OS:Walking Backward To Future(updated part 12 at page 8)

Hi to all. This is my first os so it's will have many lags and bore. Give your feedback to improve my penning.


@ankitaasidana thanks for your suggestion. I'll give page updates on this post and title.

Part 1,2,3 ----- Page 1
Part 4. ----- Page 2
Part 5 ----- Page 3
Part 6,7 ----- Page 4
Part 8 ----- Page 5
Part 9,10 ----- Page 6
Part 11 ------ Page 7
Part 12 ------ Page 8

Mr.iyer become upset after knowing that Ishita in sad. He don't what happened between IshRa. Why Raman suddenly behaving like this. He decided to talk with Raman about his recent behavior.he heard a conversation between mihika and Ishita. That thing made him restless and made his mind to cycling thoughts.

*flash back scene between Ishita and mihika at iyers house*

Mihika: what happened akka? Last two days you seems upset.did jiju tell anything?

Ishita: no, mihika. Nothing like that. Everything is fine between me and Raman.

Mihika:akka, when you become liar. You know something. If everything is ok then you will Menton him as Raavan. Tell me what happened?

Ishita: I don't know mihika. Now a days he doesn't taunting me.I know even those are his taunts, those are his love and care too. He trying to avoid me. Even I start nok-jhoks, he just give fake smiles and left away.but when I saw his eyes, his heart shows guilty.I don't know what's going on.

Mihika: do you afraid that it's matter about shagun.

Ishita: no, No way.[stammers] it must business issue or something else. [Low voice] why should Raman think about shagun. Rubbish.

Mihika: may I ask this with buddhu?

Ishita: no. You don't have to worry about it. I'll handle this. No need to disturb mihir.

Mr .iyers besides for door and hears it.
*fb end*

Mr.iyer gets up from bench and walk towards home. He stopped moving when a car stops. Raman came out from that car and said good evening Appa.Appa asked him how do you do, Raman. Raman said a lifeless word, fine. Appa said,"I want to talk with you Raman ". Raman gets ready to listen.

P.s:
Guys, this if my first os. So I doubt that will you like it or not. I'm expecting your suggestions and criticisms.
Please forgive me for grammar mistakes. I'm waiting for your replies.

Nice start😊 Pls do update soon..Curious to know the reason behind Raman's behaviour..😊

Raman asked "what appa"."vishwa cmon. Now time is 8'o clock. We have to take dinner. Ishita invited us at her home." Thus Mrs. Iyer interruption made their conversation to end. Raman said let's go, Appa. Mr.iyer moved to Bhalla mansion with Raman.

@bhalla mansion, Ishita at busy to preparing dosa,idli and some south Indian foods. Raman entered to home with Appa. IshRa paused a moment and both continued their works.neelu helping Ishita, everyone else at dinner table. Raman changed his out fits and came to kitchen.

Raman: neelu, go and help to mom. I'll handle here.

Neely came to table for serving. Appa peep to know what's going on.Raman took a plate with idli and chutney.

Ishita: (lower voice only hearable to Raman) it's idly not your favorite paalak paneer.if you take this,
It may make you to play cricket in bathroom again(she smiled cutely)
But her smile vanished after Raman gave unconcern smile.Ishita get disturbed.

Ishita: (in mind voice) [what happened to Raman. Which bothers him now. (Pause) is it shagun. No , but yes. She's the one always troubles. What wrong with her. Why she always haunting Raman.]

Mr.Bhalla: where is romi.?

Mrs.Bhalla: he is in his room.

Now simmi enters to hall from her room and asking about dinner. Then Mrs. Bhalla replied her that idly and dosa.

Simmi: what mom? Why didn't you cook today. Why did you let her to cook south Indian food. Now what will I have.

Ishita: don't worry simmi.I already made some Punjabi food for you. Take it.

Simmi:(in taunting tone) did you forget that how you messed last time. Why are you messing this kitchen with your south Indian foods.

Raman: (in angry and loud voice) enough simmi. What's problem with you if she cooks. She is DIL of this house. She can do what she want. If you have any problems, then tell your husband who eats in mil house to find a house for your powers. This is my house so don't raise your voice against her.

Everyone in hall are stunned with Raman's this anger. Simmi left the place, venting out her words with anger,"Congratulations bhai, you degraded your own born sister for her ".

Ishita came near to Raman: (in lower voice) why did you do this.(even she showed a concerned face, her eyes and lips explained that she is pleased with his support)
Raman replied her, you're mom of ruhi and DIL of this house. You have every rights to do anything. Do your work and I take some free walk. Raman went out ,Appa finished his dinner.Ishita got happy still she felt some vacuum. She asked her self really does want that.Appa said you all continue_,I too wasn't a small walk.

Raman came down and sat on walk bench. He rewinding dinning table issue. Appa came down and watched Raman from some distance.

Raman said to himself, "biwi won tum meri(you're my wife ttoo)".

excellent start... plzz update soon very eager to kno about his weird behaviour

Really good start do continue

In ParMi room
Param: what happened simmo? Why do you look so upset?

Simmi: paramji, please get some rent house for us. I can't bear when one taunts you. We've to show them that you can make me proud. Please get some home quicker. But remember don't get help from ashok or shagun.

