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MidnightMusings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: AraBearxx
^ Wait, before I rely to that. I don't find you a nuisance. I love replying to you. It reminds me of the reason I joined this place and it's great t connect with someone without struggling so hard, that'sme with you. I'm a blabber mouth, I could go on for ages. And I'm too much of a bitch for common courtesy. ;)

😆 I seriously second you here. Though I feel am a level up, I can keep on blabbering until I bore the next person to death. 😆

I like the opinion clashes here, it helps you see other perceptives with an open mind.. but it's honestly better when you can understand what the other person is trying to say, clearly. As it's a mirror of your own heart.

The show is at a point where strong discussion is going on. And stories like yours are the ultimate sanctuary. You chose all the little detailing for your descriptions, and it so helps to get that vivid picture of the characters in your mind. That's really commendable.

And as you can see, I jump from the rooster to the mule from time to time 😆 I hope you can find something that actually make sense in my words ^^ Am currently dozing with one open eye on my phone 😆

See ya soon. I got this bookmarked, so will be hanging around.

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Liashna
😳 You are brilliant with every part but something was there with that chapter, I really really could connect deeply with that one.
I can understand with the time. Keep that in mind for next updates. You don't need to edit it, it's already great yaar, do carry on soon. Am looking forward to it 😆 And if u plan to use a part as a precap for the next update, break it up. The reader gets a better idea to expect more parts before the one you added in the last bit. And am really sorry if u are finding me a nuisance 😆 I love writing, I have a passion for words, and I am already so much in love with urs. You could have writing as a serious option, if you add just an once of effort into it.

Hehe. Thank You :D Nope, we are three but am the eldest 😉

Yeah, it took me years to build that comfort level on a personal note. Else it takes me a lot to trust people. You loved dmg?

If you haven't do read Catwoman's FF and bedtime stories, she was the first writer i genuinely loved from the forum. Still go back and read them when I miss reading some awesome elements. (I'll assume you are an AR fan 😆 ) Even if u are not one, u cud change up the names 😳 The stories are not according to the show or track.

p.s: Opposite attracts by whom? I think i read that one.

p.p.s: I shall unres my posts asap, defo by end of this week. Had exams so could only read and res. Sorry for that.

Science person here. For someone who hates routine study I don't even know why I took that option up. I wouldn't survive in the real world with writing, honestly. That's like asking for too much.

Do you have any works of your own? I would love to read them when I'm free or travelling.

Only child here.

I Think I was born an extrovert and got real bitchy growing up, joined IF and toned down so much. Initially I was repeatedly told - censor and tone down on the colorful language.

Nope. Watched a few scenes. Shipped Sid-Riddhima. I was an alien to Indian TV until PKYEK was launched. What initially started with mocking the show ended up being appreciative of the show. Till then DMG had ended, I guess to be taken over by someone other show. I love Shilpa Anand, infact I'm on watch for her next project on tv.

I think I read her work, not sure. I'll check her out all over again. AR had some great authors. Until an author who fought against plagiarised updated her fiction stating that she'd be writing her next two chapters inspired by a Wattpad story. Months later when I read the Wattpad story whilst clearing out my library, she had bluntly copied those two chapters. By then she had pulled off her works due to plagiarism. I don't even know what happens dhere or why I'm talking about this. Even if you aren't a fan of 1D and Twilight the fanfiction are great. OMG. Did I tell you about this? I found this amazing fiction on AR and boy I fell in love with the author, only to realise that she had plagiarised it from a twilight fic and the funny thing was that her edited version and mixing of scenes (past and present) we better done than the original. So much for trust.

Opposites Attract was a simple arranged marriage story based on Maan - Geet.

Take your time. :) Actually, concentrate on your studies first. (^_-)

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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Mind blown. I see science, and I see sid-riddhima. Fine. I have a twin my parents never told me about. 🤣
Seriously!!

