My dream track (unnamed)finished - Page 8

Scene starts with Raman checking the security from window and he looks satisfied.

Raman then gets a call from Mihir about the proceedings of the crisis.Mihir had made contact with the organization and they have denied the fact that they were involved in it and Raman knew it as only one person of organization was involved in it.

Raman then calls his hime to speak to his daughter.

Raman "Mera Ruhi kyaa kar rahen hain?"

Ruhi is scared as she heard in news that some one is trying to kill her father.She heard it secretly.Then she is scared with house surrounded by police.Everyone except her parents are there.

Ruhi "Papa aap ghar kabh aaogey?"

Raman "Few days.Main jaroor aaonga."

Ruhi "Papa news mey kahan kee koi aapko maarney aarahan hain.Sach mey?"

Raman "Really?Tho Papa ko fir sey fighting karnaa padega naa.Yaad hain usss din papa ney kaisey gundon ko beating kiyya tha.Sab log bhag gaye they naa?"

His wife is also listening this as he kept it in speaker mode.

His Wife "Ruhi papa super man hain nnaa.Sabko handle karlega naa."

Ruhi "Han papa sabko beating karengey.Main wahan aaongee?"

Raman "Naheen beta.Yaha hum cleaning kar rahen hainn naa tumhey allergy ho jayegi .Tum wahen rahon."

Ruhi thinks it is true.

Ruhi "Papa merey cycle bhee "

Raman "Han tumhara cycle ,videogame sab cleaning ho rahan hain."

Then his wife speaks to her for few minutes and Ruhi is silent and thinking what her parents fed is true and then happily playing in house watching movies with Miss M and her slim slide.

Then Raman gets a call from Pathak as he nailed the case and now it is big issue in news and Minister was supposed to resign from ministry and to be arrested by next hearing.

Mrs Kaul did her job as financiers were also so close for defeat.Then most important resources of Ashok are terminated.

Then Raman told Mihika and Megha to proceed with their work.Risk is only for Raman but all his leitunent are free to strike ,

That is difference between Raman and Ashok .All people with Raman work with their will and can undergo any risk .But Ashok uses his money to buy their loyality.

But what Raman had was a brotherhood as every employee consider him as elder brother.

Then Ramancame to know from a source that minister has employed a killer for Raman and blame will go to other guy.

But Raman is unfazed with news as he already expected it.But you know who is scared.

"Raman aap itney light kaisey ley sakthey hain?Aapka jaan khatarey mey hain.Aur aap yahan chain sey so rahen hain?"

Raan who was lying on his bed calmly.

"Tym hee bathaon .Kyaa karo main .Mujhey kuch karnaa hain tho mujhey bahaar jaana hain.Kyaa main bahaar jaon?"

She holds his hand signing no.

"THo main yaheen rehkar kya karon.Main jho kar saktha hun main kar rahan hun.Bahaar merey liyen kayee log kaam kar rahen hain.Merey jaan bachaney key liyen."

"Dekhi main yahan iss ghar mey rehkar teen chaazey kar saktha hun.First TV dekhnaa second soona aur third tumpar dependent hain."

His wife "Raman it's serious ."

"Main bhee serious hun.Bass tumhey darr lag rahan hain.Mujhey tho sirf tum dikhaaye de rahen hon.Hum donon Akeley ek ghar mey aur koi nahen nahen hain humey disturb karney."

"Theek hain tumhey aur ek surprise de detha hun."

"Kyaa ?Abh firsey who baath math karnaa?"

"Nahen.Tumhey bathana nahee chahtha thaa.But safety first.Killer hummarey security mey hain."

She is hell shocked listening this and Raman understood that went too bad.

"Main mazaak kar rahan hun.Tum sach mey darr gayee.Oh God."

She hits him on his chest repeatedy for that crazy joke.

Raman holds her hand and forward for little romantic action in his mind thinking.

"Yaar isska kyaa haal hoga jab isey patha chaley kee who sach hain."

Both Raman and his wife are sleeping in their room after their second love in same day.Raman is enjoying company of his wife not considering the risk he is in.

Then it is shown that killer is trying to come close to house from his position near gate.But he is stopped by Raman's friend who came their personally to inspect protection of his friend.

Killer was sent hom e due to shift change .But there is a next day.But there is one more out on field send by minister still planning how to enter.

Scene starts with second killer trying to enter inside the house in disguise of a police he was helped by one corrupt officer .

He was waiting for chance to go inside the house.

Inside Raman and his wife are sleeping peacefully after their second love that day.Raman was alert of the situations outside.He just kept his gun near him for safety.

