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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
wow...sch a nice updte...
realy bala's wrds mkes me rofl...abt reslts postpone...
nd hw mch vandu tease ishu bt she alwys tc of her...
loved their family...
dis dadi so cute...nw i hav to see hw ishra meet fr frst tym...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update 👏
please update soon


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there are many twists and turns around but each part will be liked by u people ,but be patience

part-11
daadi:is looking at the entrance of the temple for ramans arrival
ishu and raman enters into temple at the sametime but they doesnt look at eachother
daadi witnesses the pair and her eyes were fixed on the beautiful couple😛

raman sees daadi and ishitha sees her family they both goes in opposite sides😕
daadi:eyes following ishitha which was missed by raman,raman comes to daadi and stands infront of her calling her continuously saying 'daadi' but she was looking at ishu followed by bala who was close to her,being exhausted by calling her while mihir was smiling,raman comes near to daadi and screams in her ear saying daadi😃
daadi:with the shout trembles and rubs her ear she pulls raman by twisting his ear and asks what happened to u why r u shouting in my ears iam not deaf😡
with that both raman and mihir laughs
raman:turning to mihir says mihir tell her how many times i called her from 5mins,she is swinging with her passed away husband in her dream world😉
daadi:smilingly pulls him to near her and applies kumkum on his forehead and says shut ur mouth,and gets the puja items that pandit said to mihir about it u both go and get them
raman:ok by then they leaves
amma:also applies kumkum to ishitha,while daadi looking at the family who were sittin opposite mandap to her,she cant hear their voice
appa:madhu it will take some time to do puja till then we can have a overlook of temple
everyone agrees
ishu:appa u go i cant even take a step already my stomach is shouting with hungry😕
appa:ok beta but u dont go anywhere they all leaves
daadi:looks on ishu,her first visit made daadi feels very nice
ishu:holding her belly starts cursing her amma,ayyo murgan till how much time i have to starve,its already 1:00 this amma always keeps conditions and restrictions she has no work other than torturing me😡,she suddenly looks at daadi who is watching her
daadi:turns to other side noticing ishu looked at her
ishu:not caring to daadi again starts her sobbing for being starved,and she again looks at daadi,then daadi looking at some other side the same action is repeating by both of them😉
ishu:what happened to her she is staring at me but when iam looking at her she is looking at other side😕
daadi:suddenly starts coughing vigorously
ishu:rushes to her taking a water bottle she makes daadi to drink water and then she inquires saing 'daadi are u ok now,
daadi:by listening the word daadi from ishu looks at her
ishu:sorry aap teek hai na
daadi:why r u saying sorry
ishu:i called u as daadi,u might have felt uncomfortable to address u as daadi by a stranger
daadi:smiles at her innocence and says no beta u rlike my grand daughter
ishu:starts showing her original shade listening to daadi's words ha tho why r u staring at me before,but iam not such a type😉
daadi:surprisingly what meant by such a type
ishu:ok i know u liked me but i cant marry a otherlady iam being a lady😉
daadi:laughs uncontrollably for ishu's naughtiness😆
ishu:but daadi u started coughing suddenly,i think daadu reminced u ,my appa says when our beloved one reminsces us then such sudden reactions takes place😛
daadi:feels sad listening the word daadu,she says he is no more in this world to remind me tears starts rolling down from her eyes😭
ishu:wipes her tears and plays a prank to bring daadi to normal condition,ha its ur mistake she says
daadi:what mistake
ishu:if any man gets married to a stuuning beauty like u then how can his heart can function for long time😉
daadi:blushes by ishu's words,and twists her ears saying naughty girl,dont apply butter to me in this age😳
ishu:ouch daadi leave my ear u r same like my akka she too always twists my ears😊
daadi:frees ishu and asks thumhara naam kya hai?
ishu:ishitha,my family members call me as ishu
daadi:with whom u came indirectly asking about bala
ishu:with my amma,appa,akka and her husband (clarifies daadi's doubt)
daadi(st):thank u devi matha i thought she might married to him,iam happy now my raman will be happy with this girl,i strongly believe she keeps my raman always happy😊
ishu:waving her hand infront of daadi says daadi come out from ur dreams from daadu,or else he cant spare time to come in ur dreams at night now u leave him😉
daadi:laughs but she doesnt want to waste time she has to get all details of ishu,she asks where do u live?
ishu:in mumbai
daadi:ha in mumbai but where in mumbai
ishu:she is about to tell the address but before appa and everyone comes calling her
ishu:turns to them and says appa iam here,by saying she gets up,appa:i asked u to not to go anywhere what r u doing here
ishu:iam talking with daadi,as they cant see daadi as ishu is infront of her
vandu:which daadi u already sent them away na?from where another daadi came?says sarcastically😉
