Kabhi Neem Neem, Kabhi Shahad Shahad - IshRa OS

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

I liked how the whole OS was about how Ishita's opinion on Raman has changed from then to now and how their relatiomship has come to this comfortable point that none of them ever thought would be possible.

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Jyoe

@Jyoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

oh aaani!!!

Rains, Kulfi, long drive, Raman & Ishita - Perfect!

Thank you and you make me fall in love everytime with your writing..the same way Raman makes me fall in love with his antics!😆

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smilydear

@smilydear

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Awesome ... Can't image a Kulfi date can be so romantic ...

You pen down all the emotions of Ishita very beautifully ...

Very well said , I have never heard a beautiful definition of a KULFI ... And how you related that with a human emotion . Loved it ...

"Ishita, I never like or trust people who hate kulfis."

"Because, such people aren't capable of appreciating a good thing, nor do they know how to do it. And that in my opinion makes those people unworthy of any consideration."

I love the way you describe Subbu --->

He had been everything she thought she wanted and nothing that turned out to be the one she needed in the end after all.

I love the caring way of Raavan kumar ...

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Isma

@Isma_A

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Such a lovely read, Aani! I loved hearing Ishita's voice and seeing her content and happiness, especially through the Subbu comparison and angle, which you illustrated so well! I can't help but be slightly partial to Raman, though (kya karoon 😆), with his dialogues and actions surrounding eating/liking kulfi being all quality over quantity, just uff uff uff.

I think I've now edited and read all of your recent work except the SS. I'm getting to that next, I promise. 😆 😛

Edited by Isma_A - 11 years ago

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Been quite busy Aani ... just got back and am catching up on work. But this is the first work I caught up with ... coz you wrote it and coz of its title. I just love this song 😊.

Awww... Raman making the effort to take her out for a kulfi while keeping his grumpy self was so cute. Especially loved the last part where Raman expresses his disgust and displeasure with the kind of man Subbu was. Loved it :)

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

awww this was soo romantic
i loved it😃
beautifully written, as always👏

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Whoa Aani! That quote in the beginning was superb.
Reading that and i was like chalo ready steady poo. Something brilliant is coming up!😃

What a piece girl! Its absolutely sweet and adorable.😊
A scene which is imaginary and yet completely plausible. I do like the trend of thoughts in that skull of yours!😃😆

Coming to the comparison between Subbu and Raman. I would say all my life i have stuck to that precept - "Actions speak louder than words!"
Its better to button one's lip rather than uttering ostentatious sweet nothings.

People feel by sweetening their tongue with pretentious terms they can win hearts. Some fall prey to that. Ishita also did because she was a teen then. Life seems like a fairy tale when we are 16.

Its always a treat to read a IshRa conversation. Especially in this one. Those subtleties has a habit of leaving an impact you know.

Thank you for such a work Aani. Sorry for being so damn late. Forgive me buddy!
Thanks a ton for the PM too.🤗

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--Megha--

@--Megha--

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
Author' note:
I just cant seem to stop myself here. good lord, so this one comes to me because I was hearing the song that inspired the title and the content of this piece - Kabhi Neem Neem, Kabhi Shahad Shahad from Yuva... the song is SO Raman!

Now half of this one came to me courtesy of the song and the latter half basically has just written itself; and I don't know how cohesive or coherent it is.

The workings of the right hemisphere of the brain are beyond the logistics of the left one!

But putting it out here anyways.

NOT PROOFREAD.

Wow m the 100th one to like this 😆

Great post dear ... 😊 u've made Kulfi sound Hot by writing this piece on Ishra ...

U've described Ishita's past n present so well 😆 n that song is so apt ...

Life's like that bag of mixed emotions sometimes bitter or sometimes sweet ...

😳

Life wud b so boring if it was not so ... If we had too much of sweetness we'd die of diabetes 😆

I like the way u put Ishra romance in such a simple n sweet manner it's like savouring ur favorite dish taking ur sweet time enjoying while having it and then missing it once u've gobbled (although u've had it slow) it up 👏 😆

The current phase in Ishra life is so Gud to watch ... Whatever they do ... They appear so cute
😳 I just wish they stay like this all their life ...

Long story short ...

It is not a lack of love, but a lack of friendship that makes unhappy marriages.
-Friedrich Nietzsche

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: rutu83
i loved it!
so after coming back from busy office day, raman gets ready to go for a kulfi run in the middle of the rainy night because... ishita was bored---😃
he's a gone case. totally and completely head over heels 😆 and it's so sweet to see the quote fits here so well 👏
the kulfi scene was a treat. rereading it, it seemed that kulfi was a synonym for them in each other's life at points. maybe i'm reading too much into it 😳 eitherway, i agree with raman- who doesn't like kulfi?! though i'll take malai over elaichi any day 😛 i actually thought about this and i know not ONE person that doesn't like kulfi. in fact, there's even one that's lactose intolerant but makes an exception for kulfi 😆

thanks Rutu

@bold - that he is 😆

@red - no it wasn't before, but now is... he indirectly says she deserved better than Subu and shared that kulfi because .. to make it their thing now - something that belongs to them 😳

@blue - am a malai person too but remembered the omelette thing from accident track and so used it 😳