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Posted: 11 years ago
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w8ng 4 super confession
gr8 update
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Such a cute update..awesome😃 waiting to see how Raman and Ishu will win each other's heart😃
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-----part 8-------

Time almost reached 6.00pm. Ishita returned to home from clinic. She parked car and walking towards home with thinking about how to win Raman heart. She bumped and feel on some one. She looked it's Raman. Both landed in little eye lock.

Raman:arrey madarasan. I'm not your bed. Wake up quickly.

Ishita: sorry. I lost in some thinking so I didn't watch you.

Raman: you just have too little brain. So it's better to concentrate on road than giving over load to it like this.

(Ishita became happy and smiled because her raavan Kumar is back)

Raman: what happened? Your are smiling though I'm taunting you.

Ishita: I thought you lost your complaint scripts that's why you must be sad. Now it seems you found it again.

Raman: no, I didn't lose it but I found hard while searching it between tons of lecturing notices.

Ishita: joke no 75. You told it before.now it's time to buy new joke book. cmon,let's go to home.

(Ishita went to home with smile.raman got happy for her, "Ishita I wishes this smile to live in your face always")

Raman entered to home and saw Ishita at kitchen. "What is she doing?
Now only came then whats necessary to start work immediately. Neelu also there. Can't neelu handle it? Why does she straining like this?(he showed concerned face)"he went to his room and took some time to find file. He came out and ready to go to office again. Ishita said,"one minute"

Ishita: here is your tea.you're going to office. So drink this, you'll get refresh.

Raman: oh. Did you work at kitchen for this? But how do you know that I'll go office again?

Ishita: if you return home, you'll park car at parking and bring some file. But today you came with empty hand. So I guessed it.

Raman: (even he get happy for her concern
) now only I told you that don't give overload to your brain. Then you'll turn to mental from dental.

Ishita: kudkud Kumar, everyone waiting for your ccomplaints at office. So drink quietly and go quickly.

Raman: (he drank half cup tea and prepares to go) OK, I I'm going take care.

He went to office with happy face.

Neelu:bhabi, may I make a coffee for because you don't drink tea.

Ishita: no thanks, neelu. I'll manage. (She took that cup and smiles. Finally she drinks remaining tea happily)

@ashok office

Param:ashok bhai.I don't understand how to face this problem.

Ashok: can't you tackle your wife in this silly matter. You fooled her at very big things. This is just silly thing.

Param:bhai. She thinks this as my reputation. So my words doesn't work in this thing.

Ashok:OK, just do like this. You just say to your wife like you signed a contract with me for three more months, So you can't back off.try to convince her within these three months. Even if we can't, we will think this about later.

Paran shows like "this is good" face.


@Raman office
Meeting gets over. Raman came to his cabin. He took phone and calls some one.

Raman: hello.I'm raman speaking (to hotel Lou's bounge manager) (o.s: no matter what's hotel name. I just been here it's big hotel). OK listen, I want a dinner table at 10.00pm with chocolates, flowers, wrappers, etc.. Arrangement must be in A one. OK.(he cuts call and dials new number ) hello I'm raman ( to theatre manager INOX) listen I need two premiere show tickets of Tamil movie going to be release tomorrow. OK, fine send those too my office. (He cuts the call)

He saw mihir at door step. He came to him and places a hand table and gives a pose

Mihir:wow.bhai, after two long days you are turning to romantic mode. So is this surprise coffee your wife.

Raman looks at him and gives just little smile.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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begining of romance...wow
looking forward to it
thnks 4 pm buddy
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely piece of writing, continue further
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-------part 9-------

Raman: beta, these arrangements not for me. But for you. You're engaged with mihika.why don't you take her to places like this.

Mihir: bhai. Are you teaching me to be romantic. But why don't you try to do this to bhabi.

Raman: duffer,I know what to do for your bhabi. So you just take mihika to dinner and movie date.don't worry about tomorrow office. Come lately, no problem.

Mihir smiles about his date.

