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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa
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I was busy now aani...but when I saw ur story, my hands started itching to open the page😆
aww...the story was superb. I loved it 🤗

thanks Dreamy 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Beautifully written...
kulfi ke through kya philosophy bola Raman ne...awww such a cute romantic scene! loved it!

PS i love the title...suits so much and yes Raman is a combo of both sweet and sour! hot and spicy bhi! 😆

thanks Vidya 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: _Divya_
nice OS! 👏
i love reading ur OS !
keep writing

thanks Divya 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Awesome! Sweet and Sour ... wow! beautifully slotted to describe ISHRA's relationship or should I say any other relationships too...

thanks Jazzy, yep relationships that are lasting and meant to will always be a combo of sour and sweet, only one flavor is never good nor appealing in the long run 😳

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Nikita99
Ishra, rain and kulfi...PERFECT!

thanks Nikita 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Oishi_sonu
Ayyoo..stop making me fall in love with your writing.
I loved how Raman assured Ishu of her worth without saying anything directly. So, like Raman. 👏

thanks Oishi thats really sweet of you to say and it is so RKB to say things in subtext sometimes 😳

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: kritu17krits
wow amazingly written

thanks Kritu 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: lourel24
I don't have words to explain how much I loved it.Nowadays I eagerly search for ur works.hats off yaar.it was simply beautiful.

thanks Lourel 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Omg
Thats soo beautifully written
Loved the end...

thanks Dipsi 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Autumn.
Wow Amazing Read.
The quote is so true. Actions speaks louder than Words. Always!!

Title suits Raman to the T. He is perfect blend of Neem and Shahad.

Thank you for these thought process of Ishita. I was actually wondering in the show Raman is doing so much for Ishu, taking care of her since picnic track & now with fracture. Was wanting show Ishu to reflect on it much & think. But only a line or two was shown. So this piece really is wonderful.

thanks A 😊

@bold - of course they do, you always can know the real intentions of a person by the way they act rather than what they speak after all

@red - I heard this song after ages on the day I wrote this and before it had even reached midway all I could think of was Raman on hearing it 😆

@blue - Ishu sadly seems to have been given a backseat in the show, while I am happy a male lead has so much attention on him for a change on an Indian show, I wish they would focus on both of them equally