#1| IshRa : Meherbaan FF | Thread One - Complete. Moved to Thread Two. - Page 19

Originally posted by: nrn1486

Hey, I'm Neethi.. 😊

Originally posted by: nrn1486

Hey, I'm Neethi.. 😊

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Yes., Liashna,

Same here. Tobe honest, back when I joined here I was a messed up teen angry at the world, God's and anyone and every one. All I wished for was normality. It was the friends I made here who took me in, nurtured me and turned me into this person I am. As much as I dislike mingling with a certain section of IF crowd and I hate it that this place is so restrictive and unstable - I love the fact that it has given me so many people who I genuinely love. People time my age or younger than me who have the same thought process and mentality as me. People who I have grown to love and admire.

The Ruhi Raman scene was to-be pushed up but then I let it be as it is. But if I normallu skip scenes I leave a series of "inter paragraph spacing", I'll take up your suggestion though, makes it less confusing.

(Tell me about you name, as complicated as it is, it's unique and I like it.)

Originally posted by: Liashna

You could push it up, would have a better effect I presume. As it will have this flow that Raman had his talk with Ruhi and then it would be easier to imagine him, his clothes and excitement to be there, and also why the audience had this reaction. Out of all the parts, my favourite is about Ishita's return, chapter 5, it had a really smooth narration. Loved it to its core. You might as well continue it like that one.

Yup, that's my name, Liashna, my parents wanted something really unique for me 😆 You can call me Lia for short. 😳

I joined in as a teenager too 😆 I have friends older than me, same age group and smaller ones too 😳 But when we talk it's without the barriers of age, and place. We mostly even connect through Whatsapp. You have to filter the negative moments and keep the good one. Some are seriously here to stay na 😳

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Haha that last line has made me more eager for the next update. I look forward to your updates dailly, yes I checked twice yesterday but the delay was worth it. I love the long updates of yours, its like watching a scene to and fro.

Your writing style is different kiara, the uniqueness lies in the way you start off with the background of the last scene, depicting from another perspective. I must say this bhalla is far more influential than the real one and more glamorous too, not that I'm complaining. Your episodes make up for the mockery that's being shown nowadays.

I'm really hoping for a longer and a sizzling update tomorrow, hope you are not too busy to fulfill my wish!

Originally posted by: exploringmyself

superb..!

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Aaminah,

I am am impatient person - an annoying reader of the worst kind. If I like something, I have to see it to the end. I was reminded bak in day, around three years ago when I was an active IF I had taken up reading Maneet and Dil Mil Gaye fanfiction in my free time - completed fictions- though I never followed the shows. They harbor this huge variety of fanfiction and new to the world of Indian Television I lived reading them despite the errors and I fell in love with this ongoing fiction called Opposites Attract and by god, i used to wait for that fanfiction to be updates ad as threads went by with readers begging the author to update, and once she did - that would be my Christmas gift. I would cherish the update. And that was the only fanfiction I followed so religiously. Without knowing the author or anything related to her I had n own so much about her - her married life, her pregnancy and all that. This is a long forgotten memory I share with this site. I don't know why I remembered this.

You are my first reader when it comes to this fiction and your opinions hold a special meaning, I'm glad you like what I put forth, it means alot to me. Truly. It's the comments that motivated me to smile and let go. Thank you for making my day. And thank you for loving a long comment on every update.

I had gone through this whole Arnav needs redemption phase and I'd become obsessed with reading redemption fanfiction and an author had claimed to know her readers through their comments, and mentally Iowa slide, is she even for real, there are some many people and they're all strangers... And today I can agree with her. Thank you for that. I'm just another procrastinator putting forth her thoughts, thank you for giving them your time and thought.

And Bhalla sahib should be amazing. I agree, this gu is powerful and extravagant but as I mentioned, unlike the show, we here do not have a budget to stay within.