Param:simmi. Do you think I won't listen to you? Don't worry. I'll prepare evening ASAP.(he widens his arms, simmi hugs him happy with worried face) (in mind voice_)[now what Ishita did? Ishita ji you will get answer for this move soon. I'll you and your husband life to hell. But I have to find some solution quickly. Without ashok help how can I manage this. Think beta, think]

At walk bench, Appa place his hand on Raman's shoulder. Raman recollected himself, "arrey Appa, come. What do you want Appa? You tried to tell something."

Appa: what happened Raman?

Raman: what, what happened Appa? Everything fine between me and her.

Appa: so you have problem.beta,I always consider you as my son. Did you forget what you said at hospital.share your problems with father (few secs delay) I promise you that I won't tell anyone regarding this. Tell me.(Raman gives a nod)

Raman explains what happened.* flashback starts at Raman office, Raman talking with his clients*
A call comes to Raman phone.

Raman: tell, what do you want?

Ishita: nothing.a Tamil movie premired at near theatre. Can you bring tickets for our both families.

Raman: what do you think about me? Did you think that I will see movie with you and say 'pramaatham(excellent)'. if you want to see commercial dramas, do but don't try to get madarasan effect on this Punjabi puttar.put down.
(He ends call. Opposite side Ishita wonders that does he hire any employee for writing complaints like balance sheets to always giving complaint sheets)

Client: so you both did inter cultural marriage.

Raman: so what about this magnet marriage?

Client: you both must loved and then married. Isn't it?

Raman: my marriage? Is love one? (He smiled. Suddenly his smile decreased and then ceased.)
No.(_he went to thinking mode)

Client: isn't it love marriage?

Raman:(returns to sense) yes._it's love marriage. You carry on. I'll give you project status at next week (client leaves that room) love? Marriage?(Raman in confused mode)

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(He questions himself)

Raman: we married. did Really we marry.

He recalled everything how she entered in to his life.

Fb(how he mistook her that she trying to get marry with him by using ruhi)

Fb(he taunting her as 'gold digger.)

Raman concerned and guilty face shown.

Fb (how he sent their parents to jail)

Fb(how he taunted her about incapable to get child)

Fb (how they married for ruhi sake)

Fb(how he insisted her even after marriage)

Fb(some of his recent taunts 'pagal madarasan')

Fb(how she helped in all her troubles)

Raman face only had guilty. He can't console him about his inner feelings.

*flashback ends*

Raman: your daughter is nice person. She is kind and good.initially I thought that I'm going to marry a greedy women but I'm wrong Appa. We married for ruhi but things are more than that. She married me for ruhi but she must also had some imaginations about her husband. She engaged with subbu. She must had some expectations from her wouldbe which subbu had. But what happened is this marriage. She may happy with ruhi but she deserves a ideal husband. What to do i'm a divorcee who struggling with my past. I can't do anything because she married for ruhi. I doing injustice in my husband duty to her. She deserves far better one than thus insensitive husband.I can't forgive myself for this injustice. I don't have courage to see her face. Mihir always mentioned me as moral one but truth is in most immoral one(he broken into tears)

Appa gave his shoulder to Raman's face. He broken on him. Appa also she'd some tears with happy. After some minutes both backed to normal one.

Appa: Raman, don't worry please. Control yourself. See when I fixed marriage Ishita complained you about very much but after marriage she didn't say anything against you. So don't think that she unhappy with you.

Raman:Appa, don't you know about your daughter. She is kind. She won't complaint even she got hurt.

Appa: yes, Raman. You may right about your view. Ok leave ishita. Answer me for this question. Whether do you want try to love her for you parted in marriage with her or are you trying to complete this marriage for you loves her.

Raman stunned with this question. He showed puzzled face with stammering word, "i...I...I..."

Appa: you need time for this question. Think calmly. I promise you again that I won't tell this to anyone.

Appa left confused Raman at walk bench.
Raman rolled with his thoughts.

Fb (Appa questions that whether for marriage or love)

He remembered his cute moments with her and how she confronted shagun and ashok for him. He smiled for her care. "i love her seriously I love her "

Fb(Appa tells Raman that she didn't complaint about him)

"Does she love me. (HE recalled some her caring scenes) yes she also love me.

His happy face suddenly turned to upset.

Fb(fake confession scene, Ishita telling him that she is aware about she married for ruhi sake)

"Yes, she married for ruhi sake. She cares me because I'm ruhi's papa. She is kind. She helped shagun too when she drunken even she clearly knows shagun is her enemy. She helped simmi even she degrades her. Same too me. I put her parents in jail. I didn't help when my family accused her characterless. I didn't help her when Amma accident case ran. I didn't do any good to she loved me. She helped me and supported me only because of in ruhi's papa. "


He returned to his room. Ishita slept on couch after a wait for him. Suddenly rain started to fall. A drop fall on her face. Her eyes moved little. Without delay Raman took a file and fold it upon her face to no more drops to fall on her. He moved window without making noise. then he throw his file on bed. He looked her few more secs then he came to next window and opened it.

*flash back scene*
@adi accident track

Ishita telling him that it's gods gift to purify our hearts. It goes to our inner and then there is no more stains

*fb ends *

He looked her some secs then he entered his face into window. Rain drops spilled on him.

Great story

wow..amazing story
all the parts are beautiful..loved all of them

i would say..you pls make an index of alk the parts so it becomes easy to know when u update it..or u can edit the title also...

anywaz good story
update soon..gr8 job

pls pm me if possible...