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Originally posted by: Ankita.M
Reserving for now. Want to give a lengthy comment for this one, so so well written. You have a way with words. Btw do you have any Index for your work? 😊
EditedI love any bit of fan fiction more than the usual when a person's feelings are expressed. Your entire One Shot was in the voice of Ishita over-viewing her husband and her feelings for him. It was really endearing and innocent, as innocent as Ishita herself is 😳.I loved reading about the changes in their relation. Especially how she compared what she felt when they married and now how long they've come. That she enjoys his company, his sense of humour and wit.Raman going with Ishita for Kulfi because she insisted, that's adorable. And how they fight over that one Kulfi even more adorable. There is deep understanding and friendship and a hint of love beginning to make place too. Every moment was so well described, I could imagine it playing out.Raman is indeed a man hard from exterior and soft from within, or as you said bitter sweet, like Neem and Shahad. 😊 And Ishita's acknowledgment of that was brilliant.What a wonderful, feel good piece.
Hey Ankita thank you so much
@bold - 😳 I feel we all do a little in retrospect from time to time in our lives, esp if we go through a roller-coaster if you may, and whether its growth or downhill, I have a fascination for comparisons so glad you liked this one
@red - he is a sweetheart for all his grumbling 😆 all his wife has to do is express her wish, and it would be done
@blue - thank you, yep the best kind of love is one where there is friendship and comfort along with a little healthy tiffs now and then
@pink - yep Neem and Shahad or like a coconut through and through 😳
Ishaani
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