OS: Salvation (Note on Page 4, last part page 5)

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

this is brilliantly written
an awesome update
Raman's every emotions r penned very well
loved it from d core of my heart
just wanted we get just like this a ishra talk

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Rajji (Shanu)

@.Rajji.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

very nice ! loved it, genius !

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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Wow!!

Simply wow. U not only showed who Ishita and Raman were in the past, but also what their journey made them become together.
In mere two parts you summarised their heartbreak, their meeting, their ideologies, their marriage, Ruhi's presence in their life, and their journey from hatred to love.

OMG, anyone who needs a clear story on yhm should read this. You got everything covered here. Their broken selves, their trust issue, their flaws... All sorted out, in a freaking flow. How girl?? (hope u r a girl) 😳

Am in awe! Literally wearing a smile of admiration and amazement right now.

Please do write more. It's a request. If and when time permits. The forum needs more of unbiased takes and closure on the tracks. Your TS offered everything I wanted as visual on my screen. Thank YOU so much for this.

A bow for this... for u! \m/

xoxo
Lia