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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona
Wow..i would love to read the bheja frying session..nywys it was superb..raman's naughtyness was lovable...

Haha!! Unfortunately the story ends here only. Glad to read ur feedback n comments. Hope we meet on another thread soon.

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Awesome.. Especially loved the epilogue😳

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Ahaannn...beautiful and romantic one OSJ

loved itt

spcly the lines of trust..they really mean a lot

and superb endingg

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Beautiful OSJ!!! Sent me to mushy IshRa land alright!

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Thanks for the PM. 👍🏼

How lovely! You wrote so well...👏 And i loooved the ending.

He retied the Mangalsutra around her neck How perfect...it's like a recognition of the change in their feelings and relationships, like the engagement ring he presented her. What a great great idea!👏

I am super impressed. Please do PM when when you post other works on ISHRA because i know i will love them! 😆

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Jaslee Saggi

@jusschillin

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Nice update '' thanks for the pm

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Hello everyone!

I have been going through the pages and I am overwhelmed by the amazing responses. Thank u so much for ur awesome feedback n generous appreciation for my work once again.

Hopefully I will b able to reply personally to every post,

See u

With love

OSJ

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Finally ...the much awaited part😊...loved the way you showed their excitement,happiness,love,trust everything in their small gestures...when he said he won't hurt her and she said she don't want to back away...she only wants to move forward with him...finally their dream union..loved the realization part..do jism ek jaan 😳...

Epilogue was adorable...so IshRa like...Ravan kumar is true to his name even while romancing ...mangalsutra part was sweet...beautiful end to a beautiful story of love <3