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Hi I'm Divya , this is my first OS please bear with me i know its boring too sorry in advance and read at ur own riskšŸ˜›

"There is never a time or place for true love. It happens accidentally, in a heartbeat, in a single flashing, throbbing moment."
Sarah Dessen, The Truth About Forever

Raman is sitting and just staring at Ishita while she is sleeping peacefully now,he is thankful to God that HER Ishita is safe and with him.He can't imagine her life without her and what was more troubling him is when she badly needed him he was not there for her.
Flashback:
In the Morning ,
Ishita:Raman please wake up , ur getting late and me too i have to leave for clinic please hurry up.
Raman:Damn please 5 mins more!
Ishita:ok i'm leaving bye!
Raman: quickly wake up and say no wait i'll drop u give me 10 mins i get ready.
Ishita:laughs and say ok.She just admire her husband how cute he looks when he get scared!

Lunch,
IshRa texting each other:
Raman: so Jhansi ki Rani how many tooth have you removed till now šŸ˜› ?
Ishita smiles n say: dont call me Jhansi ki Rani please i'm Ishita !! n by the way Ravan kumar how many people have you shout at and make scared šŸ˜›?
Raman: well staying with you will have side effect na..šŸ˜‰ by the way i texted to say i might come late tonight so don't wait for me for dinner!
Ishita: ok thanks for informing but just to clear your misconception i was not going to wait for u for dinner šŸ˜›
Raman: how much u will lie Ishita admit it you love to have dinner with your husband šŸ˜› think about it..šŸ˜‰
Ishita: oh ya ur right in your dreams..
Raman:Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla , truth is always bitter to accept n by the way i love to have dinner with my Jhansi ki Rani
Ishita: really , you love having dinner with me?
Raman : nope i said Jhansi ki rani ur ishita na šŸ˜›
Ishita: I hate you! and i'm no more talking with you!
Raman:its good that you don't talk with me , atleast i will get some peace šŸ˜›
Ishita:you r so rude!! anyways me too i love to have dinner with my Ravan Kumar!
Raman : aww soo sweet of u this is what i was waiting for šŸ˜‰ have work catch with you later !
Ishita blushes😳 and just text have a great day see you!
Ishita thinks yeah he is right here so what if i wait for him i have the right i'm his wife ..hmm his wife that word do give me goosebump feeling!I'm proud to be his wife now c'mon Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla back on work!

11 pm
Raman was stucked with back to back meeting so phone was in silent sp he decides to check that first and he was shocked !! 26 missed call from home and 40 missed call from Ishita and messages too he got panicked and just hope tht all is ok he calls home and what he heard just make him feel as if he lost everythings , Ishita was missing n stil not home neither she was in clinic nor at any relatives seeing missed call from her means that she was definitely in a problem!He calls Ishita but her mobile was off he just drove and search for her like a mad man.He ust prays that her Ishita is save he promised to god that he will never trouble her he realised that his life is simply nothing without her he became numb , lifeless as if someone snatch his life from him just then Romi call him and informed him that Ishita is safe someone came to drop her home.He quickly drove back home.

At home:
Ishita was unconscious , Raman just rushes to her and hug her as if his life depends on her , he cries as hold her as if she is the most precious thing to him that belong only to him.When he was assured that Ishita is safe and in his arm , he enquires about what actually happen , then the family informs him that the person say he was passing by the road when he saw some people attacking a woman by damaging her car and hurting her , she tried to fight against them but she failed and then i saw her n took her to the hospital they treated her and the family was informed and they asked to bring her home. Raman was enraged and worried too as someone is trying to kill his wife.

Flashback ends~~
Raman see her face n he remembers all their past moments in which they fight laugh n care for each other he really wish to get his Jhansi ki Rani back in action, he wants her to wake up and fight with him and just shout at him , he miss her her smile her talks her lecture her laugh , and it just hurts him to see her hurt.Later on Ishita starts screaming in her sleep that please don't kill Raman i'll never let it happen , Raman was by her side and he was confused but he wakes up her and assures her that he is safe and with her. She just hug him tight and cries , he let her cry and after sometime when he felt that she was calm enough he break the hug to see her , he wipe her tears and ask her what happen actually? Ishita say i don't want to lose u Raman , he was again confused but he assures her that he is going no where then Ishita say her about what actually happen!
Flashback
Ishita was leaving from clinic on the road some goons stop her and say give her made her listen to a voice recording in which Ashok was talking and he said to herthat he will not leave Raman he will make him regret for challenging him and snatching all the business contract from him and he said he will first start by hurting him and killing him!and then the goons were given order to attack her so that Raman get affected!
Flashback ends~~
Raman was very angry , he just wished that he could kill Ashok , he nearly lost Ishita because of him ...Ishita knows that he was in an anger so she put her arm around his and just say..Raman i try to call u..i try to get help but couldn't ..i was scared that i might just lose u i may never see u what if i was...