@ParMi room

Simmi: what are you saying paramji. Can't you leave that company immediately.(she feels upset)

Param:simmo. Please just wait for three more months. Then i will prove to Ishita that how will your husband make you proud(he cupids on her face)

Simmi shows agreed face.

@bhalla mansion hall

Ishita and toshi cuts vegetables for next day food.

Ishita:mummiji, leave this, I will manage this.

Toshi: no problem puttur.I help you.where is Raman?

Ishita: mummiji, he's at office.

Toshi: he always does like this. do You know something. Before your marriage, he comes to home midnight sometimes he stayed at office itself.

Ishita: didn't you blame him about that.

Toshi: he didn't respond my advises. What to do?

Ishita: didn't pappaji say anything about it

Toshi becomes sad: no puttur. He didn't say anything. (She gets up and goes to her room. Ishita sees she left some uncut vegetables)

Ishita (to herself): what happened. Mummiji suddenly became sad. What happened between Raman and pappaji.

--------next day morning----------

Mihir comes to office correct time even he spent date with mihika.he came to Raman's cabin and gets surprise.

Raman:why did you came eagerly. I told you to take some time and come lately. I can understand about your reddish eyes because you didn't sleep. Did you?

Mihir: bhai, leave my case. But why did your eyes turn red. Didn't you too sleep.

RRaman:(goes to a thinking mode a moment suddenly he converts it with his taunts) idiot. This is office. Here we came for work not to take rest. Go, Go and work.

Mihir leaves to door with jasoos face: what happened yesterday. What do bhai hide from me.?

he calls to Ishita bhabi. Ishita in semi sleeping at her cabin (dental hospital)

Edited by suseesuez - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Continue soon... Waiting for next part...
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-------part 10------

Mihir: what happened bhabi doesn't attend my call.
He calls her again. This time she gets it. She attends his call.

Ishita: yes, mihir.

Mihir: nothing bhabi. why did take time to attend my call.

Ishita: nothing mihir. Yesterday I didn't sleep well. That's why.

Mihir: (with smile) OK. I think bhai did something yesterday. OK I cut call. We will talk later.

He cuts the call.

Ishita: yes, he made me insomnia here yesterday.
(With little anger face)

****fb scene starts********

Around 8.30 pm Ishita gets a call. "Raman"

Raman: suno. Today I've to much work in office. I'll come after midnight only. so you just go to sleep, don't have to wait for me.

Ishita: just tell me ttime, no problem I'll wait.

Raman: arrey. Please do what I say. I told you that it'll take more time. Don't spoil your sleep and don't call me to disturb

Ishita: but what about your dinner

Raman: don't worry. I ordered it from hotel. Take care yourself. Bye

He cuts the call.Rubi came to Ishita "ishimaa, please help to finish this homework." "Haan beta"she goes to her room and helps her. Ruhi gets sleep. She made her to sleep on bed and returns to her room.time is 10.30pm. She put alarm for 11.45 pm and sleeps.alarm gets peep she wakes up and goes to hall to check whether Raman came or not. He didn't come. She returns to bed puts alarm after 30 mins. She repeats the cycle.even she haunted by sleep she controlled herself to wait for Raman. Finally time reached to 4.20 am, she comes to hall Raman still didn't arrive.she turns to go room. Suddenly enterence door gets open. Raman gets happy to see her because he knows she waited for him. But he acted as normally.

Raman: didn't you sleep.

Ishita: no. I'm in asleep. I just came to drink water.

Raman: did you drink water

Ishita: yes. I..(she falls on him due to her tiredness.Raman just caresses her hair. Then he take her into his arms and goes to room. He places her on bed and puts blanket on her. He smiles on her caring. He comes to couch and gets sleep)

Morning time is 6.30am.ruhi knows IshRa room door. Ishita wakes even she had tiredness. She opens the door and prepares ruhi for her school. Raman aLSO gets awake. Then both prepares them self for profession. They came to dining table. Toshi asks, "what happened. Didn't you both get sleep yesterday"

Raman: mummi. I've to much work. So prepare lunch box. I'll eat in office.

