IshRa SS- Jalaan ke bad, confession! (completed - 26th oct ) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4 : Raman eavesdrops Ishita and
Mihika discussing Vyann

Madhavi calls Ishita during her lunch break.

Madhu "Hello ishu? Sorry for disturbing you in the middle of your work... Your Appa is having back pain, can you bring some medicine when you'll be on your way home tonight?"
Ishita "I'll bring it right now Amma. I'm not having any patient until 3PM, I have enough time to go at your house and come back for 3PM. I can't let Appa in pain until tonight..."

Ishita goes at her Amma's house and give the medicine she picked up at the drugstore. She returns at the clinic. Madhu notices Ishita forgot her mobile on the table. At this moment Mihika is back from work. Madhu asks her to go give the phone to Ishita as she will need it. Mihika is tired but she agrees.

When Mihika arrives at the clinic, she is received by a young man who comes her way.


He is tall, with dark hair and beautiful eyes. He has a warm smile with dimples on his cheeks. He makes Mihika at ease right away even if she doesn't know him at all.

Vyann : "Hello Miss."

Mihika keeps staring at his perfect face without saying a word.

Vyann "Miss? Do you have an appointment for today?"

Mihika : "Yes. Err... I mean no. I'm Dr Ishita Bhalla's sister, I came to bring her phone back."

Vyann : "Oh, sorry I didn't know you were from Dr Bhalla's family. I am Vyann, the new assistant. You can leave her phone in her office, she is currently taking care of a patient, she can't receive you for the moment."

Mihika agrees and says she will leave the phone in Ishita's office. Vyann nods with a smile and leaves her. Mihika stares at his back with her mouth open as he is leaving. "Akka is working with top models and she didn't even told me about this! Not fair Akka, Not fair!"

At night, Ishita is back from her clinic and goes to sit a minute in her room as she has had a long day. As soon as she sits, Mihika barges into her room.

Mihika "AKKA !! How could you hide that from me?"
Ishita worried : "What are you talking about mihika?"

Raman who was sitting in the living room, saw Mihika running from the entrance door to his room. He wonders what is going on and goes into his room as well. He is about to enter but stops when he hears :

Mihika : "He is HOT AS HELL!"
Ishita : "Mihika !! What are you talking about ?! I don't understand."
Mihika : "Your new assistant Akka ! I saw him when I came to bring your phone back. I couldn't think straight when he was standing in front of my eyes. I even think I forgot about Mihir for a second!" She laughs.
Ishita : "Stop it Miku! First of all, he is not MY assistant, he is working with everyone. And secondly stop acting like you just saw God at first hand!"
Mihika : "He was maybe not a god, but he definitely was an angel ! Don't pretend you didn't notice how handsome he is!" she jokes

Raman is boiling at the door. He leaves.

Ishita : "What is wrong with you? Yes he has a pretty face but I don't see him that way! He could be my little brother. He's not my type AT ALL anyway..."
Mihika : "You have a type of guy you like now Akka? What is it? Tell me naa akka...!"
Ishita : "Will you stop? I need to have some rest right now."
Mihika starts leaving : "Not nice Akka! Don't think I'll let you get away like that, I'll have my answer one day or another"
Ishita laughing : "Haa zaroor, but for now, just leave me!"

Raman is standing in the kitchen, thinking to himself : "... hot as hell uh? Those madrasan women they have bad taste anyways! Raman Puttar tenu kudh jaake dekhna parega, kya wo hot as hell hai ya nahi!"

Ishita comes out of her bedroom and sees Raman in the kitchen.

Ishita : "Raman, are you hungry? Do you want me to make something for you?"
Raman : "No. If I need anything, I can make it myself. I'm not hungry anyway!" his stomach growls. They both hear it.
Raman embarrassed but still acting angry: "... I'm going to freshen up."

When raman comes out of the bathroom into his room, Ishita enters with a tray.

Ishita : "Raman. I've made you some halwa. Want to eat some?"

Raman looks at her. His wife amazes him. After the way he behaved with her, he can't believe she still comes at him with some food and a gentle smile.

Raman is having a hard time staying angry : "You... You didn't need to do that!"
Ishita calmly: "I know. I wanted to."

Raman looks at her again.

Ishita : "I've made a bowl for myself as well. What about we sit down and eat while talking about Mihika and Mihir's wedding arrangements?"

Raman has no reason to say no so he agrees. They both sit on couch and start eating and talking. During the discussion Ishita thinks to herself : "Raman, if only you weren't so angry all the time, I wouldn't be so afraid of telling you how I feel..."

Raman notices her day dreaming.

Raman : "ho hello?! Kahaan gayeb ho gayi tum? You wanted to talk and now that I talk, you get lost in your own dreamland!"
Ishita : "Sorry, I was just thinking about... err about someone..."
Raman interrupts her : " I bet you have someone very special to think about, right ? Anyway, thanks for the halwa, I'm full now." And he leaves her sitting alone on the couch.
Ishita : "But Raman, wait!..." Raman doesn't turn around. "Ravaan Kumar is becoming Raging Kumar lately! If only he could tell me what is bothering him that much!"

Raman to himself : "she was probably thinking about his hot as hell assistant again... Pagal aurat!"



Hope you liked this part, beauties!! Hit the like if you enjoyed and post a reply if you can! Sorry for the delay, i'll try to upload sooner the rest. Love to all! 🤗

Part 5 : Raman sees vyann and plans something!

Edited by rajji-cutest - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
to be fair to raman, ishita was thinking about someone hot as hell 😉 and to be fair to ishita, she was thinking about the right guy 😃
so mr jealous kumar is going for an attack 😈 should i feel for vyaan?
when mihika asked ishita about her type of man, i was thinking with hand raised "i know, i know"😆
Edited by rutu83 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Wow..jealous raman is too cute
Pls update the nect part soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ravan Kumar kitna mirchi??
yar puri baat to suno
nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mihika's reaction to Vyann was awesome-ly funny !! I loved the way she ran into Ishita's room later and said he was "hot as hell". The best was Raman's reaction after that, I so want him to come face to face with Vyann now. Ishita is so sweet to make halwa for him. She is right that if he wasn't so angry, she would tell him how she really feels for him but wait till she finds out the silly reason for his anger.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
fantastic update👏
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just saw this story... read all the parts in one go... and loved it soo far...

waiting to read more.
Edited by Spana_stylo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
hahahaha!! hot as hell!! raman ho hua jalan!!! jalan bhalla! lol
loved it!! wonder wt he will do next? continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hhehehhe bichara Raman... Jealous emoticon
well is was nyc updt.. nd thnx dear 4 pm... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved reading it. Update soon. :)

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