I prefer practicals to theory anytime.
I do write, but am really lazy, when I do it for others i lose that feeling. I can only write when i'm in the right mood, updating is my weakness 😳 Wrote an FF on SR, like 2-3 parts then couldn't continue it due to exams, and one SS, again incomplete but that was 4 years ago 😆 The rest which I write are confined to me and my diary 😳 I ramble my heart out most of the time and they do not even make sense

You can check 😆 FF

Aww, enjoy... Even if i have siblings, am the pampered one. Daddy's little girl as they say 😳

Haha, yup, there are certain rules here. So u can use the censor emoticon 😆

Daamn! Now that u mentioned it. Same thing happened for SR, i saw the replica of what I read on IF there on wattpad. And that hurted so much man, like I trusted you and loved your writing only to discover it's not urs. :(

My best way to avoid being cheated here is silent read everything, before u decide who to trust. Funny that even behind a veil of an ID and dp, you can recognise ppl's true side from their words and way of talking ;)

Currently on a long holiday. So am gonna catch up on everything Uni took away from me 😆

Okay, am going off. Had a great time talking with u. :)

Edited by Liashna - 10 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

superb update
awww bechara shravu RU n Tammy
adorable ishra fights
precap is interesting update soon

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ekta979

@ekta979

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

plz pm me ... i luv all ur posts ... this one is super spcl ... :)

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PAYAL CHAKRABORTY

@PAYALDIVAN

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#196

ok i lovd it bt can you plz clear all charecter i mean i'm dam confuse who is nalini ragini nd all while reading... plz describe their name with thier relarion wid ishra or abyne we know clearly plzz

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swathi1990

@swathi1990

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Waiting eagerly for your today's update

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

I am so excited for the next update. I honestly find this story unique from others because of the whole high society aspect which you have incorporated. They don't really explore this side in the show. This part of the story makes it all the more fun. And let me say you have covered not only Ishra's inner thoughts but other important characters such as Subbu and HIS wife's thoughts really beautifully. Really well done. I really enjoyed all the chapters so far. Hope to read more asap, hopefully today! 👏

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Oh I so agree with you kiara, until lately i didn't know about people here in fact for a long time i was a silent member but before i knew it I started knowing my readers and would actually look forward to their comments. So I'm glad I was able to make your day :)

Like I said, I enjoy your updates more than the show which I have started to lose track of nowadays. And one more thing I absolutely love is your regular updates, I seem to lose interest if the updates take long and the story line seems to be somewhere in the back of my mind. And going through the intricate details of clothing in the fiction, why do I have a feeling you are into fashion? Or is it just a natural trait being a girl :)

Let's begin. Apologies for the uber long comments. About your fiction, I shall stalk your profile when I'm free, just mention the fandom's you wrote on.

Same here. When I discovered YHM all over again, all I had gained was disgusted looks from my friends as they went, are you seriously watching a trashy Hindi show?

I was lost cause when it came to Kdramas and now came this - a hindi show. When I narrated the premise, they like it. But not enough to watch a hindi show. And this is like a really important phase in my life, are here I was wasting my time. Honestly. I thank Ekta for her stupid track that made me give up on the show.

I will be on a two week break. I'll try writing and saving updates so that I can just come online and update and get back to work.

Coming to the fashion bit. Not really. Growing up fashion had been my guilty passion - it influences me even today with the courses I take and the subjects I chose back the. I had my own take on what people wore and on they presented themselves. But personally knowing models, and everyone in friendlist attempting modeling - that industry wasn't something I wanted to be part of. Even today, the terrible curse I face is that I look at a person and I can literally see price tags as they walk. From their hair to the shoes - the brands, the price and the value. I had dreamt of being a fashion editor but then I had also dreamt of marrying into a corporate family *sigh*. So, I never really spoke about it and pursued Sciences, and here I am today. I don't really know if it comes with being a girl, when it comes to Indian Couture I grew in a totally non traditional place where my friend circle shunned everything that had India tagged to it. It wasn't something that was chosen by me but now recently, I think I'm falling in love with it. Selectively. My mother no longer has to try forcing me into an Indian outfit when the situation demands for it. So, answering your question I don't really know if it comes with being a girl - it's mostly either shopping or research for me.

Are you by any chance a guy? Aaminah, is a girls name. :) Not that I'm complaining, lol.

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
I am so excited for the next update. I honestly find this story unique from others because of the whole high society aspect which you have incorporated. They don't really explore this side in the show. This part of the story makes it all the more fun. And let me say you have covered not only Ishra's inner thoughts but other important characters such as Subbu and HIS wife's thoughts really beautifully. Really well done. I really enjoyed all the chapters so far. Hope to read more asap, hopefully today! 👏

Thanks Vsoujanya.

I didn't really notice the whole high society bit though. Lol. Sometimes, when I pen this down I feel like it's a bit too superficial. It's circles around society, scandals, gossips and the people who are affected by it. Maybe, a few years later I'll laugh at the memory of it all. But this is my baby, our baby. While I write it you spend a good portion of time reading, evaluating and sharing your thought's on it. :)

Thank you.