Ishita: mine too, mummiji

Toshi prepares it and gives to Raman and Ishita.
Both comes down.

Raman: OK, you go to clinic. I'm going to office

Ishita: bye but don't take strain.

Raman: OK(after thinking ).come with me. If you drive, definitely you'll make accident.

Ishita: won't you do

Raman: no, driver only drives it. First I leave you to clinic then I'll go to office

Both leaves to clinic in car. Due to sleepiness, both heads falls on each other. They just sleeps on opponent's shoulder.driver stops car at clinic and calls them. Both gets up and feels some awkwardness because driver is before them. Ishita leaves to clinic. Raman goes to office.

*****fb ends******

Time just tturning to 5.00pm. He advices mihir to spend time mihika.mihir teases him with bhabi. Then mihir goes to meet mihika. Raman waits mihir to leave office.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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good update...
looking forward to itt...
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--------part 10------

****fb scene starts********

Around 10.30 pm Raman gets a call from appa. "Raman, everyone slept. Come quickly "

Raman enters to iyers mansion after assuring no one watched him. He comes to hall with Appa.

Raman: Appa, where is Amma

Appa: you don't have to worry. I mixed sleeping pill in her milk. She won't get up now. But do carefully. Ishita is brilliant. If you do mistake, she can find web m very easily. Go.

Raman: thanks Appa. Don't worry about mihika. Mihir will care her nicely.

Appa:I believe in you both
Appa leaves to his room to sleep. Raman comes to Ishita room(where mihika staying). There are bunch of books, goods, toys and etc...

Raman: cheez,how can I arrange this again.

He takes video of entire room. Then he begins to search. Time almost reached 12.15 pm. Finally he found what he looked. He found one of old first of Ishita.he thinks Appa words "she wrote diary till her first engagement. But after that she stopped writing diary. ". he finds totally 8 diaries of random years. He just take first page and sees her teen age photo. He mesmerised with that cuteness.he gets up watches time 12.30pm.
He decided to arrange the room again because he knows mihika will land anytime there. He arranged it again by using that video. Time almost reached to 3pm. He comes out and in dilemma whether to wake Appa or not. He waited some more minutes.Appa cane out and asks Raman about his effort.

Raman:Haan appa. But I just got 8 diaries what about remaining.

Appa:I don't know. I think you didn't check properly.

Raman: leave it Appa. It's more than enough.

Raman sees Appa in sleeping. He feels bad about disturbing him from sleeping at this age."Appa, wait. I'll make tea for both."

"No thanks, Raman. Three is no need to do it"

"No problem,Appa.I'll make it "

He goes to kitchen to make tea. He takes time to find ingredients places but he does it. He comes with two cups to table. He gives a cup to Appa.Appa drinks it.

Appa: not bad. It's really good.

Raman: Appa, does you or did you write diary.

Appa: no, in my home no one writes diary except ishu.

Raman: then how did JKR start to write diary.

Appa:(smiles) she is very sensitive. She always like to remember precious moments. So she decided to write diary. But when she broke up, it isn't precious moments but ugly past of her. She always wanted to read diary at every month end to good moments of that month. But after her engagement incident she throwed all diaries to attic.

Finally he sees Raman in thinking but he is upset. "Ramen"

"Nothing Appa. OK I've to leave now because mihika will come here soon." He gets up and washes cup. He takes so diaries and goes to his car and places in its back.he hears some car coming towards. He hides inside car. Mimi comes there and mihir leaves mihika after cute conversation. He waits until both gets to leave. Then he goes to his house.

*****fb ends******

He reads some pages but doesn't show interest. Suddenly he reads a page slowly with concentrating.he shows dune satisfied face. He came to home. His JKR already arrived. She trying to clean tooth models in soap waters. He came with a box to her and gives to her. She looks like what's in this box.

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