~Unknown Secrets~ Raman/Ishita SS. [Part 1 Cont. Pg 4.]

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Well, I really wanted to write something not related to the current story or track! I hope you all will like it! Please leave your comments. Although it is a SS I've no idea how many parts it may take for completion, may be 7 or 8 parts. No PMs will be sent for any update[Cause I'm way too lazy to do that].

n o w p r e s e n t i n g
I S H I T A & R A M A N S H O R T S T O R Y.


u n k n o w n s e c r e t s


Prologue:
Her Slender Figure, Gorgeous Curves was all that on Raman's mind, Her every move from her hips swaying side to side, her hair falling down till her waist line, the way she moved. God! She was hot and He admitted that fact. He wanted her so bad, he couldn't help it, Everytime he'd see her he wished to touch her, feel her. He had been her friend since childhood when they were teens, he wanted to tell her how much he desired her but he didn't knew how to tell her what he feels. He wasn't one of those soft shy guys, he was one of the silent hard guys, he would tell her, he never wanted her to know about his weak side, that craved for her. for Ishita.

Walking down to the streets of the market, wondering how he'd spend another night without her, just thinking about her and so he stuffed his hands deep into his pockets, thinking about the eternal beauty who being with him but still away.His lady love who was unaware of this secret, unknown secret.

Unknown about his surroundings and lost in a day dream he didn't realize where he was going, and then he bumped into someone, and there she was his lady love. he looked at her dumbstuck her hazel brown eyes, complimented by her milk white soft skin and her hair flowing because of the cold wind,"Ouch" she said and he came back to reality.

"Oh Raman? You here in NYC too? It has been ages since we last talked"

Yes! How can he forget he was in NYC since half a year, but still he didn't had the guts to speak to her although, he was always around her, stalking or we should say protecting her from the hungry eyes of strangers. there she was!standing infront of him and there was not way he could avoid her now. he had to talk now.



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Prologue - Page #1
Chapter 1 - Page #3 [A Teaser Of My Love]
Chapter 1 / Continuation Page #4.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice,sounds interesting and love the way you write.
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This is quite interesting and well-written.
I would love to read more😊
Do continue soon!
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Cute start Dear!Pls continue soon & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?
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its superb👍🏼
something different
Plzz plzz do continue
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Originally posted by: bila_a

Really nice,sounds interesting and love the way you write.


Thanks :) Glad you liked it.


Thanks :)


Thanks :)

Originally posted by: vidya29

This is quite interesting and well-written.I would love to read more😊
Do continue soon!


Thank you so much. =)


Thanks :)

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Cute start Dear!Pls continue soon & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?


Thank you :) but I'm not sending PMs Sorry!

Originally posted by: hasiniangel

its superb👍🏼something different
Plzz plzz do continue


Thank You :) Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Now that is a great prologue. I am glad you are writing something
different from the current story line. I mean I love the current track but it's good to read
other interpretations as well.

Aha! Raman has already fallen hard fro Ishita...very intresting. So they are childhood friends?
and bump into each other. Well...that's what u call kismat Konnection after all na.

Great start...Do update soon!

Will love to read more.

😳
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Omg!! Waiting 4 ppl to comment and make it to page 4 fast!!! Grrr!! Why can't we spam!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Live-life

Wow! Now that is a great prologue. I am glad you are writing something

different from the current story line. I mean I love the current track but it's good to read
other interpretations as well.

Aha! Raman has already fallen hard fro Ishita...very intresting. So they are childhood friends?
and bump into each other. Well...that's what u call kismat Konnection after all na.

Great start...Do update soon!

Will love to read more.

😳


Thank you so much. Glad you liked the Idea, well yes I wanted to write about Raman,
but If It's love or lust that would be revealed later ;)

Originally posted by: SnigdhaGautam

Omg!! Waiting 4 ppl to comment and make it to page 4 fast!!! Grrr!! Why can't we spam!


Glad You Liked it =)
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An interesting start, waiting to read the rest.😊

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