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Princy

@princy48

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

amazing OS ..happenstance⭐️..

i hav read many of stories being offline 😆..they r jus awesum dear..😉

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome OS Dear!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

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Tanyaarora11

@Tanyaarora11

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Hey!
That was absolutely beautiful, even I personally feel that atleast some kind of conversation is required in their relationship, the useless banter and indefinite nok jhok somewhere overshadows the meaningful talk that I'd like them to share, atleast on some level regarding where they stand in their relationship, and that is the reason why I absolutely loved your OS! Brilliant work :)

Edited by Tanyaarora11 - 11 years ago

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-lake-

@-lake-

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

truely beautifully...
don't think you are bombarding forum... just think you are making ishra more livid with your skills

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Oishi Dasgupta

@Oishi_S

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

👏 👏

Edited by Oishi_sonu - 11 years ago

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Beautiful as usual.

Loved this!! Hope IshRa have that conversation soon.

Thanks Uz.😳

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dreamy-sa

@dreamy-sa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

perfect...a well needed conversation👏👏👏

u are a great writer👏😳

thanks for da pm

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@rickks

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Simple yet Strong...Beautifully written 😊

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sai

@sai14

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Twinny, Sorry i am late😭

First of all, you shouldn't be sorry for bombarding the forum because I love your OS's. If i had my way i would have you write one every day 😛

This is an awesome. This is a conversation that Ishra needs to have totally agree.. and i could totally see his playing out in the show and KP taking this to a whole new level. The way Raman expressed how he feels is just brilliant.

love the ending too.. they defiantly need a courtship period. it would be strange to see them move from no feelings to i love you all of a sudden..

Perfect oS twinny.

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sai

@sai14

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Alu-
Result time😛
9/10 I can't give full marks you see😛😈😆
Okay firstly you are not bombarding the forum, everyone is loving your writing.

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I love your work, the conversation between the two was penned down perfectly. Every word you used, everything Raman said to her was something i really hope we see in the show. You perfectly showed how much they need each and other and what importance they hold. This is perfect and a realistic way of getting the two to understand and confess their feelings for the other.

Sai has some competition now, you are becoming a top notch student😛

Haha Uz is giving some major competition LOL.. i can't beat my twinny 😛

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