OS:Walking Backward To Future(updated part 12 at page 8) - Page 2

Originally posted by: suseesuez

Hi to all. This is my first os so it's will have many lags and bore. Give your feedback to improve my penning.


@ankitaasidana thanks for your suggestion. I'll give page updates on this post and title.

Part 1,2,3 ----- Page 1
Part 4. ----- Page 2

Mr.iyer become upset after knowing that Ishita in sad. He don't what happened between IshRa. Why Raman suddenly behaving like this. He decided to talk with Raman about his recent behavior.he heard a conversation between mihika and Ishita. That thing made him restless and made his mind to cycling thoughts.

*flash back scene between Ishita and mihika at iyers house*

Mihika: what happened akka? Last two days you seems upset.did jiju tell anything?

Ishita: no, mihika. Nothing like that. Everything is fine between me and Raman.

Mihika:akka, when you become liar. You know something. If everything is ok then you will Menton him as Raavan. Tell me what happened?

Ishita: I don't know mihika. Now a days he doesn't taunting me.I know even those are his taunts, those are his love and care too. He trying to avoid me. Even I start nok-jhoks, he just give fake smiles and left away.but when I saw his eyes, his heart shows guilty.I don't know what's going on.

Mihika: do you afraid that it's matter about shagun.

Ishita: no, No way.[stammers] it must business issue or something else. [Low voice] why should Raman think about shagun. Rubbish.

Mihika: may I ask this with buddhu?

Ishita: no. You don't have to worry about it. I'll handle this. No need to disturb mihir.

Mr .iyers besides for door and hears it.
*fb end*

Mr.iyer gets up from bench and walk towards home. He stopped moving when a car stops. Raman came out from that car and said good evening Appa.Appa asked him how do you do, Raman. Raman said a lifeless word, fine. Appa said,"I want to talk with you Raman ". Raman gets ready to listen.

P.s:
Guys, this if my first is. So I doubt that will you like it or not. I'm expecting your suggestions and criticisms.
Please forgive me for grammar mistakes. I'm waiting for your replies.

aww..u welx dear..gud u updated itt..
u r doing a gud job with this story..

-------part 5----------

Appa entered to his home.Mrs.iyer and mihika stopped their conversation after seeing his presence.

Appa: what happened madhu? Why you both turned quiet after seeing me?

Mihika: no matter, periyappa. We just discussed some usual things.

Appa: I know that you both discussed about Raman.tell me what's going on

Mihika:periyappa.periamma told me what happened in today's dinner. Jiju supported akka but past two days they are not in good terms. Then what happened today suddenly jiju to support her.

Amma:haan.vishwa. we must talk to Raman about wwhat's the wrong happened.we must have to change Raman to old Raman.

Appa said calmly: madhu , leave this matter . everything will set soon.(both get shock after hearing this simple speech)

Amma:vishwa, what are you saying? How can we leave this so easily? She is our daughter. Our happiness lies on her. Don't you care about her life.

Appa: yes, I care about her but listen to me. I swear you both, my plan will success and clear their issues. Just give deaf ear and unconcern gave when next time she complaints.

mihika: periyappa. Why are you saying like this. What will happen if we do like this.

Appa: just do, you will get answer soon.ok, I need rest.

He went to his bedroom. Amma left to their rooms with confused and concerned face.


*****next day morning*******


Raman woke up and opened his eyes to see her first in the morning. She is still in sleep due to tired about last few days work and restless about Raman weird behaviour. Raman smile seeing on her. Suddenly his mobile gave peep toning. He took and watched what's in reminder. "Oh.I've to get ready now. "he took bath and got ready full. He came to Hall. Mr and Mrs Bhalla having tea on dinner table.

Raman: good morning papa. Good morning mumma.

Both: good morning beta.

Mr. Bhalla: where are you going Raman? You prepared So early.

Raman: nothing. Just a call for community service. So I prepared early.

Mr.Bhalla: services only called on Sunday.but why are you going in Saturday itself.

Raman: I don't know ppapa that why it's on today. But for adi there is no differences between weekday and leisure day.

