Ishra OS - TRANSITIVE RELATION - Page 5

Originally posted by: ThruMyEyez-Nita

Thank you for a beautiful OS. At least we get to live through moments like this in IshRa's land with such wonderful writing .😊

Thank you Dear 😊

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

nice!! I guess forum stories make up the deficiencies of CVs well :D

Thank you. True. The imagination of the forum writers are the saviors these days 😊. Glad to know you liked it.

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

This is just awesome!! One of my friends pointed this thread to me as she knew how badly I've been waiting for an Ishita-Raman heart to heart... Just loved what you wrote in your OS... THIS would be the perfect conversation if the Cvs were not busy chasing Ashok's shiny pajamas and sunglasses 🤢 ... You've been true to the original character sketch of Raman and Ishita..the ones who used to have mature conversation... . Thank you for that... 🤗

And the end to the OS... Just nails the scene !!!

Fantastic OS! 👏

Gandhari .. I am a fangirl of your posts too ... love your takes ...

I so want a mature conversation between them ... I really do not want the confession to be a shouting match, a drunk after confession, a one night mistake or do the deed ... I want it to be inside their bedroom where they confront their own feelings like mature people because both of them can clearly understand the difference between crush and love, between lust and attraction, between a one night stand and a life long courtship. I want them to confront each other, confess, have loads of awkwardness between them after they have confessed and finally do the deed .. like mature people do ...

BUT thanks to the CVs .. somehow, I have very less hopes for all this ... so trying my level best to put what I want in writing ... 😳

Glad to know I have like minded people in the forum who also want the same thing ...

Thankyou for the review 😊

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

If the writers of YHM visit this forum then can they please read this and learn! This was so beautiful, I wish we get something like this on screen.

I loved how conversational your OS is and the dialogues are so very believable I could imagine Raman-Ishita saying this on screen.

Best part for me was how you integrated the name plate in your story and how it signifies Ishita's intimacy with Raman. Thank you for this, I really needed it.

Your comment made me blush 😳. Thank you for appreciating my work. It means a lot 😊.

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Hi bhanu this is probably the first time I have read your work and I'm so glad I did, the moment I read the first paragraph I knew it was going to be good and it was only better!

Enjoyed reading it. If only you make it a TS 😳

P. S the elusive hug was at the right moment and I totally imagined it with such intensity and almost imagined ishita holding his face in moonlight peeking through the window and then her backing out and him approaching. Okay enough of my blabbering. Will go read the rest of your work too!

You know the best feeling is when another accomplished writer compliments your work .. and a comment from someone whose work I follow definitely places this review on one of the top spot ...
Elusive hug 😳 ... That is solely for my dear friend Paru ... she is dying to have a REAL hug in the show .. we all know the sad fate of the one which was shown recently ... sadly, CV's are treating hugging as a matter of physical proximity, while in reality it is more of a mental intimacy and these two at this stage in the series are definitely at this level of mental intimacy that hugging should not be an awkward gesture between them ... wish the CV's knew it is 2014 and not 1954 ...

Thanks a lot for the comment dear ... means a lot to me 😳.

Originally posted by: Veeann

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Oh wow Bhanu, finally managed to read it. awesome story, why don't you write more often ladki??? 😡

Yeh OS tha kya? Kyun yaar? Is mod par mat chodo - update de do pretty please.

👏 👏 👏 👏

V 🤗 .. when r u back from Tonga??? ME ... my writing muse was on a vacation ... ye to am at my Papa's place and no work and khali dimag added with the frustration of so many Ishraless episodes made me write this ... KC pe to pehle hi likh chuki hoon ... ab kya likhoo ...

Iske aage ... yaar beyond this ... I thought for a while but nothing coherent came to my mind so decided to stop at this point .. may be IF we ever reach to the actual confession the series ... I may write something ... abhi to isko pado and khush ho jao 😆😆

Thank you for reviewing V ... I know how much trouble u r facing with ur internet these days ... so thank u girl ...

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

This was amazing😊..so perfectly written👏..Cuuld visualize the entire scene in front of my eyes..seriously CVS need to read this..thanks a ton for this OS🤗

Thank you Dear 😊

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

Awesome really well written so wish to see seething like this which won't happen

Yup .. me too .. wish something like this happens in the show also .. Thank you for reviewing 😊

Originally posted by: yyy

Awesome... This is what we want to see in the serial but we get totally opposite one.

Thank you Dear 😊.

Originally posted by: hemanshi

I have literally imagined every single word, scene action that you have described and have gotten close to feeling what I would feel if this really happened. So first of all, you are an amazing writer to make me feel this sort of anxiety, apprehension and excitement through a OS.

And second of all, considering how everyone and their mother is sort of going crazy on how the tracks are ruined right now, I feel like maybe just maybe things might be taking a turn in our beloved show.

So here is to hoping for the best and to reading more of your stories!

Thank u Dear 😊. Glad to know you liked it. Kudos to your positivity and definitely Amen to your thoughts ... I so wish that the show is up for a big turn and a better turn ... and we get some brilliant mature Ishra conversations and romantic scenes 😳