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Originally posted by: rutu83

ah another wonderful update amna
so disappointed with mr iyer :(
but hayee mera hero- i mean ishita ka hero ;) well deserved punch!
continue soon

Originally posted by: luks28

Amazing update.👏
hhmmm Mr. iyer's warning 😲
waiting for next one

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Just the same way I'm going to find my man. And if he doesn't fit the criteria, we'll train him!

But I shall still wait for a longer comment lia.

Originally posted by: aaminah123

After reading your comment I feel like knowing more about HR and his proposal. I was quite sad when they broke up but then bang bang came and I decided to side with SK.

Anyhow, as for the moments. Those were the moments for me when he asks her to pick red and when he closes the door, not rushing her into intimacy.

Lia, isn't your list for Mr. Perfect increasing day by day?!

P.S that was indeed the quickest you have unres any of my comments!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Liashna

res for my comment *head desk*

*edited

To an observer they would seem like an ordinary couple sharing their meal. While she fixed him breakfast in between sipping her coffee, he read the newspaper.

😳 Got this hubby wifey waala feel here. You know the best thing, all this while he never gives that sense of authority around her which an employer has. You know that air of ordering people around.

The article No idea how you did that, but it felt like I took a newspaper on hand and this picture is there in real. Whoa! Putting imagination into words is tough already, but putting words as imagination, so clearly 👏

😆 I so love their convos, they are so casual, like when normal people are around each other and not at all OTT.

You set this mood of helplessness and pressure on mentioning about the numerous calls and he cutting them again and again.

She was afraid her father might find out about her. The fear, that apprehension. Phew. I felt like am going through it.

And then the way he talks about Ruhi... Keeping his life a low-profile just for Ruhi. Uff tauba.
Then the last straw, her reputation. And he states, they will marry each other 😳

"No, she is my wife." The look in his eyes, didn't go unnoticed by her. The set of his jaw when he commanded told her, his mind was set and if she knew anything about him in the last few days, it was his determination to get things done his way.

And I stop breathing 😆 Wow. This man acted on impulse but actually said what was in his heart hidden 😉

"You don't know anything about me."

"Try me." He replied with his charming smile and approached her side with each attribute he mentioned."I know you like your cereal in cold milk. You prefer to wash your hands before eating. You like pearls more than any other stone.. You love children.. You like words more than numbers."

☺️ This gave me a mushy feeling. She smiled, I was already on my way to heaven 😆

They finally got to know each other a little better

Originally posted by: aaminah123

You just saved yourself from the same punch Mr. Banarjee got. There now, I feel better.

Hiring a detective, a competent one at that sounds so suave and mighty, no? It adds another element to the high class. But this soon is going to cost Mr. Rkb. Haha leave Mr. Arham alone, he might have a family of his own paru.

The father has his own set of beliefs that he likes to belief in, I'm leaving him for the last ounce of drama in this fiction.

The banter, yes that's my attempt to add humour and spice in the story. Nothing attracts me more than a witty conversation. The script is the first thing I notice in a drama/show after the appearance of the leads. Of course. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Liashna

I don't know why you are thanking me, you deserve the praises 😛

Ditto, when she chooses red just because he said it... and when he leaves her to dress and in that moment he won my heart again.. He left her to be comfortable. 😳

😆 Someone told me itne paise main itna hi milta hain. And I believe in tit for tat 😛😛

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Mr. Banerjee ka punch, chalo koi nahi. you wudn't do that to me girl. Itna toh pata hai :-)

@ red - Hmmm ...now this is interesting. You just got my curiosity up Amzz 😳

And yes I know you aren't done with the father yet coz you, my dear friend, do not suffer from the "No closure" infliction that the CV's suffer from *thank goodness*.

PS - The lead's chemistry is the first thing I notice ... baaki script toh Indian soaps mein hoti hi nahi hai 😆. So I expect it only from writer's like you.

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Mr. Banerjee ka punch, chalo koi nahi. you wudn't do that to me girl. Itna toh pata hai :-)

@ red - Hmmm ...now this is interesting. You just got my curiosity up Amzz 😳

And yes I know you aren't done with the father yet coz you, my dear friend, do not suffer from the "No closure" infliction that the CV's suffer from *thank goodness*.

PS - The lead's chemistry is the first thing I notice ... baaki script toh Indian soaps mein hoti hi nahi hai 😆. So I expect it only from writer's like you.

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Its a first time I'm following any Indian soap religiously. Seriously and the only one, perhaps its based in the novel and I can't seem to get my hands on it somehow.(must visit a bookstore soon)

Yes, yes. I have something in mind. Hope I'm not too lazy to pen it down soon. Closure eh? Rest assured. The second clause of my write-ups is to make sure all the scenarios are covered and closed without a drag :)