Update Part 2: Trepeditions of 'new' love, page 7

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ALEHA2011
Amazing end it was such a cute part

Thank you Aleha!!!

Originally posted by: Nikita99
Wow! That was really sweet. Loved newly decorated room with their picture. Yaar it's about time that they do this move in YHM as well. Thanks again for pm.

Thanks Nikita!!! I really do hope that they show Raman changing the pictures in their room. I hope we get to see that!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: swathibalan
Hey!!
This is a perfect continuation with a wonderful ending.
2 Points which I absolutely LOVED
1. How Ishita finds the physically uncomfortable couch - Emotionally comforting..
2. the way you depicted the "lingering fragrance"- of romance...

Brilliant!!! do write more often.

P. S. UR inbox seems to flooded with congratulatory messages.. Clear them buddy... hamein bhi msg bhejne ka mauka do 😆

Thank you swathi!!! I am so glad you noticed the couch being physically uncomfortable and emotionally comforting, I am glad I was able to portray that and I am so happy that you were able to infer it!!! And the fragrance, well fragrance is comforting to me so I tried to incorporate that into the OS, I guess that's a little bit of me that I infused in Raman and Ishita lol

Inbox has been cleared partially 😛

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: lourel24
Superb.I love this dialogue a lot " Ek to pati puri raat soya nahi, etni mehnat ki aur tumhe couch ki padi hai." n last scene was too cute too.

Thank you lourel!!! I am glad you liked that dialogue and the last scene!!!!

Originally posted by: MayurnASYA
cute and lovely 👏

Thank you!!!

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ankitasidana
awww...super sweet romantic...
raman giving ishu place in their roomm...
wow...

srry 4 late rply yrrr...was rlly bzy...
read it now...thnks 4 pm
keep writing more and pming me...
c u soon...on a new story..

Thank you Ankita!!! And please don't be sorry, I am just glad you found the time to read my OS. I am so glad you enjoyed and I will try my best to come up with something new! Thank you for the encouragement😊

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felciya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Too Good. Ishus inner thoughts were well written by you. Ramans idea was good he did a make over to their bedroom n thrown out the couch.It was good to see their family photo in their bedroom.

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Sona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Great story - glad Ishita in end trusted her man.

-Sona

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: felciya
Too Good. Ishus inner thoughts were well written by you. Ramans idea was good he did a make over to their bedroom n thrown out the couch.It was good to see their family photo in their bedroom.

Thanks felciya! I am glad you liked Ishita's inner turmoil and the room idea 😊