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Kiara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: shavi2311
i njyd the update...
nd last lines...did nalini nd othr ladies heard wht ishu is saying...
kya romnce rakh hain yar nxt update mein...
nd in nxt update mak things clear of adi issue nd ishra confesn if poss...

This fanfiction intended to be a SS is turning out to be a full blown FF.

YES. It's their point of view. The scene is vague from their point of view but it will make sense in the next update, hopefully.

Tere is jo Adi issue, in this fanfiction Ishita isn't going to be Aditya's mother - that's Shagun. Adi is her son, not Ishita's. Each one mother hood is different, some are born mothers like Ishita while others learn their way to guide their children - each mothers live is different. Aditya is Shagun's son just like Shagun has handed Ruhi over to her true mother - Ishita. Yes, Raman will inform Ishita about Aditya, soon. And for the confession, I plan to make them plan through their actions - NO cheesy ILY's followed by an abrupt consummation scene. :) Their relationship might go on the unconventional way, I don't know.

Thanks for the lovely comment. And for being the first comment, love you Shravani.

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Fantastic update

Raman finally made a dashing entry, he came and conquered. Some are proud of ishita annd her current life while some are jealous and confuse.

Subbu has ruin his life and i think he is more frusturated seeing ishita so happy in her life and move forward. He is angry on himself for being so weak, I am lookinf forward to read Rman and subbu meeting. I really like the way ou potray raman, ishita and ruhi personal and social life.

I love this dialogue.

She was the Tom to his Jerry. The Felicity to his Oliver. The Dean to his Sam. And Rose to his Ten. She could be the John to his Sherlock. The Peeta to his Katniss. Rebecca to his Klaus. 👏

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shimerrr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

loved d story till now ...i just find it a little confusing to read as it d new update dosent start from where d last ended

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Kiara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: whitelily
Superb updates

Thank you.

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Kiara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

What the f**k? I turned purple. My favourite color. I'm sticking to this rank.

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Kiara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Liashna
Reserved ☺️

But this:

"As family oriented this day was, the next morning was equally scandalising. Nalini and a few other ladies who were asked for a favor as they passed by has walked on to a shirtless Raman Kumar draped in nothing but a sheet and Ishita Bhalla, dressed in her husbands dress shirt as she attempted to snatch away the sheet covering him and him screaming, "Ishita, yeh to besharmi hai yaar. Kyun meri izzat lootne pe tali ho, Madrasan? Ab bathroom mein ghussa jana kam pad gaya ki yeh sab kar rahi ho." only to have Ishita growl, "Raman, uttar o isse, abhi. Warna." "

🤣 Seriously ?

She wore his shirt now snatching his sheet🤣 OMG, I can so picture her dhamki 😆 Warna 🤪

Damn it. You do know how to leave cliff hangers 😆

IKR. I love that bit. I love the comfort level they share most of the time in this fanfiction.

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TheSunShine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Raman's dashing entry 👏has everyone gossiping about Ishita as no one believed him to be her husband. Subbu realized his cowardice.🤢 He is worse than Ashok. What was he planning on, divorcing Nalini after fathering her child.😡 I want to see Raman and Ruhi caring and pampering Ishita and Ishita returning the same to both😳 in future and shutting everyone up who thinks of Ishita in bad light. Also Raman and Ishita talking about the Adi issue and Raman assuring Ishita that he is no way related to Shagun except her being Adi's mother. Waiting to read more.

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

This fanfiction intended to be a SS is turning out to be a full blown FF.
YES. It's their point of view. The scene is vague from their point of view but it will make sense in the next update, hopefully.
Tere is jo Adi issue, in this fanfiction Ishita isn't going to be Aditya's mother - that's Shagun. Adi is her son, not Ishita's. Each one mother hood is different, some are born mothers like Ishita while others learn their way to guide their children - each mothers live is different. Aditya is Shagun's son just like Shagun has handed Ruhi over to her true mother - Ishita. Yes, Raman will inform Ishita about Aditya, soon. And for the confession, I plan to make them plan through their actions - NO cheesy ILY's followed by an abrupt consummation scene. :) Their relationship might go on the unconventional way, I don't know.

Thanks for the lovely comment. And for being the first comment, love you Shravani.

i dnt want ishu to b adi mom bt i want raman to tell her y he went..nd adi b shagun... i need their confsn bcoz thy feel fr each othr..bt i need to realise thm to be nt inscrd lik ishu felt raman just left sudnly wen shagun call him...jst want to mak sure ki their insecrties are useless...

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Kiara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: shimerrr
loved d story till now ...i just find it a little confusing to read as it d new update dosent start from where d last ended

Hey,

First of all, Welcome to IF, i assure you that here you'll find friends that stand up and by you despite being strangers and that one day they'll be much more than just online friends.

Now coming to the comment:

Awh. I didn't really notice that that. The next update is once again going to start from the party and then go all the way to the scene and forth. After that I'll keep your point in mind. :)

Thanks.

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Kiara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: shavi2311

i dnt want ishu to b adi mom bt i want raman to tell her y he went..nd adi b shagun... i need their confsn bcoz thy feel fr each othr..bt i need to realise thm to be nt inscrd lik ishu felt raman just left sudnly wen shagun call him...jst want to mak sure ki their insecrties are useless...

Shravu,

I'll incorporate that into the next update- the whole Ado bit, promise. :)

You have a valid point there. But as for the confession, at some point in a relationship you need to confess - along with actions you need words to stand by what you feel. I stand corrected. What I meant was, there will be no confession and then consummation abruptly and a happily ever after, they got a whole wedding to focus on themselves and their relationship. As I said, I plan on going the unconventional way if it asks for it and then have a confession towards the new of it all, where they know and expect one after being cent percent certain of their feelings and not confusing it with physical desires. I don't even know what I'm saying, stay with me on this journey, will you?