which she was holding from evening "raman mujjse jhoot bola voh kaha tha voh aayengi "
mrs.bhalla:she gets angry on ishitha for accusing her son "oye what do u think of raman he is not playing there,business kar rahi hu ghar mey bhait kar kaana banana nahi hi business karna"
ishu:listening to her words rushes to her room in tears
daadi:thoshi bahuth hogaya thumhara gussa voh "raman ka pari hi" aagli baar thum thumhara aavaz uss ladki par utaya tho mi thumko thumhara amma paas bhejdungi kabadhar
by saying she storms into her room
...in raman's office...
pilo:raman presentation was awesome i think german clients liked it iam 100% sure the project will br ours
raman:gives a fake smil
akash:now can u give ur company for dinner
pilo:why wont,he will definitely accompany us for dinner,turning to raman "raman u should say no now"
raman:but
pilo:please raman u have to prove akash was wrong
raman:gritting his teeth at akash "ok pilo"
...
at 11:00pm raman and romi reaches the mansion
raman(st):i hope ishitha was ok
he notices daadi sitting in the hall with a sleeping eyes
toshi comes to hall seeing the lights
raman:daadi "why r u sleeping here"
daadi:raman thum ishitha se jhoot bola kya?
raman:his face fells down
daadi:isa kyou kiya raman thum
raman:if i inform her that i will be late,i cant take her for outing she will cry,and listening to that i cant concentrate on work,so i asked romi to inform u
daadi:but she will be more hurted because of ur lie
raman:but i cant see her tears or her sad voice it will prick my heart daadi
"did she ate?"
daadi:no
before saying anything he walks towards the stairs
toshi:raman u eat and go
raman:maa i had my dinner with US members by saying he rushes to stairs
he opens the door "there his lovely wife sleeping on the bed cuddling with a very big teady bear still in the saree"
raman slowly walks towards her,he observes the tear smitten face of her,"caressing her hair sorry ishitha i broken my promise,but i didnt do intentionally"
ishu:tilts slightly with his caresses
he leans down pecks her forehead lovingly
ishu:she startles and wakes up while raman moves back
raman:ishitha come and have ur dinner
ishu:moves back hugging her teady tightly
raman:"sorry ishitha this time pucca i did my best to come back but"
ishu:not heeding to his words she tries to sleep again
raman:ishitha please yeh silent treatment math dedho mujje i cant bear ur silence"
to divert her mind he touches her teady "wow this was very pretty but i didnt see it before"
ishu:moving more far "yeh mera hi meri akka ne diya mujje"
raman:wow u love teadies shall i buy u more teadies
ishu:no need i wont accept anything from the person who breaks their promises and tells lies
raman:holding his ears "sorry madrasan please maaf kijiye"
ishu:turns away her face away
raman:pulls out the teady from her hands which makes her more angry
ishu:meri teady mujje dedho she shoots daggers at him
raman(st):madrasan mujje yeh jhansi rani ka avathar bhi bahuth pasand hi
raman:nods his head in negative
ishu:moves near him to get the teady
raman(st):aajavo madrasan aavo
ishu:meri teady mujje dedho she tries to get the teady from his hands sitting on her knees while raman shifts the teady from one hand to other playing with his madrasan
raman:mujje maaf karengi tho mi dedhungi yeh teady
ishu:no i wont give my teady
raman's gaze slowly shifts towards her waist while her pallu near her waist was flying in and out disturbing his view
ishu:finally holds the teady as her husband was busy in looking her
raman:immediately comes back from his thoughts when he feels other hold on the teady
ishu:she looses her balance while pulling the teady towards her and ends in falling over him
raman:wraps his hands around her waist
ishu:chodo mujje i hate u
raman:his eyes are welled up with tears instantly listening those words from her
ishu:notices tears in his eyes and the loosen grip of his hands on her
he tries to get up
ishu:falls over him again wrapping her hands over his neck,aap roo rahi hu,she asks innocently
