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Posted: 11 years ago
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Umm, well I don't know why this idea popped up in my mind but I really wanted to write something.
Please Note: This OS is a pure work of fiction and is no way written to hurt the sentiments of Mani Fans or Mani/Ishita shippers. If you believe that this piece of writing may offend you please avoid reading it. I'm sorry if this OS creates a bad image of Mani (even though it is just a little part). and I guess this is kinda short too but well. continue reading :)

Not Proof Read : Please Avoid Grammatical/Spelling Errors.

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perplexed, perplexing, perplexes
To confuse or trouble with uncertainty or doubt.
To make confusedly intricate; complicate.


It was very late at night Ishita thought Raman was asleep so she decided to peek over to Mani's room and give him a piece of mind. How dare he speak to her husband about their relationship stating that she wanted to leave Raman?. She was puzzled why would he do this even when she had told him and explained to him the relation she shared with Raman, Ishita had hardly even forgot about Mani's lecture to Raman that he is not a good husband and Ishita and Mani's fight over that but things had sorted out. She entered his room he was not asleep yet.

"Mani we need to talk" said Ishita in a very firm voice.
"What happened Ishu?" he replied.
"You've no right to call me that." She said anger and hatred evident in her eyes. She continued,
"How dare to lie to Raman?" She said disgusted at the fact that this lair was her best friend.
"He doesn't deserve you anyway, I do." came his reply.

She looked at him with utter disgust and thought how in just some mere moments her hero became her worst ever enemy.

Man stepped a little closer, pinning Ishita to the wall and went close to her, as if about to kiss her, Ishita held on his collar and was supposedly pushing him away when she saw Raman standing there, She realized his and Mani's position only they knew what actually was happening though others if saw them would've thought exactly what Raman was thinking. Raman left the room no words said, hurt evident on his face. Ishita pushed Mani while he grinned. She could've slapped that crap of a person but decided to see Raman first.

Raman was devasted, when Mani told him about Ishita & Mani's relation, He thought he could be lying. Ishita was a gem of a lady she would never do that to him, to his family, to his Ruhi but still little did he fear if that became true his life would be nothing, the heart that had just started to repair would be broken yet again. He sat of the bed recalling what he just saw. Tears in his eyes while a smile played on his lips. "Fate?" he said as he would break down right there. Ishita entered.
She saw him, he was no more angry, sad or anything no emotion on his face.

"It's not what it looked like Raman, just listen to me once."
"Ishita, you don't need to hide it now, just go on with your life, wese bhi hamara rishta hi kya tha?"

She felt as if something sharp was pierced in her heart's most soft corner.

"Ishita, You know you made my life perfect but it is just that I gave you nothing, nothing at all and in the end if that is what i get as well, I think I deserve it"

Ishita moved upto him made him stand up and looked in his eyes, she moved closer to him while all he did was just to see her as if he would never she her again. She left a small peck on his lips while he licked his lip tasting her lip gloss, she never gave him time to reciprocate the kiss.

"And with that I break my first kiss." She said, a blush on her cheeks.

No words were said. No Confession was needed. He went to her and hugged her, all his fears and doubts cleared right away he kissed her forehead before taking her into a bone crushing hug again. He could feel her body trembling when he left her. They both felt a sudden emptiness and the urge to full it by hugging again but Raman had his own plans, he cupped her face and kept his forehead on hers, "If only you did it before" he saif not moving, their eyes closed "If only it was that easy back then" she replied as he picked her up and took her to the bed and started cuddling her kssing her neck. He then asked her with eyes if he has the right to kiss her lips, she blushed while he kissed her his one hand on her waist and other her cheek. he bit her lower lip after which she granted him access they explored each others mouths well, but they had to seperate due to lack of oxygen but before they even caught their breaths Ishita kissed him again taking control now she bit his lip but he was to adamant on not giving up so easily. Ishita opened the buttons on his shirt and started making circles on his chest while her other hand caressed his hair inbetween Raman's hand was playing with her belly button while one was holding her waist firmly. He opened his mouth and she kissed him exploring each and every corner of his mouth and stopped after finally licking his bottom lip.

