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Sandysprings

@Sandysprings

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Amazing... Conversation is so perfect...

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Perfectt n beautiful update! Matured confession indirectly! Wahhh! Totally enjoyed reading the update. Keeppp bombarding with Ishra stories. I love ur writing. Plss pme whn u update any ishra stories!

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

res 😳

Uz this is perhaps the BEST thing I have read by you the simplicity of the piece the way they are having a conversation it just is so perfect

I absolutely love movies or shows that have a beach side conversation or any scene which takes place near a waterbody of any sorts

I was watching Tumhari Paakhi a few months back along with YHM until it was still good and made sense to me and it had a scene of AnKhi where they are near a river, they are dressed in black. He wants to tell her he never wanted her in his life and actually was planning to marry another woman when circumstances forced him to bring her into his life and almost even confesses it to her but she thinks he is bluffing as he would never leave her hand and it is one of the most amazing scenes I have witnessed in a recent TV show so much so I used it in the only VM I made on the couple

I cant find any upload of that scene so am just posting my VM this OS reminded me of the tranquility of that scene - the part I am taking about is the end of the vm 😳

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BmkHMikoHE[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

where is the love it button?😡 i almost didn't hit the like button cause that would be an insult to such a wonderful piece. i absolutely loved it! i'm not sure why you don't think your dialogue writing is sub par but from a reader's perspective it was 👏
please write more- i don't think anyone can complain about more of good stuff 😉😃

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Way to go... especially Raman asking about their ISHRA relationship...I don't know when that would happen in YHM or whether it would happen. Would love to see it the way you have penned it. Thanks.

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Wonderful. Awesome. Beautiful. Perfect. Amazing. Brilliant

Ok .. Let me go and find out more adjectives 😳.

Reserved.

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PenWings

@The.cds

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow, so nicely penned!👏

Ur descriptions made me connect with the situation vividly, btw

What's ur name?

A small correction if u don't mind,

In the end, is it full moon or new moon?

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Res

*** EDITED

I am on catch-up mode today Uz 😊

WOW... you didnt really need the disclaimer that dialogues aren't your thing. seriously, this story had a perfect flow. Their dialogues were more than fine!

I love the way you want them to discuss things, say out the things that we have been screaming here at IF... and not just acknowledge their feelings, but also share apprehensions...

AND I LOVE the promise in this line, how I wish you can follow this up with another story "" I think it's about time your husband courted you " "

beautiful Uz. and please do write more when you can (you must be getting ready for your holidays no???)

Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago

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Ami

@beebutterfly

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Loved it Uz! <3 I wish he does one day tell her how much she means to him in the same way you wrote.

You described beautifully that uncertainty they felt about each other's feelings, the fears of not being what the other wanted, all those things which could only be done away with that conversation. Beautiful!

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Beautifully written! The conversation was superbly penned, really lliked how you wrote it in a basic way which turned out pretty awesome to read. It was brilliant.

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