raman:tries to wipe up his tears
ishu:leaning over his face she kisses his eye lids saying sorry i love u too much very much
raman:smiles at her
ishu:but u hurted me raman i didnt asked u na to take me out u urself said that u will take me out but u broken ur promise
raman:sorry ishitha i doesnt want to hurt u but sudden meetings made me to stay in the officce,will u be happy if i fail in business
ishu:nods her head negatively
raman:if i wouldnt stay then i would have lost the project
ishu:its ok raman but dont lie to me next time
raman:sorry aab kana kavo come
ishu:no iam not hungry by saying she gets up from him taking her teady she moves to sleep
raman:holding her hand "why r u not feeling hungry"
ishu:i dont know
raman:he understood that she forgiven him only because she cant see tears in his eyes but she was hurted deeply he made her to wait for a long time and didnt turned up,he keeps himself in her place
what he would have done if she makes him wait for a whole day,definitely he would have shouted on her,he would have made the house up and down
coming out from his thoughts he notices her settling on the bed
ishu:raman soo javo bahuth late hogaya
raman:walking towards her he forwards his hand to her
ishu:she looks at him questioningly
raman:mrs raman bhalla i want a mini drive now can u accompain me
ishu:but raman
raman:but vut kuch nahi hi madrasan i have to compensate u,i promised u but i can take u for a mini drive ha bolo madrasan
ishu:lekin raman,mummiji kuch kahengi tho
raman:mrs.bhalla iam with u,r u interested or not
ishu:nods her head positively with a chirping smile,
raman:hmm chalo aab face wash karo aur jaldhi se neeche aavo
by saying raman walks down to inform daadi
in the hall
...
daadi:who was waiting for raman sees him coming down "
raman thum abhi thak dress kyou nahi change kiya,aur ishitha kisa hi voh teek hi naa?
ishu:walks down after getting ready quickly
daadi:looks at her 'yeh bhi aabhi thak saree me hi
toshi looks at both of them
raman:daadi we are going out
daadi:raman aadha raath hogaya aab bahar jaayengi kya thum dono ,
thum thak hogaya raman
raman:only 1hour daadi we will be back soon
toshi:looks at ishu angrily
ishu:with fear she steps back
raman:he looks at her with a smile he takes her hand "daadi please late ho rahi hu,by saying he walks out with ishu
he walks towards his car
ishu:raman bike me chalengi
raman:madrasan bahuth tanda hi
ishu:raman accha lagengi iam not feeling cool it had been long back having a ride on bike
raman:thinks whether it will be ok or not to travel on bike
ishu:snapping him out of his thoughts "raman aapko bike chalna aatha hi naa"
raman:looks at her surprisingly at her untimely questioning "yeh kaisi question hi madrasan,obviously i know how to drive the bike,i used to go college on bike
chalo kaha jaana hi
ishu:mujje delhi mey kuch nahi patha raman i visited very less places in delhi
raman:he starts the bike 'madrasan kithna time lagengi thumko jaldhi baito
ishu:coming infront of him wears the helmet on his head
raman:kya madrasan ithna raath mey bhi traffic rules follow karna jaruri hi kya
ishu:sitting on his back seat,"no mr.bhalla,u r very famous businessman,if someone sees u like this with me ur girlfriend then they will feel jealous and disturbs us,
i dont want that so u have to hide ur face with this helmet
raman:smiling at her answer "ok mrs.bhalla now iam in ur service,
he starts driving while ishu at his back sitting on one side without taking the support of raman
raman:madam u can hold me
ishu:its ok raman it wont be good if anyone sees like this
raman:oy madrasan u dont know how to be a girl friend
ishu:ha why i dont know
raman:girl friend boy friend ko chupak kar baitengi bike mey
ishu:she smiles shyly listening to raman while raman looks at her from his rear view
raman:come on madrasan riding me mazaa nahi aaraha hu
ishu:wraps her hand around raman waist adjusting herself closer to raman
raman:smiles lovingly through his helmet(dont ask me how i know😉)
...