Mrs. Bhalla:puttar,where is Ishita? She have to prepare ruhi. Huh?I don't see her since morning.

Raman: mom, she is sleeping. She must be tired. It's better that you prepare ruhi today.let her take rest.

Mr.Bhalla: but what about her hospital.

Raman: i already checked her commitments. Nothing on morning. So no problem. OK, I've to leave now.


Raman went away. While he got out, he opposed Mr. Iyer on the way. Both greeted other.

Raman: Appa,(with a little shy plus happy face )I desired to move the life on with her. I just want accept this marriage while heartfelt.(Appa became so happy
) but I need your help.

After some muted conversation,

Appa: sure Raman. I'll help you in all the ways. I'm so happy about you both.

Raman: ok Appa. I've to leave now.

Both made their ways with happy face and heart.

Ishita woke up and shocked to see empty bed. She looked time that 8.30 pm."what ? Did ruhi prepare for school. "
She came to hall and saw toshi having dinner break fast.

Toshi:good morning, Ishita.

Ishita: mummji, where is ruhi.

TToshi: dinner worry puttar.I prepared her at sent her with bhallaji.Raman said me prepare her because you're in sleep .Get ready and take some tea.

Ishita became happy about Raman's cconcern"where is he "

"Puttat,he went to Adi community service. You get ready. Don't you have to go hospital "

Toshi moved to kitchen to do some works with neelu. Ishita became upset. She came to their room.

"Why didn't he tell about anything. we promised that we have to share important occasions of our children. Till his last community service session,I prepared much and everything for him. But what happened suddenly. What wrong I did. Without telling me how can rectify myself ".
Her tears rolled on her cheeks.

awww..poor Ishu..
but lovely update..
hope Raman does sumthng soon..
and covers up for her sadness

it was amazing update...

All parts are very interesting... Continue soon...

-------part 6-------

Ishita came to Amma home with disappointment and sad face. Even Amma and mihika felt upset about it , they showed them as busy with unconcern face.
She sat in dinning table. "Amma"

Amma:ishu, please. I'm in busy now. I've to arrange some things for mihika marriage. We will talk later.

Ishi ta(with more upset): mihika.

Mihika:akka, please don't call me now. I'm getting late (she came near and hug her ) bye akka.

She went to her office.amma excused to return her room. Ishita been left there with tears and upset. A hand on shoulder made her to turn. "Appa". he sat near to her.

Appa: what happened ishu.

Ishita:I don't know Appa. What's going on or how this happening. But what happening is hurts me lot. I don't know what wrong I did. Do you know, Raman hurts me now a days.

She just weeping.appa put his hand on her shoulder.

Appa: did he whether blame or accuse you.

Ishita: no Appa. He just avoiding me. What wrong I did. Why he just leave me like this.

Appa: console yourself. He must have some tensions. Problems are not new to him. He is a successful businessman. it may be some company problems. His son in court supervision. It also can be reason. So why are you worry about it unnecessarily.

Ishita: Appa. Be it anything, what's need to hide it from me. Wont I support him.

Appa:ishu. Stop crying. See, Raman isn't a kid. He clearly knows what he does. you married him for ruhi. So may he didn't want share his problems with you.Then why are you worrying about him. Even he has problems, why are you trying to interfere in his life while he refusing to share his problems.

Ishita (with astonished face):Appa, what are you saying.
How can I let him to suffer. Did you forget that how he cared Amma at accident time.

Appa: yes, beta but...

Ishita: ok leave Amma. did you forget how helping in our mihika marriage. Not only mihika ,also He helped jiju even after knowing his brother is guilt. How can we leave this just like that.

AAppa: beta, I agree but...

Ishita: he helped me so much in life. Don't you know that. Do you know about how much he helped me at when my hand broken. You don't know this. He sacrificed his post only for my carrier. Today, he suffering in pain. How can I leave him. I know that he just taunts always but he is pure in heart.

Appa: then why didn't you accept him as husband whole heart felt?

Ishita shocked with this question. "I...I...I.."