bala:the woman is their u keep quiet
ishu:ha how can she keeo quiet she always like to be at my behind to provoke me for a fight😡
daadi:smiles at the sisters fight
ishu:introduces everyone to daadi
appa:after a small talk with daadi says,ishu now we will go we have to do puja
ishu:leaves by kissing daadi on her cheek with love,she looks back while walking and waves her hand😛
daadi was overwhelmed by ishu's love😛 she looks on ishu untill she disappeared from her view
meanwhile raman and mihir reached daadi with puja items
pandit:amma,now the person who has to do puja has to take a bath in temple pond
raman:already i had my bath in home now i wont bath in cool water😡
daadi:forces raman,they reaches near lake,raman at the side of pond daadi&mihir some far from him
appa:ishu u have to take a bath in the pond located at the back of temple to do puja now u go with amma we will wait here
ishu:appa i already taken my bath,now i wont😔
vandu:hello madam,we too came here after bathing,pandit said its compulsory to take bath in the pond to do puja bala u hold her or else she runs to delhi😉
bala:holding ishu,says ishu come its matter of secs its compulsory to do puja
ishu:no jiju the water will be very cool i cant,please u leave me appa u make akka to do the puja
bala:ishu appa is doing the puja for ur sake for ur future to be filled with happiness,he forces her to take pond side
ishu:releases herself and starts running,saying no i wont
raman:is about to get into the pond cursing his daadi for irking him😡,,just then his mobile rings
daadi:angrily shouts saying raman u first switch off that cell
raman:its imp call,why u always force me i did my bath already,see how cold the water is
daadi:u have to raman
raman:ok first i have to attend this call then i will facing his back to the pond starts his conversation in phone
vandu:shouts saying bala dont leave her,(st)wow today i got wonderful chance to irk ishu😊
ishu:u cant iam going to villa u do puja and come later😲
bala:without giving up,runs to catch her,ramans side view is facing to ishu
ishu:runs looking back to see whether bala running towards her or not she suddenly clashes with raman his mobile falls down
both in a moment are unable to know what was happening,
while mihir,and daadi witnessing them,
ishu looses her balance and with the fear of going to fall down she closes her eyes tightly saying amma without looking at raman,
raman's hands runned around her waist without his permission but he too lost his grip and they both falls on the pond,her upper part of the forehead touched to his head her maang filled with his kumkum,unknowingly he lost in her who was still closing her eyes with fear,and her hands holding his kurti for support,
ishu slowly moves alittle bit far from him she is unable to open her eyes as they are filled with water,
with trembling voice dur to cold she says sorry she is about to open her eyes to look at her going to be partner but then they both listens a worried voice who is none another than bala,
ishu without looking at raman looks at bala who was laughing at her as she completed the task of bathing which she was reluctant to do before few secs,
raman seeing him came to senses,he taken his hands back,bala not seen ramans face clearly,ishu comes to the side of the pond forwarding her hand to bala to help by keeping a sad face😲 who lost their victory,she came up with the help of bala,
daadi:sees ishus maang filled with ramans kumkum she is about to call after coming from her thoughts but they left
jiju u r very happy now,u r laughing at me😡
bala:its devimaatha wish no one can refuse her deeds she is the one who makes twists and turns in our lifes😊
mihir:comes to lake side with smiling,bhai till now u r reluctant to take a bath but now u r still in the pond and by the way the girl did very good thing by clashing u or else the day might have ended looking at u and ur phone calls😉
raman:comes out and says if u wont shut ur mouth the next min my hand will be on ur cheeks😡
daadi:feels very happy,(st) i know the god writtened them as pairs before their birth,definitely i will bring her as DIL of bhallas family😃
mihir:u clarify one thing whether u were angry on me or on the girl😉
raman:i said to shut ur mouth dont count my patience,u r one pagal and that girl is other she doesn't has manners,murmurs to himself"she dont know how to tell sorry,
everyone laughs looking ishu being wetted,
amma observes sindoor on her forehead and screams at her ishu why sondoor was in ur maang😡
ishu:touches her maang and looks at sindoor,amma leave it i think somewhere it was fallen while running
amma:ok always u do nasty things u take this yellow saree and wear it ,now u dont argue again,now u know what power this goddess has its dress code to do puja,ishu silently takes it and leaves
daadi:raman go and wear this yellow lalchi pyjama,raman leaves with the dress while changing the dress he sees bracelet strucked to his kurti,he goes to fb how they both fallen into pond
i wont return this bracelet to that mental she broken my costly mobile,its compensation by saying he keeps the bracelet in his wallet
daadi:meanwhile searches for ishu,but they lefted completing the puja,later they too completing the puja leaves to their house

