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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Passionate and sensual update!

loved the way he made her comfortable to him...and the morning after was perfect too!

loved it!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Lata_ishra
supetb updaye i read it twice...pls update the next part soon..

Thank u so much. That's a compliment indeed

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Wow..i would love to read the bheja frying session..nywys it was superb..raman's naughtyness was lovable...

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

aww loved it! i love how your ishra stay in character in all stories
wonderful as always :)

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

it was romantic
n d end was so cute
Thanx for d pm

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

loved it! her hesitation and his experience we very aptly portrayed :)

loved the epilogue ;) I almost thought he would play around like the hero in the movie Alaipayuthey (remade in hindi as Saathiya) 😆

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dazzzling

@dazzzling

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Wow. The love making is simply gorgeously written. Blush worthy and romantic. And you say you are so bad at it? This is simply a class apart.
Now the epilogue. The icing on the cake for me. How I wish CVs give us such IshRa mornings rather than them directly in the kitchen.
Gafur tailor comment was too good. I love the way you always add that unique touch in your stories just like the moment Ishita lifted her hand to show her ring and convey to Raman her message.
Thank you so much for this drool worthy update.
Keep writing.