Kabhi Neem Neem, Kabhi Shahad Shahad - IshRa OS

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

this is simply beautiful

d way u penned ishitas emotions was mind blowing
n ramans care for ishita ...awww...so sweet Raman
n d last dialogue so much meaning was hide in that ...
loved it 😊

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@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

aah aani...this ws so so soo good..!! loved loved the way u explained this song for Raman frm ishu's pov...hw u bought subbu angle..evrythin ws perfect..!! loved it..!!

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

ur title brought a smile on my face...my fav song ..can never get bored of it...and GOD knows how many times i remembered Raman listening to every line of it...

loved ur quote too...

title and quote both r so apt for Raman...

as usual superb Aani... very beautifully written ...

loved it...

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WittyFlair

@WittyFlair

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That was very nicely written!

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.Ranju.

@.Ranju.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

This is awesome Aani. Hope to see such scene in show too. Would love to see Divyanka's expressions thinking about her Ram/Ravan Kumar. Very nice and apt title 😃

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

wow this is lovely one shot 👏

rain, kulfi, raman and ishita

love to read ishita thoughts for raman. Its so lovely that he went out for her in the middle of heavy raining night to buy kulfi for her.

Neem and shahad, perfect depiction of Raman and subbu characters.

I love ishita smartness for urging raman to taste her icecream mentioning subbu, jealousy always work.

The end was cute.

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Arooj

@Arooj.M

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

It's a good thing I love kulfi then 😉
Amazing OS Aani! Loved them sharing the kulfi!

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

This one was such a joy ride Aani! I loved reading every single bit except one thing. How can you let Raman hate people who don't like Kulfi? I hate Kulfi. Not fair. Not fair, at all.😭😆

Jokes apart, this song is perfect for our darling Raman. I am humming it a lot these days and each time I think of only him. Thank you for once again reminding me why I love the song.😳

You know, if you try to sit and put Raman in words, it is very difficult. The man has so many quirks, if you will, that you cannot define him and that is what makes him special.

As a couple, Ishita and Raman are special because they make ordinary seem beautiful. Nothing extra ordinary happens in their life. They are two regular individuals with a routine life. Yet there is magic in that routine. I was reading " To Kill A Mocking Bird", yesterday and there was this one sentence that I felt fits here. " With him, life was routine; without him, life was unbearable." I don't know if you agree with it but I was reminded of this reading your story.

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

This was very well written and just so sweet!

Loved seeing Ishita's feeling...and our Raman is a sweetheart under all of that neem!

Looking forward to what you come up with next.