Raman:Ishita stop it , never talk about leaving me !!why everyone come in my life to leave me why ...Ishita...past hours was hell for me not finding u not seeing u not being able to hear ur voice to see u to see ur smile ..it just as if someone snatch my breath from me i was lifeless without u ..I'm very sorry i'm sorry for not being there i'm not a good person that why all get snatch from me neither i am a good husband nor a good father, i couldn't help yo Ishita u cried for my help i wasn't there ..i wish i was in tht situation!!

Ishita: Raman what the hell u think ur ..god or what , u will decide now??i'm happy tht i was in that situation n u didn't face it , it was hurtful to just hear them talking to hurt u Raman facing it in reality would have being like hell to be i can't imagine my life without u Raman..me too i was always left and rejected by other i really don't want to lose you!
Raman smiles hearing it , it feel like he got everything that he wished from God. Ishita look at him and just saw him staring at her with tear in his eye , she just felt bad seeing him in a broken state , she hug him and promised never to leave him , it was a moment when everything was like real to them true love is what both were searching for yearning for and it was just love true love ,

Raman say Ishita ur the most precious to me i wished i had met u before ur not someone to be rejected the one who rejected u its their lost and I know we were married just for the sake of Ruhi.but i don't know when i fell for u ur smile ur talk ur lecture ur care ur luv is what make me feel alive. i know i'm not worthy enough to be a good husband but i promised i will please don't leave me , behind all the taunts shouts i do love you i know i never accept it but Ishita i can't live without you seeing u hurt hurting u hurts me more i want to give u world happiness i want to keep as mine forever please be mine please don't leave me I really want to grow old with you will u support me will you accept this Ravan Kumar ? I love you Ishita!

Ishita was in tears , it was a heartfelt confession , she was aware of his love but never thought tht one thought of losing her will make him so vulnerable ..she was happy that she finally got someone to whom she can claim as being hers and just hers.
Ishita say Raman ..I married u for the sake of Ruhi , u were just Ruhi's father to me but i don't know how n when u became my husband and just mine , today tht one thought of losing you forever was hurtful was more than facing death i cant' be without u Ravan Kumar I love you too and i want to spent the rest of my life with you and only you!

Both hug each other , Raman move forward to kiss her but she says what are u doing? he say i'm doing what usually happen after a couple confess their love to each other ..Ishita beat him playfully saying ur shameless and its not right, he say shameless i am that why my wife calls me Ravan Kumar and legally ur my wife and now we are lover too so Mrs Raman Kumar Bhalla i have full right n i'm going to prove you ..he move forward and capture her lip leading to a passionate kiss she responds back they spent the night expressing their love to each other!

True love just happens there is no definite time or reason for it and people realised it often when they are on verge of losing someone!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beyond words ..ā­ļøšŸ‘
It was such a beautiful piece of work ..šŸ‘šŸ˜³
The way you have written the confession and the kiss was amazing šŸ˜†
Edited by arshi.zoha - 11 years ago
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Very nice os divya. The quotes are very beautiful😳
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great piece, amazing for your first time writing an OS. love reading OSes especially on a Sunday! do write again
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oye hoye wat a lovely confession.. ā˜ŗļø
superb .. šŸ‘šŸ¼
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beautifull updateee!!! i loved it completelyyy!!!
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That was beautiful really wish to see something like this on screen
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Wow..very well writtenšŸ‘šŸ‘..seriously the thought of losing someone so dear to u is so scary..you have portrayed it so well😊..thanks dearšŸ¤— loved the confession and the cute kiss scene at the end😊 Oh and yes..very good for a first attemptšŸ‘šŸ¼
Edited by simples28 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshi.zoha

Beyond words ..ā­ļøšŸ‘

It was such a beautiful piece of work ..šŸ‘šŸ˜³
The way you have written the confession and the kiss was amazing šŸ˜†

Thank you for ur appreciation means alots 😊
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Originally posted by: swathibalan

Very nice os divya. The quotes are very beautiful😳

Ya the quotes are beautiful tht why i make it a point to use it thank u for liking😳

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