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part-63(b)


soon they reaches a icecream parlour
ishu:raman ice cream parlour? mujje bhook lag rahi hu
raman:he removes his helmet saying "kumbakaran what u said when i asked u at home?"
ishu:at that time i was angry at u
raman:side hugging her "now what u feeling for me"
ishu:looks at her surroundings seeing no one she moves closer to him while raman looks on at her placing a soft kiss on his cheek she steps back
raman:pulling her towards him "girl friend boy friend ko aisa nahi kiss karengi"
ishu:hmm tho kaisa kiss karengi
raman:pulling her towards him gives a peck on her lips
ishu:haa raman isa kiss karengi girl friends baahar road me
raman:aur jyada kuch karengi
ishu:chii raman aapko sharam nahi hi chalo andhar chalengi
both walks in entwining his hands
receptioninst:looks at them with sleeping eyes in a sleeping tone "welcome mam welcome sir,how can u we please u"
raman and ishitha looks at each other and chuckles looking at the time
receptionist:waiter sir madam ke paas order lelo
waiter:who will come to eat ice cream at 12:30 these people wont let me to sleep even at nights
raman:ishitha kya chahiye thumko
ishu:mujje ek venila aur ek chocolate ice cream chahiye
raman:dho ice cream
ishu:i didnt had my dinner raman i want two ice creams
raman:waiter 2venila and one chocolate icecreams
waiter leaves
ishu:raman i said only 1 venila and i chocolate
raman:hello madrasan should i watch u while u enjoying 2 icecreams,one is for me
she gives a pout
afer starts relishing her two flavors while raman stares at her
ishu:raman aap abhi thak nahi kaaya,meri dho icecreams katham hogaya
raman:yeh bhi thum kaalo by saying he forwards his half eaten ice cream
ishu:raman my hand is paining thum kilavo
raman:my pleasure mrs bhalla,come and sit beside me
ishu:like a good student obeying his orders shifts her seat beside him
raman:r u still hungry he asks while feeding her
ishu:enjoying one more icecream "hmm jyada nahi "
after finishing her icecream "aab ghar chalna hi kya raman she asks in a sad tone"
raman:looks at receptionist who is in his half sleep and seeing no where the waiter
he cups her face
ishu:raman kya hogaya
raman:bringing his face towards her,he licks her upper lip which was covered with bits of ice cream,looking into her eyes
he himself distances from her after his task
while ishu lost in his eyes
he walks towards her after paying the bill
"snapping her from her thoughts kya madrasan yaha parlour me bhait karne ka iradha hi kya?"
giving no choice to her he walks out taking her hand into his while she just follows him like a doll
near their bike"now where madrasan he asks her patting her shoulder"
ishu:coming our from her dreams "ha kya raman"
raman:ayyo madrasan kaha hi thum "aab kaha jaana hi he asks loudly this time"
ishu:what is the time now raman
raman:1:00am
ishu:mujje movie dekhna hi raman
raman:madrasan isa wishes math pocho aab,see in no theatre they will play a movie now
ishu:mujje abhi ghar nahi jaana hi
raman:ok yeh place seclude hi naa,yaha walk pe chalengi for 15mins then we will go back to our home
ishu:hmm ok only for this time
raman:pulling her towards him "chalo mera saath"
ishu:looking into his eyes she speaks "i love u raman"
raman:keeping her close to him "i know madrasan"
they silently walks in each other thinking about each other
ishu:raman its too cool ghar chalengi bahuth time bhi hogaya naa
raman:humm chalo
while walking back its start drizzling
raman:ishitha jaldhi chalo it was about to rain
ishu:raman not about to it is raining by saying she realises her hand from him rushes to the centre of road
raman:madrasan kya kar rahi hu jaldhi aavo we have to reach home before the rain gets heavy
ishu:raman thum bhi aavona accha lagengi baarish me beeg jana
raman:looks on at her she was wearing the saree which was brought by him looking gorgeous she weared the pallu in pleated form giving nice view of his favourite spot
his chain of thoughts were broken by heavy rain both were totally drenched
"ishitha come on we have to go"
ishu:raman dekho kithna acchi hai baarish,i love this rain
raman:walks towards her enjoying her wet attire while ishu was enjoying her rain "he pulls her towards him making her to land on his chest,she looks at him questioningly
raman placing her strand of hair at her back of earlobe,he pulls her more close towards him holding her waist,while she shivers both under his touch and cool breeze"
caressing her face "chalo na before i lost my control"
she remains still in the position as no words are getting into her mind
raman:starts kissing her forehead,nose,eyelids,chin while she clutches to his coat as words were halted in her throat
nuzzling his face in her neck he continues tasting her skin
finally when he was about to capture her lips he gets halted listening to her sneeze
raman:he comes back to his senses with her sneeze,he steps back giving her the time to regain herself
ishitha come lets go he holds her hand
she starts sneezing continuously
raman:rufling his hair ,this is why i will say u madrasan dekho u madrasis are very delicate,with small rain u were attacked with cold,wait come with me now we cant go on bike,u will soon fall sick
dekho humara pujabhi munda kithna strong hu by saying he takes her under a tree
she was shivering with cold while he was blabbering on her,finally when he turns her gaze towards him he sees her shivering with cold
raman:taking out of his coat wraps it around her "madrasan bahuth tanda hi kya by saying he hugs her to give warmth
he calls to romi
romi:in a sleeping tone kya bhai aab thum kyou call kiya,u sleep and let me sleep because of ur american team i stayed in office with u till 11:30
raman;arey chup kar bewakoof send me a car,driver is not lifting my call,
romi:what r u doing till now at outside it is 2:00 pm bhai
raman:i have watch shut ur mouth and send me the car he says the address to him
romi:kya bhai mujje sukoon kab milengi mujje aazadh dedo bhai
ishu:chuckles listening to romi rantings
raman:arey chup bhewakoof jaldhi car bhejo yaha mi aur thumhara bhabi beeg rahi hu baarish me
romi:jerking from his sleep "what bhabi is with u in this late night wait i will send the car immediately by saying he hangs the call
raman:dekho bhabi kaa naam bathane ke ek sec me car bhej rahi hu
ishu:giggling at him jalan math raman voh meri dewar hi
raman:saab ek bangaya mujje akela chod diya
ishu:hugging raman"stop ur melodrama raman
...
soon the car comes to their place
while raman and ishu enters into the car zooming to their mansion


