Ecstasy - IshRa Drabble

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Isma

@Isma_A

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

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Aani, this was UHHMAAAZZZINNNGGG. BUT BUT BUT, jab tumhari asliyat saamne aa gayi, I now consider this only a teaser. 🤣🤣😛 Poetry is my mode of writing, too, and this was just SO MUCH LOVE, and SO MUCH SEXY. I need an OS now. You can't even pretend you can't write that genre. I KNOW THE TRUTH NOW. 🤣😉

Beautiful, Aani!!

Edited by Isma_A - 11 years ago

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divya17.8

@divya17.8

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Beautifully written.. 👏

so passionate...😳

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luvsagar

@luvsagar

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Aani,

Absolutely superb! Kash yeh Raman ki inner feelings ho SR ke baad...

And can't wait for the scene that inspired this beautiful piece of yours!!!

Nina

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

I'm not much of a poem person but this was beautiful and sensual at the same time, so amazing job on nailing what you wanted to convey to us.

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Wow Aani..absolutely beautiful with the perfect amount of passion!!!☺️

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.Ranju.

@.Ranju.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow this is superb Aani😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: fraser
beautifully penned...
superb..
seriously i already write on your comment box that m not much in this show but now sometime i watch... but just to read your work i nbeed to come in this forum..
if you have a index do scrap me it will be helpful and if you send pms do add me.. its a request..
lots of love...
fraser...

thanks a lot dear that's really sweet of ya 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: shalu79
Wow Beautiful Anni👏
got to see passionate side of you😳😉
Beautifully written😊
But IshRa ke liye ab Delhi bahut door hain😆
hope Raman will think this after their SR

thanks Shalu and LOL I know its a long way for IshRa... I didn't actually pen this with a particular couple in mind... but once it was done I posted it here cos this is the only show I follow currently and of course once the words were there - I couldn't help but think damn that's IshRa 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode
haayyeee anni, I can't give any adjective for what you have written ☺️
My eyes could not roll, just opened and just kept starring at your words , i feel this motivation is coming from swabbing 😛 i can be wrong though because am so much waiting for this scene to come up 🤣
Your teeth and nails raked on my body

As I lose myself in the wet crevice

Of your fiery alter
this is jaw dropping part ☺️ finally released all tension that occurred since long time ☺️ am just dead 🤢🤢🤢

Thanks Zene and nope the motivation isn't from the swabbing scene LOL I dont think it would go beyond hands, face and maybe slightly her hands and feet... this was ahem inspired by something else ☺️