do comment to continue with next parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
wow..thts amazng...
frst meet rmnce nd takrar...
suprb...
xctntly written...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Nice job
pls update an index
Edited by mayamaya9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Super like this story ... plz continue... and update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is going really well...please do update soon!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
awesome update 👏
please continue soon
will be waiting 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
hai friends here the next part

part-12:
after 2 days
daadi:unable to forget ishitha,she had strong feeling they two borned for each other
she has strong feeling about it
raman:coming to daadi's room,daadi iam going to mumbai,i will come by evening
daadi:with half mind ok raman is mihir accompanying u
raman:he is also coming,u take care bahuth hogaya thumhara day dreams aajkal😉
daadi:giving a smile says badmash thum javo,he leaves kissing her😊
they both leaves
bhalla:coming to daadi,ma why u called me?
daadi:tells about every incident happened in temple and what she is thinking about ishu and raman
bhalla:but ma with only name how can we search entire mumbai,atleast we does't know how she loooks except u
daadi:prakash they are made for each other,its their destiny
bhalla:if what u said was true then god itself unites them,i have work iam going
daadi:kisi bi meri bath sunthi hi nahi😕
in mumbai:
raman and mihir reaches mumbai
raman:u go and meet rinki,i will go to office and solves the issue
mihir:but u r her own brother,how she will feel,because of a woman deception,u cant think all woman are same,let leave about other women,rinki is ur sister why u r keeping her apart its meaningless
raman:screams do what i said with an angry look😡
mihir:ok by saying he leaves sadly😭
after 2hrs:
isu:calls mihika
mihika:abb thumko yad agaya mi,but sorry i wont come,i too very busy😡
ishu:abb yeh natak bandh karo yar,vandu akka is also waiting for u,will u hurt her
mihika:ok iam coming only for vandu akka,did u called karthik?
ishu:ok mam u r coming for vandu akka,and i called karthik also he will come some late he said he has some work😊
mihika:ok iam coming,she starts her scooty
mihir:he is coming to office after meeting rinki he is driving on the main road
mihika is on the left street,she enters into main road,suddenly both vehicles hit,as no one horned to intimate other mihika losses bal,but later she balances👏
mihika:gets down from scooty and rushes to the mihir's car with rage😡
mihir:also gets down from the car to look whether she was hurted
mihika:yeh bewakoof dont u have mind to horn😡
mihir:looses his temper by the way she addressed him he starts saying,by showing his finger towards her yeh pagal mind ur lang dont u have brain to horn ,u came from side lane and rushed into main street without horning and u r blaming me😡
mihika:how dare u to show finger to me😡
mihir:to show finger their is no need of dare,just fingers are enough😛
mihika:gets irked by his taunt,dont try to act smart,u men are disgustive,if u have car then do puja in ur house,but dont rush it on public😡
mihir:yeh mad,its ur mistake and in reverse u r scolding me,brainless fellow who gave u the license😡
mihika:iam not brainless,u and ur family are brainless😡
mihir:yeh bewakoof if u involve my family i wont leave u mind it
what can u do pagal,kisi zoo se aaya kya thum 😡
mihir:mi zoo se aaya tho thum jungle se aaya isiliye ithna violent hu thum,in my life i never seen a woman like u ,ur mental reached peaks😡
mihika:lost her temper,i will show u the meaning of violence,by saying she holds his hair with both hands and starts pulling😡
mihir:was in hell shock with her act for a moment,with rage he too holds her hair and they starts pulling each other😡,public witnessing them starts laughing by forming a mob😆
karthik:stops his bike seeing mihika fighting with an unknown person,he rushes to them and shouts akka what r u doing leave him,please akka u dont do this😭, with great efforts he separates both of them,taking heavy breath he says to mihir "please sir iam sorry"😲
mihika:yeh pagal why r u saying sorry to him its his mistake also😡
karthik:akka u please shutup,it became a habbit for u to fight with everyone😡,ishu akka is waiting for us u come
mihika:because of my brother u escaped or else i would have killed u😡
mihir:not iam u escaped from me because of ur brother😡
karthik:screams akka please bahuth hogaya by saying he drags her
