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Originally posted by: paru_rox

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Yes yes ... I know am late again Amzz with multiple updates but my only excuse is as always - I keep particular written works of writers I really like to enjoy in peace & leisure. And with you the updates come quick (which is a good thing I swear, don't you change that) and I end up with lots to read (again a good thing) 😊

Anyways as usual, I will do chapter reviews since I missed much:

Ch3 - So RKB's interested in learning the truth asap. Well he could just ask but that wudn't be his style and nor does she seem to likely to tell.
And poor girl got zapped with cooking too, well am sure the father-daughter duo wud so make up for this 😆

Ahaa ... so Natasha really is nice. Glad we don't have too many vampish ladies around in FF's 'least. And I like Arham, anyone who can embarrass RKB can't be bad 😆. Lol I say get him & Natasha together (ek chotti si love story in there). RKB is getting to be more protective & possessive, old feelings coming back or perhaps they were never gone.


Confessions & revelations ... all brought on by a mere capture of them together. And his determination to give in to what he wants & make her his by giving into anything he could grasp was kinda touching. Anything ... to not lose her.


Loved this update Ammzzi ... there was something in it that was so romantic. Especially when she decided to share her secrets with him coz she knew he wudn't do what she has experienced before. And her fear of not being accepted by Ruhi portrayed her love for the child so well.

Really, what's wrong with her father. I expected a confrontation (verbal f'course) between the two but the punch her ex-fiancee was much better 😆. Me likes that the guy got what he did. And the kiss, oh my what these two would have fireworks going if the sizzle in those few lines is anything to go by.


Lastly I just want to say that I love the banters in your FF's Ammzz, they never fail to make me smile 😊


PS - Here's to hoping that you forget my late reply by the time you're reading this 😳

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

Finally ! Res

Edited !

Worth a wait !
A progress well shown. I honestly had a broad smile while reading it and almost had a chuckle at the punch. Well deserved !
Ok, so does Mr.Iyer knows about Raman's past or was it just a passing remark ?
One thing more yaar - Will ishita ever come to know that Raman was the same Bookstore guy ?

But ol in ol - A Great Read :)

Originally posted by: Rozy77

awww hun, awesome part👏
loved it and thoroughly enjoyed reading it over again😃

party scenes were really good👍🏼
im sorry but Ishita's father is a disgrace👎🏼
and the guts of that bannerjee😡... good going raman😎
how i just love this raman...
and ishita is so falling for him. loved that sweet kiss but am super happy raman showed how to do it better☺️
oh yes and ruhi is such a dolly😳

again, amazing part⭐️
eager for the next 1
take care

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

wow awesome update

thanks for the punch on banerjee face, he deserved it. 👍🏼

Things are getting better and better on Raman and ishita marruage and that is great. Raman is doing right to make her feel special. ishita is indeed in her safe haven, the haven she pined for after her mother's death. Now that raman is acing as her personal bodyguard 😆too i think anything can harm ishita.

aww they shared a kiss.😳

I don;t understand Mr. Iyer, he is an irresponsible father and a selfish cunning business man. he just can't be happy seeing her daughter content and settle. Obviously his own daughter didn't obey his command and her elopement and mariage had hit hard of his ego.

I am looking forward to rea some more romantic moments between Raman and ishita.

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

Wow!!! It was so smoothe!!!!!

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Now. Beat that.