He was just pleased seing his wife sleaping peacefully.

Then around midnight the killer excuses himself for water and go inside but his steps are being watched by private guards.He don't have much chances to break the defence formed by Raman.He fixed everything.

Then killer enters the kitchen and tried secretly to enter Raman's room but it was foolish as Raman was already alert of him.As Raman mocked three rooms in similar to his room cofusing the killer and he was caught red handed by the guards.

Raman was silent but his wife was little happy .She is not aware that danger is not completely away.

Then in next day morning JKR was active and she started her day with scolding Raman as he din't let her wake up and holding her tightly.

Raman "Kyaa kaam hain baahar yaheen rahon naa."

"Raman tum utho aur ready ho jaon.Hum fir ghar jaa saktey hain.Unlogon ney ussey pakad liyan naa.hum ek baar ghar jaa saktey hain."

Raman " Aaj nahen aaj main tired hun mujhey bed rest kee jaroori hain."

"Kyaa huan aapko ." touching his head to check fever but he has some different kind of fever.

"Kuch naheen thoda dard ho rahan hain shoulder pey."

"Raman jhoot ."

"Tumhee check karon dard ho rahan hain."

"Raman aapkey jhoot mujhsey naheen .Aapkey naatak mujhey dikh rahan hain."

"Tho tumhey yeh bee patha hoga kee kyon kar rahan hun."

"Raman aap bhee naa.Bahut shameless ban rahen hain."

"Kyaa?Shameless?Tumney kall romantic bola aaj shameless bangayaa hun?"

"Kyaa hain kissey bhee cheez jyaada hone sey aisey hee hotha hain.Aap chup chap uthiyen aur ready ho jayiyen.Main naastha ready karthi hun."

Raman was left with no choice and he does as his wife told.She was relaxednow thinking the threat is gone but she is not aware the real threat is still to come.

Then after break fast comm.. comes there informing him that killer is not telling any thing.Then security is reduced as killer is caught.

Then even permission for guards is removed and only few are allowed.

So the security of house is reduces from 50 members to 10 members .But to our misfortune killer was also there .

He was among the five guards from agency while other five being normal cops.

Then minister was arrested by police responding to court verdict and Mrs Kaul is trying hard to maintain the grip on case .She was joined by pathak to support.

Our killer is shocked as security is reduced for Raman.It is what he wanted but he was confused on knowing a killer is caught .While he is safe and sound.

Then he gets a call."Main safe hun mujhey kuch nahen huan.Mujhey bhee samajh naheen aa rahan hain kee police ney kissey pakada."

"Raman ko merey alaawa kaun maarna chahtha hoga."

"Shaayad koi aur hoga jissney ussey dhokha khaaya hon."

"Han security kamm hain aaj kaam poora hoga."

Then inside house Raman was happy seing his wife calm with no tension on her face she assumed that threat is gone completely.

In Bhalla house security was reduced in same way but threat is not there.

Megha and Mihika started their work and they were able to get few cluse able enough to file complaint on that group but Raman wanted clear enough so that they cant escape.

Megha was finding out about that organization and trying to convey to them that Raman was not involved in that scam but they are adamant and filling complaint against Raman.But Neil and Mrs Kaul already prepared for this taking necessary precautions that Raman wont be arrested.

Then this part ends with killer trying his ways inside to kill Raman.

Then Raman was in his room along with his wife watchin news in TV over the fiasco .He is just satisfied with his wifes happiness and don't want to mess it up but he was ready to face the threat personally.

Ashok was safe in hospital and he came to know about all his sources shutting down slowly on Raman's game.

Then .

"Ramanaap yeh sabh kabsey plan kar raheny they."

"Ek mahiney sey.Main harr din issey mey laga huan thaa.Aur jitney chances hain sab pey nazar rakha tha.Fir mainey wait kiya chance key liyen .Mujhey patha tha ke mujhpar attack hogee issliyen yahan aagaya.But nice house naa."

Raman "Kitnaa accha hain ,tumhaara poora baath bahaar aagayya .Uss din tumney mujhey kitnaa dantha tha."

"Shut up Raman fir sey pooranaey baath."

"Kaisey karon tum karwaon naaapney moo sey."

"Raman aapko na koi sharam nahen hain ."

"Main tho tumhey baath karney key liyen bol rahan thaa.Tum kyaa samjhee "

She becomes silent and her heart beat rised sensing some danger.

confusion:

I dont know how many of you notice but .In all these part's our female lead's real name is no where mentioned correctly.I took it as challenge.But resetly I used 'Ishu' from Raman .But is it considered as challenge broken or is it acceptable considering the challenge.

Answer needed