shravani dear i kept my promise by giving double updates😊
now its ur duty to review the two parts let me know how u felt😛
Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Reading your updates, even I feel like getting drenched in rain at this night.awesome updates dear. Pls update the next one asap.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updates Ishita is so cute she can't see tears in raman's eyes the same way even Raman can't see her cry or hurt they are made for each other . When will dis toshiji change?? Glad dat Raman acknowledged that only to be with him she left her family who are everything to her bt his concern is also ryt he can't live without her... Enjoying ice cream and rain is so cute
Toni's reaction after hearing Bhabi is so cute
Plzz update d next part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update...

That aakash 😡...but then agar wo nhi hota to itni romantic night kaise aati...
I love ishu...She is SO SO SO SWEET...

Awww they love each other so much...
Seeing tears she forgave him...
He cant see her cry...

I sm so loving this...

Continue soon
Thanks for pm 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update 😊
felt sad for ishra and loved raman for taking ishu for a drive even when it's too late and he being tired a lot😭
loved the update a lot
please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updates😳

Raman

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Posted: 10 years ago
Super awesome update... loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear thanks fr double update...

rain romnace was awesome...


waiting fr raman to loose control nd tak their relatn to new level...

this akash is irking me...gadha kaika...

when does toshiji wil be good with ishita...??

loved the way ishra interacted with each other nd how raman made up fr ishu...

in ishra land...


cant wait fr next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
too good
both parts are awesome

continue soon

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