"I may be better with One liners and Taunts but well you're a better kisser compared to me" He said with a smrik and then smiled. his dimple making Ishita's heart melt. She removed his shirt, he asked "why?" She gave him a isn't-it-so-obvious look. He understood and grinned at his naughty wife and said "Not now" with a slight smile. Sh didn't question him further knowing that he first needed to sink into this feeling. she huuged him tightly then rested her head on his bare chest, their his one hand entangled with hers while her one hand rested on his chest and his other hand on her arm moving up and down in a loving manner.

and they slept like that, the unsaid feelings realized, the unneeded confession mattered nothing now, they both knew what they felt and that's what matter the most.

Next morning Mani was kicked out of the house but not before Raman beating him blue and black.

Raman and Ishita's Life was perfect now, though Raman hated Mani, he knew without him nothing would've happened. He smiled at the sight of his lovely family. Raman/Ruhi/Ishita. just as perfect as it sounds.

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I hope you guys like it. Please do click the like button and leave a Comment.
Again I apologize if i hurted any fan here.
Love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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'Twas cute! I don't hate mani as much as other forum members I find him ok and maybe like a catalyst to drag the story in the show
In your story he is completely negative and it's one way to show then conch together becos of him thanks for this was a cute story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kash aisa hi hota😳 Knowing CVs, they will cook up some obstacles that will delay IshRa union but you've just made the perfect story! Hats off!😃
Edited by AditiDoc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sooo cute..!!
I wish something like this would have happened...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kash aisa hota serial mein!! absolutely brilliant update!
i seriously feel like to puck with Mani and Ishita's friendship... initially never felt weird.. now i feel its kinda getting over-board and fakeness!! itna pyaarr!! no gussa only in their friendship! well this was abt serial!

back to the update... i completely enjoyed reading. Ishra's smooth romance was perfect! loved it!

do write more!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't hate Mani but I can definitely laugh when someone is just trying to have some fun and this OS was fun!! It put a smile on my face, so I liked it a lot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beat him black and blue😆
lovely os,makes me want mani to be grey in show so he can be kicked out.
Edited by momb24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow its to cute
Keep writing
Take care! !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was awesome no word needed
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The following 50 member(s) liked the above post:

nimmi26, sona27, ArSha_TillIDie, Rusira, Iloveishra, Hsp.canada,
Thank you for the likes people 😳😳 50 is a big number 😃

Originally posted by: columbia

'Twas cute! I don't hate mani as much as other forum members I find him ok and maybe like a catalyst to drag the story in the show

In your story he is completely negative and it's one way to show then conch together becos of him thanks for this was a cute story


Thank You! I don't hate him as well. Glad you liked the OS.

Originally posted by: AditiDoc

Kash aisa hi hota😳 Knowing CVs, they will cook up some obstacles that will delay IshRa union but you've just made the perfect story! Hats off!😃


Thank You for considering it perfect 😳 I know that too, the confession is still far away.

Originally posted by: Divancraze

Sooo cute..!!

I wish something like this would have happened...!!


Thanks! Glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: avni_19

kash aisa hota serial mein!! absolutely brilliant update!

i seriously feel like to puck with Mani and Ishita's friendship... initially never felt weird.. now i feel its kinda getting over-board and fakeness!! itna pyaarr!! no gussa only in their friendship! well this was abt serial!

back to the update... i completely enjoyed reading. Ishra's smooth romance was perfect! loved it!

do write more!!


Thank you for such a lovely comment 😃 Glad you liked the romance 😊
we've somewhat the same opinion. initially it was fine but her mani jaap is way too much 😛
like we don't always praise our besties we insult them no? 😆


Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I don't hate Mani but I can definitely laugh when someone is just trying to have some fun and this OS was fun!! It put a smile on my face, so I liked it a lot.


Glad that it put a smile on your face! Thank you for liking it 😃


Thanks 😊



Edited by Recovery. - 11 years ago

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