Make it to me- An IshRa OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: Alu-

Result time😛

9/10 I can't give full marks you see😛😈😆

Okay firstly you are not bombarding the forum, everyone is loving your writing.

Comments:

I love your work, the conversation between the two was penned down perfectly. Every word you used, everything Raman said to her was something i really hope we see in the show. You perfectly showed how much they need each and other and what importance they hold. This is perfect and a realistic way of getting the two to understand and confess their feelings for the other.

Sai has some competition now, you are becoming a top notch student😛

Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni

vry nice

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

perfect...truly perfect..!!

Originally posted by: serendipity.

reserveddd

Hiii 😃

Look who's finally here?! 😎

YO. ME.

WOOHOOO CELEBRATIONSSS!! nai!? 🤔 okay :)

🤣

THIS. WAS BEAUTY. SHEER BEAUTY BY GOD.

Thankk youuu for this most awaited, long overdue SERIOUS genuine convo of Mr & Mrs Raman Bhalla! I loved the setting, that they were not in their boring dining room or the lame kitchen or even their bedroom. Im super glad they were at a nice setting, near water... the beautiful sea

Beautifully written Uz, youre awesome! ⭐️

I like how he directly started with "what about us" and Ishita fearing that he'd want space/break and maybe start a life without her or with someone else. Loved how Raman showed her her worth and made her believe & then together they made each other believe in themselves.

My favorite dialogue/part & line from this shot:

" I respect you so much and need you in my life. You have always stood shoulder to shoulder with me as my husband. I meant when I said that with you by my side I feel safe, secure. I know you will always be there for me. You have given me so much already and I sleep at night content that God has blessed me with you..."

aah! BEAUTIFUL! <3 Speaks volumes... in a nutshell! :$

Super work fav gal! 🤗

Originally posted by: sweetnoori

Hi dear..
Such a lovely os loved it .
Good job

Originally posted by: serendipity.

😳

Youre such an accha baccha man. PLEASE mere sar par haath phero! 😳

you not only LIKE but REPLY to all comments and look at me... adhoori OS toh word pe chodi hui hai hii, pichli OSes pe comments ka reply toh door ki baat i havent even 'LIKED' all comments 😳

Like... iss procrastination ko kya naam doon!? 😛 🤣

Seriously, i shud not just be named but given an award to, too! :P 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: CharmGal

Just wonderful 😳

Originally posted by: happenstance

Yes I'm a good girl learn something from me😛 I will have to teach you how to use 'like' button and 'quote' button too😆

When people take the time out to firstly read and then like and comment then the least I can do is reply😳😳

Originally posted by: --Sia--

beautiful

you do it everytime Uz