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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Nikita99
This OS is like you read my mind. I always want them to have a nice conversation which is above nok jhok. This was perfect. I was feeling butterflies in my stomach reading this OS. Kudos to you. I guess we are lucky that you've penned down your thoughts. Oh I am feeling so mushy ;).
Thanks for the pm.

Thanks Nikita, yeah I think pretty much most of us want there to be a real 'honest' conversation between them. Thank you for such kind comments 😊

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: lourel24
Loved it.Finally they have genuinely discussed they need each other more than sirf ruhi k liye.

Thank you Lourel😊

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: ABBY92
I liked how real the conversation was between Raman and Ishita. They both admitted that they want more from each other now but it's in the beginning stages and hence a confession would have been too forward. This was a perfect beginning to what is to come.

Yup Abby, I think tis the time to say that they want more, I want them to take things at the 'right' pace. Thank you so much for your comments 😊

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: v_ani_patel
Amazing... Conversation is so perfect...

Thanks alot 😳

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

wow, this was perfect⭐️
beautifully written hun👏
lovedd it😃
i disagree about dialogue writing not being your thing... each one was wonderful😃
my fav was raman's last line...(sigh) so romantic

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bulbul18

@bulbul18

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Vry well done yrr...
loved it

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Wooow!!! Dat was beautifully written OS... U made many of us sooo happy wid dis OS d much needed talk between both which though I wish bt doubt would happen in serial... The way u made der conversation start was lovely... Dey talked abt der fear, insecurities, wishes & hope... Dey strtd a new journey wid dis conversation... Dey were just ishita & Raman 2 wounded soul supporting each oder & falling for each oder... Totally loved it...

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Ash

@-RisingAsh-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

WOW !! nw this is something very beautiful n beyond PERFECT Uz !! I simply loved it.. U write amazingly dear.. Luved ur effort on their "wud be convo".. ❤️

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Beautiful OS...❤️

Loved the way it was penned down.. I loved the way how you portrayed their need for each other.. The respect, the admiration.. Their love for each other.. Everything about it was absolutely awesome..

Few of the parts were just overwhelming, in short, it was just simply beautiful.! Keep up the awesome work dear.. 😊 👏