mihir:ye man dont allow that mental on roads,lock her in ur home or else she will bite all the people on roads😡
mihika:by listening his words frees her hand from his brother lifts a rock and rushes to him to break his head😡
karthik:stops her with in secs and mihir was in hell shock what might would happened if he wouldnt stopped his akka,ayyo meri matha please leave him he takes the stone from her hand throws it beside,while leaving she shows her finger indicating the meaning"be careful"😡
mihir:is in shock to see such a type of lady in his life,he drives his car in anger😲
in vandu's house:
ishu:akka mihika still didnt came long before i called her
meanwhile mihika comes in anger and sits on sofa following her karthik comes and sits on opposite sofa by keeping his hand on his head
ishu:karthik u said u will come late
karthik:akka please give me a cup of tea my head is breaking with pain😭
ishu:ok i will get u relax,she brings tea to him and hands to him,vandu,ishu and bala are looking at them surprisingly
karthik:thank u akka
ishu:u said that u will come late u have to meet someone special,hya bath hai,i think so my plans are worked,did all girls started chanting ur name 😉
karthik:with sad voice no akka,my day starting and ending with the bodyguard duty to this devil,he says pointing to mihika😭
mihika:u r the devil if u would have not come then i would have made him to hold my legs😡
karthik:says if i wouldnt reached in time he would had pulled ur legs not holding with angry looks😡
mihika:glares at him😡
ishu:what happened karthik😕
karthik:hugging ishu starts crying and says akka all my college days are wasting because of this mad,i fed up with her,it became my duty to protect all the men in his city from being barked by this pagal,no sleep,no food, ",24hrs duty by karthik to protect mumbai aadhmi"😭
see my face how pale it was no girls in college are looking at me even no single glance,today if one min was late an innocent might have died by that he narrates the entire story,hey murgan mujje isk bhai kyo kia akka again cries😭
ishu laughs inexorably by holding her belly,vandu and bala also laughs😆😆😆😆
after few min
karthik:my horrible situation is looking like a comedy to u people😭
ishu:by wiping his tears,its ur fate ra what can we do,we have to get her married as soon as possible😉
karthik:who will marry this type of mental disorder lady,and before her marriage she will sent me to mental hospital with her mental deeds
mihika:with angry look,who asked u to stay behind me i can protect myself😡
karthik:deko akka is ladki ko kuch nahi samaj hotha,iam not worry about u but about the men in this city😭
mihika:shut up😡
ishu:what is this why this heavy hatred towards men
mihika:i wont fight with them intentionally,they provokes me😡
ishu:hello madam u r mihika not menaka😉 dont fly in dreams
u have to be calm go to yoga and meditation class atleast for my pyari bahi see his face ,by saying she starts laughing again😆😆
vandu:ishu now stop laughing and u both stop ur accusations and come for lunch😃
karthik:kya lunch vandu akka kithna mehenath karke ek ladki ko patane ke liye bahuth plan kiya aur vo ladki aaj usse milne ke liye ha kiya lekin iss ladki uss adhmi see jagadakarke rahe mi inko dekkar ussko bachane ke liye gaya,sari plan mitti me dalaayyo murgan iss tharah behan kisi ko bi nahi hona chahiye😭
mihika:starts beating him with pillow😡,ishu and vandu rescues their pyara bhai😉
bala holds mihika😉 and three laughs falling on sofa uncontrollably😆😆
raman:mihir what happened u r looking very angry and irritated😕
mihir:there is no bad day in my life as today bhai😡
raman:suddenly what happened so much desperation😕
mihir:even i cant recollect that incident no not incident it is an accident,by saying he narrates the entire story😡
raman:laughs continuously and finally he asks before 3hrs u said something about women😆😆
mihir:yes bhai we should not get involved in them,all women are similar😡
raman:ok now stop ur drama ,lets move we are getting late😊

note:after 2 or 3 parts their will be some emotional parts about5 to 6,if u people are ready with those then i will continue,ur decision matters me ,but iam sure after those parts u will get before track along with ishra moments,reply must
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mimi fightmg was hallrious...
til nw all parts r amazng...

waitng fr nxt...

evn we acnt emotnal parts v vl say it...if poss u chnge the stry...

pls updte index

nd updte chptr nd pg numbr yar...in title...so tht v can knw tht u updtd new chptr...

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