ISHRAYEIN :: Scenes on ISHRA Scene 4 pg 8 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Shimla532

Not understood ua parts. Each part is different. There is no continuation to the part. Last part is painful. Nw dz part is different

Originally posted by: Tulipkhanna

Awesome...

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

nice update

Originally posted by: shavi2311

very intrstng...

nice updtes...

very sweet nd romntic...

pm me fr nxt...

Originally posted by: JniISHRA83

Loved it😊

Originally posted by: Veeann

Really well written C. Especially loved the first one. Please give Him and Her other names, like Ram and Sita or something and continue your funfics.

Originally posted by: Mrs. SIR

Scene 1

HOLY! my screen's on fire!!!!

i did NOT see that coming... loving her attention - haye main marjawaan...

be it funfiction or fanfiction, the ending just gets to me!!! 😳😳 [and damn IF rules - i will miss the funfictions, oh so much!!!!! i wish they could change the rules but sigh... its all well... we'll make do with the pieces we got.. 😳 at least you'll carry on with your writing, as that's what matters.. 😃😃😃 cuz it's your writing that makes the scenarios 'perfect']

Scene 2

awww their mani fight... mani ko man banane lagi hai.. 🤣 mani is a gf though, she said so herself.. replaced mihika... 😆😆

Scene 3

ohh that was sad and brought back memories... that moment had left my brain (cuz clearly it left the CVs brains too... the way they just changed the whole damn story... but that was good, i loved it... raavan kumar in full raavan mode.. and JKR crying at his bitter words.. and he was crying too.. it was so sad.. that was a sad period in YHM... not that the current one is any better but this is just 'what the hell is wrong with the writers -- kinda sad'... loved the scene.. his jealousy, his hate for mani.. so visible...

Scene 4

DAMN IT mihir... leave them alone, will you... we just got to the good part... but C up till that part, it was oh so awesome... kaash aisa hota show main... chalo let me continue reading.. ahahaha i love this raman... we need our old raman back in the show.. his idea to go home and be called when the problem was sorted - GENIUS.. if only mahaan ishita would let that happen, ever! i love how mihir talks to them with the 'bhaiya bhabi' in the same flow, its cute! 😳 LOL shaadi se pehle wala dhamaka... 😆

loved 'em C, keep them coming.. 👏

Originally posted by: DiyaRathore

Just wow. No doubt we have so many better writers on the forum than those writers of the main show.

Originally posted by: RheaSh

Very nice.

Originally posted by: Shimla532

Not understood ua parts. Each part is different. There is no continuation to the part. Last part is painful. Nw dz part is different