IshRa SS- Jalaan ke bad, confession! (completed - 26th oct ) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful update !
waiting to see a jealous raman..
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wow...both parts are amazingg...
j track...gud job
thnks 4 pm sweety..update soon
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wonderful update 👍🏼
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Hey..!!
Both the parts were super awsumm././!!
I so loved their bickering..!!
too good.,.!!
do contionue soon..!!
and if possible do send me pm for next parts..!!
I have already send u request..:)
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Superb read both the d parts... Waiting for d nxt.
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Sorry for the delay in reply. My account was not working for few days! now all set!
awesum update! loved the cute convo between ishra!

continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi just got around to reading this n it was beautiful!!!! Raman is jealous cant wait for the update...
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PART 3 : RAMAN JEALOUS OVER VYANN


In the morning Vandu calls Ishita as she is tidying her room. Raman is in the bathroom.

Ishita : "Akka? Why did you call me so early in the morning! Is everything alright?"

Vandu : "Yes, everything is fine here. I called for YOU actually, amma told me you hurt your hand. How are you?"

Ishita : "Akka... It's nothing, I just burnt my hand, it's painful but not too dangerous. The only thing that is problematic is that I can't do surgeries for now..."

Vandu : "Ayo... that's bad. How are you going to manage with your patients?"

Ishita : "Actually Akka, everything is alright, Dr Sampal's nephew Vyann is currently assisting the senior dentists in the clinic so he'll help me."

Vandu teasing : "Vyann? That's a beautiful name ! Is he any cute too haa?"

Ishita amused: "Stop it akka!"

Vandu : "No really tell me, what is he like?"

Ishita : "Hmmm... He's a very nice guy; very sweet, and gentle with the patients. He is also very polite you know? He calls me Ishita ma'am!!"

Ishita laughs. At his point Raman is back from the bathroom, he stops near the cupboard as he hears Ishita's laugh. Ishita's back is facing the door so she doesn't notice Raman is in the room.

Ishita : "Really akka, I'm very happy with him so far!"

Vandu : "that's good then. But you didn't tell me what does he look like? Arre Ishu don't be shy now!"

Ishita : "Alright, alright! ... Well he is tall, fair complexion, he has nice facial features but what I like the most is that he is always smiling, kids love him at the clinic! It's just amazing ! I'm looking forward to work with him!"

Raman understands she is talking about Vyann and gets angry. He closes the cupboard's door very loudly. Ishita turns around, surprised. Raman looks at her angrily, picks up some clothes and leaves.

Vandu : "Finally a handsome guy is coming to work with you. So far they all looked a bit odd, hai na?" Ishita is confused and worried about Raman's behavior, she forgot she was on the phone.

Vandu : "Ishita? Are you still here?"

Ishita : "Haa vandu. Sorry. It's just Raman..."

Vandu : "Raman? What about him?"

Ishita: " I don't know, he just stomped out of the room and it looked like he was mad at me..."

Vandu : "Maybe he heard you talk about Vyann. Seems like your hubby got jealous Ishu!"

Ishita : "uh? No akka... It's not his type."

Vandu : "Being jealous is not about type-shype. Everyone gets jealous!!"

Ishita : "I know but I mean... He is... He doesn't like me that way. He is not getting jealous anywhere soon..." Ishu sounds defeated.

Vandu : "And what about you? You seemed pretty jealous the other day about this sanjana girl. Does that mean you like Raman "that way" now?"

Ishita blushing: "... I don't know akka... When I heard about sanjana, it was disappointed that he didn't told me about her. But also, I thought about all the women in his life and it hurt me. I thought that he could have a mistress right now and I would not have the right to say anything to him and that made me go mad. I was both angry, envious and... yes jealous... Akka, I think... I think I've fallen in love with Raman. "

Vandu : "Ishita I'm very happy for you! After Subbu, it's the first time you've let your heart feel love again and that's a good thing. Raman may not be in love with you right now, but it will come a day when your feelings will be reciprocated. Raman's heart is gold and I trust him."

Ishita : "Thank you Akka. Akka I need to go now, talk to you later. Ok, bye"

Ishita goes into the living room to serve breakfast to everyone. She looks around but Raman isn't here.

Ishita : "Papaji, where is Raman?"

Bhalla : "Oh puttar, he already left. And maybe that's for the better, he was in a very bad mood, now at least he won't unwind his anger on us!"

Ishita is disappointed because she wanted to take her breakfast with him.

Raman on his car is behaving rudely while driving because he is angry at ishita.

Raman : "What is wrong with the Madrasan? Did she need an assistant or a top model?! [he mimics her] "he is tall, nice features, so handsome!" Pagal aurat! Why is she drooling over him? Sharam ahnee chaye usko! Wo ek batchi ki maa hai, ek shaddi-shudda aurat hai padh wo uss Vyann ke piche parghi! Or itni subho subho kya zaroorat thi Vandu ko phone karne khi, sirf iss liye ke uski Akka ko batana tha ke Vyann kitne handsome hai? Cheh ! "

Later that day, Ishita decides to call Raman : "He has been acting weird since yesterday, something is wrong... Maybe it's something about Mihir and Mihika's wedding. I should check on him." She dials his number.

Raman : "Hello?"

Ishita : "Haa Raman it's me. I hope I'm not disturbing you..."

Raman : "that you are, it started when I got married to you, but what can I do about it?"

Ishita : "that joke is really getting old."

Raman : "Not as old as you. Well, why did you call me for now? Bolo!"

Ishita "Haa... Wo mein kai rahi thi..." Vyann enters her office to tell her that the next patient is here. He notices that she is on the phone and apologizes profusely.

Raman overhears Ishita's part of the conversation over the phone.

Ishita : "Don't worry Vyann. It's nothing. Tell the patient I'll be there in a minute. And please don't call me Ma'am, I've told you already."

Raman is angry.

Ishita : "Haa Raman, are you still here? Sorry about that, Vyann..."

Raman angrily interrupts her : "Haa I heard. You seem very busy right now, I don't know why you chose this time to call me, pagal aurat! I'm working too so I don't have time to wait around on the phone for you. I'm hanging up now, we'll talk about whatever you wanted to talk later. Bye."

He hangs up. Ishita is shocked : "Kuch to gadhbadh hai. Why is he so sulky lately?"

Raman is sulking at his desk. He hits his palm on the desk.

Raman : "This bewakoof aurat. She calls me when she doesn't even have time to speak. So stupid!... And why does she put me on hold to talk to her new assistant. He should be the one waiting around ! I'm her husband, god dammit! I should have priority!! ... (He mimics her) "Yuu doon't have to caall mee Maam..."... Jhansi ki Rani is acting like Jhansi ki Mahatma when she is with him... And who is he? Some sort of young punk I'm sure... Anyway why do I care? Mujko kuch hona chaye ke uss Madrasan ko ek accha sa assistant mila hai, abb wo uska dimaag khaye ghi, mera nahi!!"


VOILA BEAUTIES 😉 ! Thank you all for reading! Hope you like this part, if so, do press the like and i'd love to hear your thoughts in a comment. Looking forward to your feedback. Much love!🤗


Part 4 : Raman eavesdrops Ishita and mihika discussing Vyann !

Edited by rajji-cutest - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautuful update
jealous kumar...loved it...bechara
and ishu loves raman..
i hope you make him also realise in next part...update soon rajji...
w8nggg
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice ... heheehe raman and his ego heeheh

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