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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Oju ...completely loved it. Ishita's nervousness and Raman's passionate avataar *sigh*.

But my fave was the epilogue ... thank you my dear friend for the brilliant morning after scene 🤗. Haaye ... mangalsutra pehnaya ussney upar se naughty RKB ke one liners😳. I loved it completely.

Poora khaandaan IF se inspired hai, deets lene aaya hai about the deed 😆

PS - Waiting for your next Oju, will especially need it if the new promo is anything to go by.

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Jyoe

@Jyoe

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

ah finally..do dil ek jaan became do jism ek jaan!! so subtle, yet sensually and beautifuly it was. loved it :)

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Arooj

@Arooj.M

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

What a perfect ending. I love how Ishita woke up a little after the consummation and was overwhelmed by it all, that scene was really well written. Enjoyed this update very much, thanks for the PM!

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

That was beautiful and special thanks for the morning after scene.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011
Brilliant was worth the wait loved how I used the bathrobe scene and the end was so sweet

Thanks a lot. I hope I didn't make u wait too much!😳

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

☺️

only one word : beautiful 😊

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Wow osj...that was soo beautiful...
amazingly written...
u r such a talented writer i must say👏
Each n every word conveyed emotions brillantly
pls add me to ur pm list for ur future stories

Dipsi thank u very much for ur appreciation. It will b a pleasure to accept ur request. Sending u buddy request right away.

See u😃

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Awiiiee...It was super cute part di...!!

Finally they are one..!! :D

Every ishra moment was awsumm..!!

Raman's naughty comments...huh...this never gonna change..!!

Ishita blushing...:P:P

Loved it..!!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: shavi2311
Wow...tht was amazng...
Hw cutely nd romantically thy bcme one soul...
Ishu u look vry cute while u blush...
Raman nd his naughtyness...
Aaj humara bheja fry sesion...sambal ke rehna pedega...lol...

Thank u dear.

I am very pleased to know that u loved this piece of writing.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Passionate and sensual update!
loved the way he made her comfortable to him...and the morning after was perfect too!
loved it!

Coming frm u it really means a lot vidya. Thanks a lot