Appa: beta,I clearly knows that you both made contract marriage for ruhi. (Ishita listens him carefully )Do you remember your engagement day. You told me that Raman won't get anything from you. Because you understood him in wrong zone. Ask to yourself that is he the same Raman you married. (Ishita head goes down due to guilty) beta, today what are you seeing is real. I can't force you to consummate(not physically but mentally) this marriage. Because you knows, Raman knows and everyone in these two families knows that you made contact on this marriage. It's immoral to blame or accuse you for unconsummation but what I'm saying you that Raman is an ideal man. He cares for you, me, Amma, bala, mihika and everyone. He is the nice person you didn't imagine.I feel it isn't wrong to give him another chance or trying to make efforts instead of waiting for opponent's efforts. Beta, once again I tell you that i didn't force you but I advice you to think wisely.

He moved to do his work. Ishita been left with her mind.

nic story, read all parts togather. Appa conversation with Raman & Ishitha was very good

thanks for you all guys. I didn't imagine that I'll get this response. really thanks for your posts and suggestion.
@ iloveyhm
I didn't write any romance because CVS far better than me in creating romance but they don't give interest in love. they shows good romance then suddenly turned that to nok-jhoks before to they realise their feelings. I'm upset about that. I started this OS because we must have to give credits which it deserves. IshRa did mistake once. they gave over credits to which doesn't deserve. those are shagun and subbu. then they ended with this contract marriage. so many things happened still they both didn't realise that creditable things are before them. they both have to understand this thing. this is the content of my is. that's why I made appa to talk with both about their feelings

wow...amazing update
so tym 4 ishu to realize...

will w8 for realization before romance

update soon next part...

--------part 7-----

Ishita entered to her room. She watched Raman photos hanging on wall.she took one photo and thought about how she misjudged him.


Fb(Appa telling she mistook him at initial)

Fb(how she blamed him as terrible husband and irresponsible father)

Fb(how she insulted him at TV station)

Fb(how she mistook him at DNA track)

Fb(Appa telling her that what she sees is real)

Fb(how he helped her and consoled her to return home)

Fb(how he fought with param for her)

Fb(her reaction when she got to know Raman resigned his post for her)

Fb(amma telling her that Raman is like lord. He cares everyone)

"Yes. Its right.I always loved ruhi, I cared about Mimi, I worried about simmi being single, I helped for Amma in an accident fiasco, now I trying to prove param as bad. Till today I didn't get care or worry about his past (she became guilty and disappointed)I should have been take care his life. But I didn't. I'm wrong. He's a nice person "

Fb (Appa telling her that then why didn't consummate this marriage)

"Yes, Appa. I'm going to do it. But will Raman accept me. I know he cares much. (after a paused moment)But is it because of love. No, it can't. He cares me because I'm better than shagun. It isn't his love on me but a care to Ishimaa "

@Raman office
Raman in his cabin. Got Fb about his morning conversation with Appa.

****Fb starts ******
Raman:I decided to rest life with her. But I won't do it suddenly. First I have to win her heart then I'll confess my love. Appa, please you have to help me in this.

Appa: yes Raman. I'll definitely help you. But don't
Act abnormally. She will get doubt. Win her heart as her Raavan Kumar

*****Fb ends*******

"You are right Appa. I'm going to win her heart as Raavan Kumar"

@iyer mansion

Mrs. Iyer: vishwa, I heard your conversation with Ishita. What did you do.

Appa:I just set a ground for two players and two umpires.

Amma: what? Who are they?

Appa: umpire Ishita for player Raman and umpire Raman for player Ishita. I just want both to realize they're in love. I hope and prays to god for good result.

Amma also got happy for this.

(NNow IshRa scene they both are in same place and telling samething to themselves )

Raman: JKR, you won my heart.
Ishita: initially I misjudged you
Raman: but you are so good at heart.
Ishita:today I got real meaning of love.
Raman: but I won't confess my love to you.
Ishita: instead I'll go to any extent to make you to love me.
Raman: I swear you that soon I'll make you to come to me and confess your love.
Ishita: I'll be waiting for that day.

This part ends with split screen with IshRa both where they both decided to do efforts to make opponent to confess instead of going to confess.