OS: Salvation (Note on Page 4, last part page 5)

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Sandhya83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

waa this was a nice scene for the serial but they didn't do it. so nice. nice writing.

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Aditi Sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

That was extremely heart touching! Lovely!

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Yusra (or you can call me Hope as a nickname)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Oh I wish this would happen so cutely, please continue!

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arshi33

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Totally loved it...😊😊

If possible... Plzz continue n do send a pm if you do so. ..

Thanks in advance...😃😃

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sweety_virgo1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awww superb.. 👏 just loved it ❤️

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PRACHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

awww this was so sweet
plz continue it
I so wished aisa scene show main miley
BT I knew its not gone b happene

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Arooj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awww this is so sweet, such an adorable moment! Beautifully written!

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clover

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Thank you so much for all the comments. I hadn't planned to write another part to this but since so many of you'll wanted me to continue I will maybe post a second and final part soon. I just couldn't take so much tension and gloominess that they are showing in the show. I wrote this down just to ease my own tension. But I am glad so many of you liked what I wrote. In the meanwhile here's something I think at least partially describes Raman's and Ishita's thought process and feelings. The blue part especially for Raman. Its from Chennai Express.

Meherbaani nahi tumhara pyar maanga hai
Tumhe manzoor hai tabhi to yaar manga hai
Ghairon ke dar se, tere sheher se
Hai kasam rishta todoon na

Tera rastaa main chhodoon na

Agar ye hai nahi, to phir jaane pyar kya hai
Mere jeet hai tu, kise parvaah haar kya hai
Tera rasta chhodoon na..
Chhodoon naa main tera rasta chhodoon naa

Zindaa hoon lekin, wo baat nahi hai
Haathon mein teraa, jo haath nahi hai
Ishq ka hai naam bada
Maine hai kiya kaam bada
Kar ke magar aadha chhodoon na
Tere rukh se ye chehra modoon na

Tera rastaa main chhodoon na...

Chaahat hai meri, kusoor nahi hai
Dil jazbati hai, majboor nahi hai
Sar ye bhale phoot gaya
Jism mera toot gaya
Khud se kiya waada todoon naa
Baandhun sehra, kafan odhoon naa

Tera rastaa main chhodun na...

Edited by clover - 10 years ago