Ishra OS - TRANSITIVE RELATION - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Bhanu !
Muaaahh seriously .

"Dammit woman. Who
do you think you are? Am going crazy for the
past four days and apologizing to you like a
maniac and it does not matter to you. It was a
mistake. You yourself said you chose the bracelet
for Mani so I misunderstood it. It was a
misunderstanding and I am sorry for it. My
feelings, my apologies do not matter to you
right? You do not care about what do I feel?
What did I feel when that goons had taken you
away in front of my eyes? No. nothing matters
to you; nothing. "

While reading these particular lines, it almost looked like we venting our frustration about this track. I so loved loved this. Raman shouting about being helpless without her has never been shown properly, saare aarmaan OS mein poore kar diye tumne :D

"Both of us were
cheated by the people we trusted with our lives,
people we loved. Both of us were left alone to
pick up the pieces of our broken heart. "
*Touchy Touchy* Such depth in these lines. Something both are so vulnerable about but never touched in this serial.

"Mani. He is my childhood friend. Yes, I am
comfortable with him. Yes, I like him. Yes, our
choices, our cultures, our families, a lot of
things are similar and common between us. Yes,
I confide in him. He is the one of the friends I
have literally grown up with. And let me clarify
one thing to you that he is an extremely
important part of my past, present and future
and I refuse to sideline him. I am comfortable
with him and nothing will change my equation
with him. Not even you. "

A biggg jhaaapi for thesw particular line. Raman needs to know Mani's place in ishita's life.
All in all.. I loved your OS.
Madhuri stylee *Purrfectt*

PS - I so regret missing LU at 11 yesterday. *Darn Phone*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Love it!!
Would love to see this in the show
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
That was so like the yhm we loved...esp d dialuges when their usual banter starts...ws pleasure reading...👏keep writing more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
hey Bhanu,
was waiting for ur OS since when I read in the LU that u were writing an OS. And must say INTEZAAR ka PHAL MEETHA HOTA HAI. Superb OS. and yes let the CVs atleast show a part of what u have written, I could clearly imagine scene as if its happening...RKB ke expressions dekhne layak hoga.

Aajkal ke flat episodes se😭😭😭 hoon main, atleast ur OS will keep us entertained.

KEEP WRITING

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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Superb Bhanu! I simply love it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome OS Bhanu :) The current tracks are enough to drive anyone mad, kaash aisa kuch dikha dete episodes main.. instead mahanta part 2 along with ashok in alag alag color ke carpets dikha rahe hain... khair for now yeh OS padhke khush hogayi!! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Liashna

Ah Finally. Res 😆

*Edited


"Dammit woman. Who do you think you are? Am going crazy for the past four days and apologizing to you like a maniac and it does not matter to you. It was a mistake. You yourself said you chose the bracelet for Mani so I misunderstood it. It was a misunderstanding and I am sorry for it. My feelings, my apologies do not matter to you right? You do not care about what do I feel? What did I feel when that goons had taken you away in front of my eyes? No. nothing matters to you; nothing."

"Raman, you are hurting me. Leave me please."

One minute Raman was screaming very loudly in my mind 😲 How perfectly you took him and his thoughts here. Uff i felt my mind will explode if I don't try reading that in a low tone😆 And then the another I heard Ishita's upset voice. 😳 Wow you set out the mood right from the beginning.

You completely exposed Raman and Ishita's heart in this OS. Senti kar liya conversation ne. 😳

Hayye you brought up the jealous and love equation line and made me remember the scene 😉

Raman who had figured out that he had made the necessary impact and conveyed his feelings to her smiled and made a move towards his bed but not before whispering these last few words to his frozen wife, "Good Night. I will be waiting for your answer."

🤣 Smart move puttar, though I cannot say if both won or lost in this banter *Imagining Ramu ki smile and Ishita's freezed face now*. You nailed it
👍🏼 😆

Brilliant Bhanu 🤗



Thank you 😳.

Yup. It is rare that Beewi can beat Puttar in the war of words ... and frankly am hating this ping pong ball situation between these two these days, so decided to take matters in my own hand and confession karwa dia ... err ... kind of karwa dia 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rutu83

so glad to see something from you after a looong time - sab writers ke muse holidays pe gaye hue hai 😡
nice os- conversation is asking for too much from the show. meaningful convo like this is impossible
interesting question by raman- is she ready?



I agree ... these days YHM writers muse is celebrating pre-deewali festivities ... 😡
I so hope something like this happens in the show.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: KK2926

You did it finally. :)))


Awesome bhanu!!! Wow i am feeling so good to be in yHM forum. There ar so many fabulous writers.
I wish cvs use atleast some part of ur os. I wish i wish...

Very nice OS. Keep writing when u get time.



Thank you Dear 😊. I also wish something like this happens in the series
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Thank you 😊

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